Deep City & MILFs Gaijin

Version 0.01 reviewed Pretty decent prologue about a domineering female executive who is forced to hire a young foreigner (Gaijin) against her will. Pros: 1- Short, but fairly well written story. There is a lot of dialogue but it held my interest. 2- I dislike HS, but the female MILF executive was hot. 3- Nice renders and settings. 4- Culturally authentic. This brought back memories of my many visits to Japan. Cons: 1- Sex scenes blocked via paywall. A real shame. 2-The male Gaijin is supposed to be Italian but looks Japanese. Another reason why I dislike HS. 3- The exec falls for the new hire a bit too quickly. Drunk or not, the sex scene starts too early. This could have been dragged out a bit. 4- The grammar is iffy and could use a good proof reading to maximize the effectiveness of the story. Final thoughts- Pretty good story, but the sex/romance escalates a little too quickly between the female exec and the Gaijin. The dialogue could also be cut down some as it's a bit long winded. The addition of a paywall pretty much ruins it for those who want to see the good stuff. Why bother going through all this dialogue and then be shut out right when the payoff is about to cum, come? The dev has talent. Good luck!