Jack's Story

Jack's Story [v0.1c] Plot structure (story/events/writing) - A Typical corruption/ voyeurism story is not original but a staple of AVNs. The story progression is... progressing. The current tags are accurate. A few grammatical errors, misspellings. Roughly 20 minutes of play time as of [v0.1c]. I'm a stickler for matching dialogue with scenes; this game does pretty well, with only one issue I noticed. Graphics—Standard DAZ, a bit grainy at times. The models are okay, and they are not common Genesis models. There is... one semi-animation. Gameplay—It's Renpy. It plays fine. The GUI, saves, and loads are good. There are no issues with Playability or Performance. There is no music at the moment. Final words - The DEMO release was somewhat premature and rough around the edges, but [v0.1c] starts filling out the story and softening the edges. There are some adult scenes, but too short for fun time. If you want to fap you're going to have to wait. Porn logic is present. I recommend this game. I'm giving it 3 stars because more content is sparse per update, and image quality needs to be improved. It's good that the developer is active here. I'm sure the game will improve with each update, and I will up my score if needed. (Ignore the previous review; those issues are not present now, and it's the reason reviews should not be allowed on demos.)(PTGAD)

ORIGINAL I do not understand why the Dev released this yet. There is no choices, no interesting storyline, and a single lewd of a cougar. This is very generic & boring. There is no music or audio either yet. This is beyond early to post anything. Its a handful of renders using generic DAZ Assets and not much else here. Don't waste your time yet. In the future it might turn into something but its too early to even be posting it yet EDIT: Still a very typical Incest/Voyeur AVN, improvement is extremely minimal but there is now more than just a handful of slides.