The Breeze in Night

High hopes for this project... The game looks good, not quite as good as Duality yet, but the designs are pretty similar. The one that changed the most was Tiffany; she looks younger and more childlike. I don't dislike it, but since she was the character that drew me to Duality in the first place, it makes me a little sad. I think a few tweaks will do the trick. The posing is amateurish, you can tell, but the facials are actually quite decent. The personalities have changed too. Now the MC feels generic, very generic; he's not the pervert who cleverly takes advantage of the moment like before, now he's just a pervert, and the plot's agency feels out of place. You start with a family that's affectionate towards you, so what's the point of the sandbox then? Charlie seems to be staying true to her "average sister" persona, and Tiffany no longer seems like a "Golddiger" and now appears more affectionate and caring. I don't dislike it, but the whole point of their relationship was that she gradually grew attached to him (you can clearly see I'm a Tiffany fan here xd). June feels a bit diluted but maintains that maternal touch. Any suggestions? Make them a bit more freaky and change the protagonist (both design and personality). In the original, he was a complete pervert, but it was implied that he was at least tall and attractive, This remains the case, but in a more generic way; give it some background or it will simply feel wrong. Spice up the narrative a bit. The use of AI isn't bad; controversial or not, it saves a lot of time, and I understand why you use it. And while you're at it, use some AI for the writing; it has serious flaws. The storyline? It's changed quite a bit. It no longer seems like there will be any drama with Juney, the house, or the deal. I'm also seriously wondering how you're going to implement Rica since the MC no longer needs to be "treated with an iron fist," so I suppose you're going to create a completely new storyline, both because of the changes in the characters and the introduction. The lighting needs improvement, and you need to increase the contrast a bit to make it look more vibrant (seriously, do it; it makes all the difference). Don't worry about the graphics; you'll improve with time. Both the posing and lighting can be polished. Try to make it look like the original, or at least similar. Just change the characters a little (Tiffany and June would be the main ones; listen to the community and give June more body, make Tiffany's lips a bit smaller, and define her cheekbones and cheeks. You're very close to creating something more than competent). Ignore the hate. These guys have never even tried to use Daz or Blender, and the closest they've probably come is opening PowerPoint. I know how it feels; it's difficult, but you were the one who took the initiative to start from scratch. I respect you. With love, a random internet user

This is good for an early release, it deserves encouragement. The sandbox mechanics are simple and cool. The animations are very good and models are hot. I like the premise. I admit the English is poor but it can be worked on. I'm looking forward to more releases!

This game's first release is a good start. It has some issues such as with the writing, since it's pretty clear that the dev is not a native english speaker, and with the fact that the MC looks a little misshapen with those overly wide hips for a male. I don't think it is a deal breaker by any means. The characters look very very close to the original which is a big plus, so I think if the dev keeps progressing he could make a very good game. It's nice to see someone make a game based on one that many people liked but sadly didn't get to see get finished and it's surprising how fast people want to jump in and try to trash a game at first release for some very fixable issues. You don't have to play it, so why just hate on it for some things that can be fixed as the development progresses? Would it make you feel better if it got abandoned because of overly harsh negative comments? Hopefully the dev keeps going, this has potential to become a very good game.

Beta version reviewed Your typical incest story about a young man who comes home from college to stay with his hot "landlady" and siblings. Pros: 1- Very cute female characters. Cons: 1- English is not the devs' native language, and this translation is a disaster. 2- The writing is very basic and juvenile. 3- It's a dreaded sandbox game. So be prepared to get stuck in endless loops. With that said, there is a hint guide that will tell you what to do next. So this should reduce the amount of endless grinding. 4- Very average renders and character poses. 5- It allows you to change the names and relationships of the characters, but it does not appear to work yet, as I renamed my character, but was still addressed by the default name. 6- The game allows you to change "landlady" to mother, as intended, but the females are by default, your "sisters", which is obviously an oversight. They should be by default- "roommates". 7- Too many incidents where multiple renders are used to simulate movement. It's unsightly and not necessary. Just stick with dissolve. ------------------------------- The appeal of this AVN is clearly the cute females and the ability to have sex with them. It's a demo that needs a lot of work. The English is a disaster and needs to be completely rewritten. If this can be done, and the grindy nature of the sandbox limited as much as possible, then this game might be appealing to those who enjoy cute characters and incest. * Boner Rating - Flaccid. Poor in many areas.