Chasing Desires

From my first glimpse of this game, I was captivated. The mother, teacher, widow, and caregiver are well-designed. I must admit that I explored the various narrative paths available, and in general, the routes related to the mother's relationships were interesting and well-developed. However, my main criticism lies with the adult scenes, which I consider somewhat limited. I understand that the game has great potential and that perhaps the intention was not to delve too deeply into this aspect in order to lengthen the experience or better develop other elements, but I still feel they could have been more elaborate. From my perspective, a significant improvement would be to focus on a path that delves deeper into the stories of the secondary characters and, especially, their relationship with the protagonist's mother. This would not only enrich the overall narrative but also give more emotional weight to the player's events and decisions. As a fan of NTR (Netorare Trigger), I can say that, although I enjoyed the game, I was left with a feeling of dissatisfaction regarding the adult scenes. My biggest issue with them is their length: they're too short and leave the impression that they could have offered so much more. Despite these observations, I think you've done a great job. The effort and dedication you put into the project are evident, and I sincerely appreciate it. I wish you much success and look forward to future improvements or projects.

I don't understand the complaints about the game's graphics; they are simply beautiful and well-made, nothing to criticize. But there's something impossible to ignore: the protagonist's story with his mother. The game simply forgets about his girlfriend and focuses only on his fetish for multiple men. Nothing against those who like it, but the game doesn't develop other characters or the protagonist's relationships; it focuses only on him and his fetish for multiple men with his mother.

Everything in this game is very low quality. The graphics, the scenes, the story... very basic English, with writing and scene development at the same level as English. Bad scenes, bad lighting, and character design that is very basic both graphically and in terms of personality. Objects that appear in scenes sometimes overlap, and the character models change from one update to another: suddenly the girlfriend goes from being a brunette to a blonde, with no explanation why. If the model changes... why bother remaking the scenes?, the developer must have thought. A good NTR game shows everything without showing anything (curtains, etc.); in this game, even when the developer tries to show everything, hevshows absolutely nothing due to bad camera angles and other unfortunate choices. Sometimes there are bugs because the image that was supposed to appear simply does not show up, which indicates that the developer does not play his own game. Or worse still, he does, he sees the flaws, and he doesn't care. And on one occasion, the axes of an object are visible in an image; the developer forgot to disable the "axis" icon or did not take a proper rendered screenshot. It is clear that the developer does not know how to use HS2. I could go on with more flaws of what the developer calls a "game," like the confusion caused by the text in some choices: when the text screams NTR, the option that actually gives NTR points is written in such a way that, according to the text, you should not get NTR points. In short: this game is trash with no quality. Only the typical "Oh, it's an NTR game!" guy could like it.

The story doesn't make sense, feels like they in asia somewhere, but the mc and his friend going play for german team, shouldn't they move to germany? The graphics are bad, the lightning feels off at certain places. The characters are not consistent, gf changes from tomboy brunette to prom queen blond, the neighbours son looks one moment asian and next moment dark skinned african, grandpa get different models too. There are choices but there is no real impact, it just let you watch ntr or don't.

[v0.2] This is pretty awful. I've seen worse, but not by much lol. Every aspect of this VN just screams amateur and low skill. At the very least the English is alright. But the story is so fucking boring to read through. There is some very basic events like going to school, going to play basketball with friends, watching movies. And in between those, there are occasionally some Q&A sessions randomly. Like you sit down to talk to people about various topics, but they have almost nothing interesting to say about it. It's almost like, "How are you?" "I'm fine, thank you." Anyways, the NTR is basically strictly first person thing from the MC's eyes. But the dev has zero skill in crafting scenes using this mystery NTR method. It's just super boring and not erotic in the least. At one point, the story goes completely off the rails randomly, ending up with the mom going off with grandpa and best friend to her room. Then MC goes there to check on them, and he sees her literally banging both of them. The render shows him at the doorway looking in, with no obstruction. He is literally looking directly at them. And the whole time, he's going, "What's happening? What's that noise? Etc etc." That's where I deleted the game. Oh, and the fucking music. I've never heard a more garbage music track than this one from any VN that I've played. It's extremely grating and just plays on loop the entire time, except for the times when an animation is playing, and then it goes right back to playing that horrible track. If you mute the music, you also mute the animation sounds, so dev couldn't even get that right.

The game feels pretty standard, following the usual style of Ren’Py projects. I think the character designs are quite good, and the overall presentation works well. My main issue is that there are many scenes and situations that happen off-screen, so you lose part of the context. A lot of moments are shown only from the protagonist’s point of view, but I’d really like to see them from the girl’s perspective as well. For example, the scene with the old man and your mother, or the one with your girlfriend at the cinema — those would hit much harder if we could actually see what happens instead of just hearing about it