After School Lewd Club

Here's a quick review for a game I spent maybe 30 mins on: Pros: - The girl is very cute. - Some of the music was kinda bangin' (mainly the RPS battle theme) Cons: - RPGMaker slop gameplay that just wastes time - Plot is both shallow and contrived, and as a result the corruption/NTR aspect is very weak. Especially on the corruption side, they just skip straight to sex in the first scene. Wasted potential IMO. - Shitty RPS minigame that wastes more time AND makes the plot EVEN MORE CONTRIVED (it literally would have played better if they just outright kidnapped the FMC's "boyfriend". Instead it just makes the FMC look like a fucking idiot) - There's a noticeable amount of art inconsistency (different underwear colors on the same day, different skin tones & hair textures in different poses, etc). - No animations; instead you get to see the same images/poses appear like 50 different times in a single scene. I'll add that I only got through the first scene, but I had my fill. I'd only recommend this if you REALLY like the look of the girl.

So I tried playing After School Lewd Club [v1.1] by Fantasy Factory. There's a bunch of text in this rating. I just had to point out the Olympic-level mental gymnastics used to make this story stick together. The game is marred by poor writing, no way to skip text, boring art, and a protagonist who could just say "no" and turn around at basically every single step on this stupid journey of a story but still didn't. It was honestly just a waste of time playing this game. If you want to skip all the text, you can read the short version at the bottom. In the game you play as Yui Kinase, a student council president... which, as you may know in adult games, is basically code for someone who does all sorts of mental gymnastics to explain their stupid decisions. Anyway. The story itself isn't really anything to talk about. It does have some decisions, but honestly much of it is very, very forced and exceptionally stupid to the point where the choices can't really be explained from a logical standpoint. Yes, it's an adult game and the story must go on, but perhaps it could be just a tiny bit more believable? I will now explain the two story branches I found: I've seen two branches, and you'll easily hit the first one by accident. The first involves the student council chairman, who will try to abduct you. At one point the council chairman will call you to the council room. To see how to go into / avoid that storyline: Spoiler He will then profess his love to you. You get 2 responses: hesitate or outright rejection. Hesitating will see him kiss and drug you. The story immediately changes to a slave story. How he managed to drag an unconscious Yui out of the school in plain daylight is not explained. Then you appear in his basement where he explains that his dad is the governor and that he will stop the police investigation etc. Either way, the chairman will then try to impregnate you. The unfortunate part with this storyline is that you get no say in it. It would be really cool if you could either decide to accept this fate or try to escape by fooling him somehow. Unfortunately, these options are not presented. ------------ Second branch In the second story branch, we reject the chairman and proceed with finding the lewd club. The lewd club is basically caught red-handed, and Yui tells them that their gimmick is up and that they'll be reported. At that point the leader of the lewd club asks us for a rock-paper-scissors fight, which Yui—for whatever reason—accepts. Winning this will cause a game-over and a "happy ending" or whatever. Losing means that he'll challenge us to a strip rock-paper-scissors game. Winning that—you guessed it—the lewd club is disbanded, reported, and it's game over. Oh, and the lewd club member has two conditions: first, that she must join the lewd club if she loses, and second, that they'll rape her if she loses. This is under threat of hurting her friend... but still. She could've easily escaped and told... everybody? Also, when she loses and is about to be raped, you can still try to escape... but when you do, it says "as student council president I can't go back on my promises." Yeah, okay then. IMO it's a mistake to have the story contingent on the player not winning and not even having a backup plan for it—especially when it's random like this. I managed to win despite trying to lose, even though I only picked rock the whole time. At the end of the school day the protagonist goes home. It would be really nice to have different options at home too. These could be hidden in various ways—or not. Like taking birth control pills, etc. Because the protagonist is very afraid of getting impregnated, but she doesn't take any actions to prevent it. Hell, she doesn't even really try to get out of the lewd club again except through the rock-paper-scissors game. Yeah, I understand that her friend is under threat, but that's only that one time. The rest of the time she goes to the club willingly, simply because she's told to and because they got some sex tapes of her. But it just seems dumb giving them even more sex tapes to blackmail you with, lol. Here's the short version: The Good: Pretty protagonist and school setting The In-between The rock-paper-scissor game is bad by design, but its nice with strip element of the game. It would be even more nice if I could decide the order of clothes to take off. It would be nice if the protagonist was able to think by for intance taking birth control pills or something like that when she's home. But not many games would stretch that far. The Bad Poor writing - and too much text. Just get on with it when its so generic and not particularly important to the story Few decisions and their impact isn't always clear (like with the first story branch) Winning some of the rock-paper-scissor games = gameover which is just poorly made Boring art and repetetive sex-scene

I loved this game, it has Great Content I love the Strip Elements and the pacing is nice, it does suffer from some randomness requiring reloads or specific play to get to certain endings and isa bit of a pain in that way But I loved the actual Content.

If I could put zero, I would put it here. The minigames is one of the worst things ever. If you win its gameover. VN worst part is lack of sensible gameplay or choice, - it just reading text through. RPGM worst part is senseless running around, and outdated interface. Well, this game combines both downsides effectively, with nothing positive. You have a VN lack of gameplay in RPGM engine. To top it the story does not even remotely tries to make any sense and there is no skip option for text. Corruption tag does not belong to this game. In one ending she goes to have sex immediately after losing game, in another she gets abducted and forced, there is no corruption in between.

It's alright. As other users have said, lack of gallery and skip button kind of kills the replayability. I mean, yeah you could just hold down the 'next' button but that's pretty slow in comparison. Not to mention there's scenes which happen after the rock-paper-scissors game, which is a bother to get past even with the cheat tool that fixes outcomes. Also, you have you use the tool before you enter dialog which is annoying. The art's cute though, I guess. Also if you're here for pregnancy, it kind of just skips to the end after impregnation. Or at least that's how it was on the ending I got, because it was too bothersome to try out the other endings.

the game feels like a half finished product. you still have "items", "equipment" etc etc. which does absolutely nothing. its basically just a visual novel, made with RPGM. you can feel that this is a low budget production. you walk around and you trigger the scenes and thats about it.

Rev @ After School Lewd Club [v1.1] Art's fine technically but underwhelming in subject matter (I like tits. This is not that.) Writing has been done. Scenario, narrative and characters are all rehashes. The only notable aspect is how abrupt the porn starts. It's We Be Bored Bored Bored And Then There's Porn levels of nonsense. The porn has the same issue I had with the art; it's fine while silent in a gallery but the dialog as written comes off as too rapey for me. The whole affair feels like a short small tree of overlong game overs whose length is needlessly padded by the lack of a Skip Dialog function. TLDR: Kinda feels like we're goin' on to a watchlist somewhere.