Oops that... that wasn't in the script

v1 I enjoyed the humor and the easy flow of the game. You can't see your stats to the end of the game. Put of that humor is random sex scenes. It's entertaining to say the least, but story wise not really cohesive like working toward marrying this goddess. The roommate shown jumping multiple times seemed a tad lazy. Scenes say she's in a towel but you don't see it. Some cg in daz looks bad, but the other model of her for example jumping look great. So if anything cg is inconsistent. The guys hand is cut off like an invisible wall, like a panel in a comic, but the background is consistent.....so just random pasting mc on the background? Overall i liked it for the humor, and to be a funny little thing that did not take itself too serious compared to all the other drama avns out there. Most people will hate this title though...and it's a fast play...very fast.

Sex scenes popping randomly Game consist in less that 10 "scenes" ( understand static blurry background ) wit static peoplein front of it The image doesn't even shows what the text says : The dialog says the user is in pajamas, but is fully clothed in the image. Same when the girl is "wrapped in a towel" ( as the dialog says ) ( I even think that, except the sex scenes,characters only have one set of clothing ) Tries to be funny but is just boring, and the narrator speaks more than the main character.

This is pure and utter trash. I don't even see the point in evaluating any aspects of this creation. It's not funny, not entertaining, and the only thing I felt was a sense of shame for deciding to watch it based on the description.

VERSION: v1.0 SUMMARY: So far, so annoying and kinda boring. RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Models look good, proportions and such look decent Writing is good, structured and reads well, BUT see Cons and Comments Good looking animations and movements, BUT See Cons and comments While much of the AVN is not really good, its story is simple, sincere and sweet (at least based on my playthrough), so points for options. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Hazy, grainy renders. I am not really a fan of this style. Too much narrating, the narrator is self-imposing and annoying, adding the "witty" remarks "jokes" and trying to sketch their idea with text walls to the player rather than let it naturally unfold. Writing is all over the place and again, is that by design or lack of? Minimalist renders, the characters all stay and look the same despite the descriptions of how they look changing, it feels like a cheap out. Random sex animations during dialogue that make no sense, is the MC imagining it, could it be done any worse? FML No sounds of any kind Random and vanilla sex "dreams" during dialogue is jarring and annoying. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) The developers long monologue at the start, yes I called it that, is unnecessary, while I can appreciate the candor and such, its not needed and honestly not advisable to bog readers down with things that really don't affect the AVN plot. That intro part up till naming the MC (and beyond) could (and should )have been done in 1/3 or less of the text. The fact that the developer takes issue with people that skip text walls is a "you" problem, most of us do not like pointless droning on or try-hard humour, its cute the first time then it gets annoying fast. There is a reason I do not like flim grain or such effects in games, and I do not like them in AVNs either. Give me clear renders so I dont feel like im looking at my screen while half asleep. The narrators blatant self imposed behaviour is annying as fk, its unwelcome and the smug avatar (wouldn't be surprised if this is actually the narrator IRL) being in almost every render is really immersion breaking and frustrating and speaks to the egocentric nature of the narrator more than anything. I am still torn between is the AVN designed to have an annoying narrator or does the developer feel the AVN requires it so they can control every aspect and thought the player has? Either-way I can't stand it. There is no 3rd person, this narrator character must GTFO. By the end of my playthrough I felt that the developer was just taking the piss and created this AVN to troll the players, trying to create a completely different narrative to the way AVNs are normally told, in that case, well done, mission accomplished, now i can ignore you and your games in the future. TLDR: An AVN that prides itself on witty retorts, jokes, humour and illogical chaos. If that is your thing stay tuned. There is probably 2/3 if not more narrating than characters actually talking. I am not sure WTF this developer was trying to do, but they created something awkward and jarring here that was totally not needed and did not deliver on whatever they intended IMO. The so called "chaos" that ensues is nothing exceptional and the "tender" playthrough is a bit more endearing but its really a boring AVN IMO.