Reclaim

I think it’s a great start—very sexy female characters, especially Alice, and a really original story. I’m curious to see how the NTR develops, but so far I’m loving it. The art style and atmosphere are also really promising, and I’m excited to see where it goes next.

The story feels quite fresh, and the female cast is really appealing—the mother stands out the most in my opinion. It’s a strong first impression overall. I’m interested to see how the NTR side is handled as things progress, but for now I’m really enjoying it. The presentation and tone are also working well. I also think adding the NTR tag would help, since most of the criticism seems to come from that missing expectation.

Dev literally misleading everyone. the renders (girls) are great, some very hot babes. the premise of "RECLAIM"... broo... there's nothing to reclaim here, just giving, be that your fiance, your family, apparently you're just gonna be a cuck in the game. The MC tries to put out an aura of being Dominand, but he folds in the next scene when his brightest idea, is to offer his fiance to his dad.. pure shitshow, and misleading. now, if you're a NTR boy, this probably is up your alley.. story 1/10 Models 8/10 rating: 1 for the misleading not only title, but also the description of the game, wich leads you to belive we got a man here, going to reclaim his "family" or whatever.

Ryan is here to 'reclaim' what is rightfully his, to start off i dont understamd why it is rightfully his. dev does not do a good job at explaining why we should believe mc's dad is evil and why the mc should reclaim whatever he wants to. Adding more context should help us understand. For a demo this was very brief in terms of dialogue. THE CHARACTERS look really good. Alice is really hot and I really like the revealing clothing for her. Outfits enhance the female characters assests and makes them look much hotter. I think this type of clothing needs to remain consistent as we progress. NTS would do better in this game instead of ntr because the mc is permitting alice and nts long term would be more consistent, although few ntr scenes here and there would make sense aswell because alice is using her sexuality more than anything and cheating happens in this type of plot Only so much i can say for the demo Good luck dev and keep progressing the game i want to see more of your vn Reclaim.

So the game's visuals are good not gonna lie...the ai is tolerable....I am rating this one star because the choice doesn't really Matter in the end....I like some dominant sharing scene in my games but I hate cheating/ntr to the core...l play avn because each choice matters and not get into some situation I am not into...but telling it part of the story and you will get into a situation no matter what is a bad move for the game....choice that matter is core part of an AVN unless you trying make a kinetic novel...

I'll start with the trump cards. This is a ridiculous story about a mentally retarded underage boy who befriends a local prostitute at school and decides to deceive his tyrant father. That's exactly the impression I got after watching this demo. The boy, whom the author tries to portray as an adult web developer, came to avenge his difficult childhood on his criminal father with the help of his stupid girlfriend, who also happens to be a prostitute. How he plans to do this is anyone's guess, but judging by the fact that he decided to set his girlfriend up with his dad, the plan promises to be brilliant. The only positive thing I can note is the high-quality models and animation of the female characters, for which this piece of work gets a 2. If you like ridiculous stories about boys, this is the place for you. Otherwise, run away quickly because this is complete crap.

VERSION: v0.0 SUMMARY: Would give it a higher rating but honeslty I dont feel like it, this dev can work for more. RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐ ⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Visually it looks decent enough, the world is detailed, styled and filled nicely. The female characters are sexy and voluptuous (mother), nice curves in all the right places (mostly) Writing is structured enough to say its readable and understandable even if whats said is kinda flimsy storytelling. Most animation and physics are actually pretty good, even if its AI use and taken from real footage... CONS: - See my opinions section for details. MC model is too young, looks like a kid in early high school, its just not relatable nor is he even likeable. Timeline is stupidly illogical, the kid (MC) is gone for a year, yet acts like he was gone a long time, anyone knows a year is nothing and passes by quickly, how much can a kid achieve in that time realistically? Sorry I am not buying it, flimsy story. As such bullshit dialogue like "MC You have grown so much" in a year...just hammers home that poor dialogue and plot development. Music doesn't fit scenes well The entire scene/vibe/premise and tone of this AVN is promiscuity, but also simply "commonness" the woman dress slutty and the sexual obviousness if you can call it that is actually distasteful, despite the nice looking tits. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) The MC (child) speaks and "thinks" like some grown up that has gone through life and "Changed" and has spent countless years planning a elaborate plan to get vengeance against his stepfather...right...talk about a shitty premise or rather shitty way to build and how it is structured is just bad. His (the MCs) "plight" is shallow, and the dev did not do anything to sell us on the "hardships" he and his family endured by the "tyrant" father. There is no background, there is not feeling, I for one could care less about this snot nose brat and thats the exact opposite you want your players to feel while walking in the MCs shoes. You add that the MC is a man-child...well there goes half of your audience IMO, the rest will follow due to the crap story. As with the timeline, we the player need to believe that this MC(child) has built such a strong relationship and everything else in a year to come back and get vengeance against the step dad? A girlfriend no less that will NTR the MCs ass to help him get his vengeance? Really, thats what you going for dev? FML... The blatant and complete disregard for subtlety tells me that the developer doesn't care to write a good story and this AVN proves it with its below average story telling. TLDR: This AVN looks good visually, some sexy female characters, but the story and way its put together is total shit, the MC is a child and most of the woman dress and act like skanks. If thats your thing, enjoy, but some of us expect a bit more substance to a novel. In all honesty, I can let much of this AVNs shit slide, but the child MC is just a NO NO to me, coupled with his so called revenge plot (that the player does not care about) and by his "year" away to become a man...bhawhahahaaa you can't make this shit up...or wait, someone did...