Sinful Horizon

The Engrish could use some work as the story is readable but you can easily tell it is written by someone not familiar with teh English language. The are structural errors that would not be made by someone who speaks and is familiar with the English language. There is a glaring issue that I can't stand in games made by people not accustomed to making Adult oriented material. I absolutely hate the ones made that base every action off a stupid point system. This way you constantly cock block yourself. Its perfect for dev's that can't actually make a coherent and working storyline. Oh I deducted points for that BS for sure. Sex. The animations could stand improvement. Not a lot of sex and at least what little there is did not suck. Hell there may actually be more but I got cock blocked ny that ignorant point system. According the phone there are 5 potential LI's. Too bad none of them impressed me at all so far. Their stories just lack that grab you by the nuts aspect that is present in well written stories on here. I just don't care about them enough to care where it goes. This has been meh! Could be a lot better but at least it was not a Bad Bobby bad.

This one has potential, but there is a lot going against it. To begin with, the renders are... not good. The shots in the bar are mostly gloomy and too dark. I understand a bar like this is probably not well lit, but still, most of our time is going to be spent in the bar so we should be able to see what is going on. There are plenty of other examples of bars in AVNs where the dev has the lighting figured out and this is not one of them. Also, I am not sure how old the models are as I am assuming they are using Daz models, but they are not good. The MC looks horrible and only a couple of the LIs look good. Then there is the writing. It's okay, but that would be about it. The story is solid enough, but the writing and interactions are often hurried and occassionally awkward. I am getting a little tired of every new dev focusing on making money instead of making a solid AVN and this is no exception. Take some time and learn your craft before trying to sell something average. On a positive note, the dev does seem to have the scene pacing down as well as the staging and I think the story has potential. I am hopeful the renders and the quality will improve as the story goes along.

OK there is not a lot of content yet, i got through in just a couple of hours from start to end of 0.5. Models are pretty standard but pretty Animations are inconsistent though, sometimes you have sometimes you dont have any. Needs more content really 5 gallery scenes one is a dream (nothing happens in it) One is a kissing scene and nothing else, 2 with sex the other not. You can unlock them using URM gallery unlocker as i think you have to pay to unlock with a code. If the dev wants to succeed with this project here is some pointers other may have more. 1. more hot scenes and make them consistent with all animation, for gods sake show some creampies or cumshots so far none (see aftermath of one but there was no animation to that scene it sucked (literally)) 2. pick up pace of the story a little so far we know he left to go elsewhere but then nothing yet. 3. ffs we dont all need NTR i know you can turn it off but it means gameplay will be restricted if you turn it off. Yes i know there is a market for NTR but i think the market is bigger for those that do not want it. 4. So far there is a management tag but what the hell are we managing?? 5. Tags really need to be accurate and the content actually be there, if not yet take them out and put in dev notes any planned tags. I know some have rated it worse but i think if you can get better at parts then it has a little promise. Premise of game is not anything new but its ok so far. why 3 stars? Content is small, not sure whether that is going to mean faster updates or whether it is a plan as you go project.

VERSION: v0.4 SUMMARY: Average AVN on most levels that needs a lot of polish... RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐ ⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Fairly good looking models, apart from MC. Visually not bad, the world is fleshed out and detailed enough with decent renders. Writing is decent, structure and reads well. Nothing that seems like wasteful walls of text. Having an RPG style stat systems isn't bad per se, and I will need to check into it as the AVN progresses, but the menus and stat pages need rework. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. While models are not too bad looking, the clothing and other items clip in a few places into the body. The ages of characters seem wrong, the bar man looks younger than the MC yet talks like an old man and calls the MC kid, that sorta thing. The MC looks like a thug, a neanderthal and he looks old, 35, 40 easily, his face looks like a square potato and he looks comically built, i mean FUGLY is the word. UI is primitive, lacks any settings for font or opacity changes to dialogue box. Also its messy with overlap of stat and other menu options. This is just poor design No audio of any kind, world, environment, interactions or lewd. The writing feels artificial, almost pretentious like its trying to be grand when it should be simple and ordinary. Inconsistent lighting and lack of detail in scenes, like MC walking into bar, the 2 woman, they look out of place, the lighting on them, their chairs does not blend with the back drop/scene and are missing the correct, shadows and lighting. Other issues like depth, height of characters e.g. MC in Laura's shop, he is so much shorter and smaller! (and ugly) The dialogue choice and stat system are a bit convoluted in how they work making choices hard to predict or plan ahead. Few animations, they not bad, but they not that great either, also inconsistent as much else. e.g. Ava sex scene, her ass jiggles but tits don't, the loop also breaks and its very noticeable. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) The writing style is highly annoying, it feels like some AI was used here, the way sentences are structured and scenes described feel unnatural and fake like some AI trying to act all Shakespearean. It also points out the inconsistencies between scene and writing. e.g. 3 guys sitting in a club, whole place is rather lit up, clearly after or before working hours, yet the scene is described as "in a dimly lit room" (bullshit its like day time) "shadows stretch across the walls" (almost none), "flickering from a single swinging overhead light" (bullshit again, its not a basement, and there are several light sources) Dialogue options often feel pointless, in either always get +1 or 0 no matter which option you pick, they either all give +1 to a LI or 0, you only add to your own stats. It feels more like when provided with dialogue options, picking is based on the stat you want, not the response you will get. Knowing where these stats apply is a waiting game at this point. Its not very intuitive and honestly I feel having MC stats are just ways to complicate a very simply game. The guess the dev went for this option so that the player always gets the LI stat point? TLDR: Decent looking, but inconsistent on many levels, especially with scene descriptions caused by (most likely) AI script writing. MC looks like a troll and much older than he is which doesn't fit the dialogue. All other characters look decent even the thugs, but the MC, POTATO face! Visual issues like clothing clipping, stat system needs work, at least the menus do. Bottom line is, its not terrible, but its not near 4 stars and sure as hell not 5 as some say. Here is a lot of polish needed to make this a worthy AVN.

Great start for a avn. Im a ntr kind of guy so this game is just my type. Definitely great potential. Beautiful love interests with different personalities. You play as a bum who some how gets lucky and lands a job inside a bar with a bunch of wenches while trying to get your life together. The main attraction to me in this game is ava. The animations could use some work maybe with different angles but still love them. Love me some thick thighs with a bad attitude. All the LI are unique and beatiful in their own way. Still in early development but looks promising.

Review of 0.3 tl;dr - Distinctly average, there's unfortunately not a lot to review. Wait for more content. --- Pros : Attractive models Competent writing Average story Cons : Virtually no content Some tags are misleading (I didn't see any vaginal sex or creampie outside of the banner for the Patreon version, for instance, which surely shouldn't be counted as game content, but eh). --- It's an okay start, the models are attractive and the writing seems competent but there's so little to see here that it's hard to say how it will turn out. I think (after looking through the pictures) there's a grand total of one blowjob for the MC and one NTR blowjob (avoidable but I think it still happens regardless,not 100% sure). I would wait for more releases at this point because what little content there is is not worth what little story there is at the moment imo.