Kashidashi Kanojo, Shiori no "Netorase" Houkoku -Binkan Joshikousei to Zetsurin Osananajimi-

Overall vote: 7.5 Despite being an high vote i've got 3 bad things to say about this one, to which "only one" is relevant to my rating that i gave this game. 1) The bad TL REALLY bumps down the experience of reading this. Overall it's a good TL but there are problems ... noticed some typos, the MC name wrongly pronunced here and there and some sentences cut short. This is not small amount of a problem of about 5-6 sentences, THE WHOLE SCRIPT IS FILLED WITH THESE ISSUES. This one didn't went through the QC phase. Which it's not the fault of the game per se, reason why this doesn't affect my voting ... HOWEVER IF I WERE TO COUNT THIS ON MY RATING OF THE GAME THEN IT WOULD BE GOING DOWN A LOT! 2) It's technical and it's regarding a bug in the save / load department. If you're not someone like me that saves a lot then you didn't even encountered this problem why? Cause all of your saves were on the first default page ... if you save a lot then you're gonna use up multiple pages and when changing pages in this game you are gonna encounter multiple bugs variating from error messages to game freezing / crashing. However this is just a technical issue and it sure as hell can't be impacting my vote. 3) Third and only reason that is relevant is that there's a clear "missing" part in the plot. Anyone noticed that in between the third and fourth "lending" there's a sense of things taking a 180, being too fast, something clearly missing? I do get that the writer wanted to keep this a standard 4 "lending" sessions that the classics had but here is in my opinion the only real flaw of a otherwise really great game. I would much rather the author cut out / lower a couple of sex scenes and put more plot in between the 3rd and the 4th lending cause there's a clear plot hole here ...

It's very lacking compared to other Atelier sakura games, it felt short unless you played the extras. If I were to rate it, it's pretty mid in terms of NTR, not enough scenes that humiliates the MC. The NTR felt kind of forced, just for the sake of the NTR the MC suddenly just has an NTR fetish for no apparent reason other than that he was fantasizing about it, no backstory on his fetish whatsoever, and he just then tries to talk the girl into cucking him for the sake of his fetish and the girl conveniently agrees with only a small push despite her hesistance and apparent dislike of cheating. It's like saying: "Yeah my boyfriend wants to do it and he's fine with it, and I just so happened to fantasize about it, so might as well do it." The ending was pretty anticlimactic, I wish it had more of an impact rather than just going on with their everyday lives. Overall, it felt to me like a cookie cutter NTR VN, not that bad but not that good either. just average.