Burning Secrets

Exceptional well done for a first release with a lot of attention to detail. You live through the first day... characters are introduced, a little mystery added, some lewd scenes are included and the stage is set for the story to unfold. English is good, a few minor errors here and there but no MTL or the like. I especially liked the special frame the author placed around his dream / fantasy scenes, gives it a nice touch. Personally, I would remove the lewd Mom scenes and replace them with the aunt to keep up the tension at this very early phase, but that's just me. No sissification on that first day although you can see (and make one choice regarding) the story paths. Overall I recommend playing this even at this early stage.