Chaotic Neutral
2026-03-14
★
★
★
★
★
The main problem with this is the dialogue it is extremely unnatural and procedural. The characters behave like omniscient narrators being perfectly aware of what they themselves and others think and feel and then saying it aloud. Its basically one big maid and butler dialogue. Here is an example: Spoiler: Dialogue 1: Dude, it's been over three years, she was like your little sister and you haven't visited her once? I'm sure Jamie visited her often and would have loved for you to accompany her. 2: Yes, you're right Mia, I could have easily gone with Jamie many times, in fact she asked me every time, but I am a coward and an idiot, so I always came up with an excuse. The truth is, I just couldn't bear to see her like that right after the accident, then my parents died and I got caught up in my own grief. And after that, I don't know, it just seemed like it was too late then, so I kept not going to visit her. I'm sure she hates me now, but I have to see her and try to make amends. For context 1 has known 2 and Jamie for less than 24 hours. As seen in this dialogue 2 seems to know exactly what is going on and what he wants to do yet he only does so after this conversation. Best way to describe it would be: Feels as if the characters were given additional information for acting and instead of acting according to that information they just read it aloud and they where also given the script of the other actors.
SamOldSnake
2026-03-10
★
★
★
★
★
Alright, let's dive into the fundamental question that everyone reading reviews is eager to find out quickly. Is this AVN truly worth my time? The brief answer is - no, this AVN is poorly written and lacks anything that could hold your interest or make it worthwhile. However, you might wonder why I feel this way. What exactly is the issue, and am I being too quick to judge this game? No, a 2-star rating is precisely what this trash deserves. The story is so boring that I was tempted to skip the text just to escape this agony, especially during the moments when the main plot is unfolding. It's just a clichéd tale about secret organizations, human experimentation, genetic enhancements, and a super crime syndicate opposing the good FBI agents. It's so incredibly tedious that I completely lost interest in the plot. LIs s and their relationships is another significant shortcoming. While the models are attractive and some scenes featuring them may not be entirely unappealing, there is a caveat that reveals this aspect has also been poorly executed. Essentially, all LIs fall in love with you automatically and without hesitation; there's no need to get to know them or understand them as individuals. You simply introduce yourself, engage in some basic and superficial conversation, and before you know it, they are asking you out on a date! Just like that, seemingly out of nowhere. Some of the girls are portrayed as virgins, which I personally find appealing, but the issue is that this developer, like many others, is too timid to depict proper defloration scenes. There is no resistance, no pain, and no blood in any of these scenes. For me, this is not a positive aspect; I prefer those scenes to include the elements I mentioned earlier rather than omitting them. The animations are subpar; I would rather have no animations at all than what we currently have. All relationships with LIs in this game feel meaningless, superficial, and lack even a hint of realism, which is quite disappointing. Most of them end up transforming into mindless sex dolls, losing their individuality, as they become driven solely by an insatiable sexual desire, as if they have aphrodisiacs coursing through their veins instead of blood. Therefore, I regret to say that I cannot recommend this AVN. While you might find some enjoyment in the early stages of the game, it eventually devolves into poorly written content that leads to nothing but disappointment. Play at your own risk; you've been forewarned.
Edhinor
2025-12-18
★
★
★
★
★
I doubted whether this would be a 2 or a 3. I went with the 2 in the end because this kept screaming at me "mediocre". The renders are nothing special, pretty basic stuff but nothing too bad jumps at you either, the light is correct, the colors are good.. .etc. The animations are very, very basic, a couple of times, when having sex, the MC seems to be doing pushups. I rather not have animations than having whatever it is that is going on here. The models of the characters are ok in general, they look like real people for the most part and there is a good variety of them. However their expressions and posing are quite lacking. The smiles are really, really bad, and many times the characters seem to be looking somewhere far off into the distance instead of at each other when talking. Some more care and attention to poses and face expressions would have helped this VN a lot. The writing.... well, it is serviceable. There is some mystery with the dead parents, but it is not really elevated literature. Pretty basic stuff but we are here for the porn, right? so... how is the writing of the porn? well, as lacking as the rest of the story. The sex scenes jump at you nearly out of nowhere, there is a repetition of the dates (where they go, how the waiters talk to them, what they order, the walk after, and then touch ass, touch breast, touch clit and "oh, lets go home and fuck") , and the sex talk is pretty basic and not particularly arousing. The worst part though is the dialogues and the progression of the relationships. It goes basically like this: MC goes "hi, how are you doing?" LI asks for help on something minor MC helps LI "wow you are amazing, I feel such connection" MC "yeah, me too, it is crazy to feel like this, but I think I am falling for you" Then they date, fuck, and join a polyamorous relationship LI "I think I am falling also for your other GFs" (which she knows for all of 10 minutes and has had two basic conversations with) There is no build up of tension, no progression of a relationship. They meet, the next day they are developing feelings, one date, and sex and full relationship. The same is true when there are previous issues in the relationship (which we do not see) like with Kat. The MC did something pretty awful, they meet for the first time after three years, the MC asks for forgiveness, she says yes, they resume their relationship and she happily joins the harem with no concerns at all, they have a date, and they fuck. So.... if you do not have anything else to read at the moment, and are a fan of harem VNs were every woman is a virgin that falls for the MC without further questions, then you may enjoy this. Otherwise you will struggle to keep reading it. 2/5, a poor effort that could have done with some more character building, slow relationship evolution, care in poses and facial expressions, more work on the dialogues... and no need for the whole criminal mystery thing, it is nothing special and pretty silly.
toyohew900
2025-12-02
★
★
★
★
★
I wanted to give this a 3, but it's just not there. Everything said in other reviews is true, but nobody is mentioning the characters. Every love interest has the exact same personality, and what personality exists is extremely bland. If you can swap the LI in the scene for any of the others and nothing seems odd, there's a problem.
Peri3481
2025-11-26
★
★
★
★
★
It's true, as others have said, that this AVN presents a cookie-cutter set-up: boy new in town allows for harem of genuine housemates, plus aunt in the end. Generic visuals feature poses straight out of the box, in the early chapters, improving later on. The script is basic but recognisably native, and it gets the job done. Villlain-thwarting sub-plot is no more or less absurd than others in the same vein. There's a girl with a wooden leg (OK, next-gen artificial limb, yadda yadda) but they don't make a big deal out of it. Most of that's done and dusted, and we have a proper harem approaching completion, with pregnancy scenes (and not just sex scenes), at the point that so many other AVNs drop out. With, at the end of 0.19, an unexpected visitor promising more fun. So for fans of the genre, it's worth more than the current rating suggests. Some of the harem girls also have fun with each other, but not behind MC's back.
ChestyJ
2025-11-03
★
★
★
★
★
Very mid. Models are decent enough except the mc. He is a little fugly, very short and seems to have odd proportions somehow. Like his mid section is too wide. Can't really put my finger on why he looks strange but he does. The dialogue is cringey at times and generic. There are a number of scenes with female virgins that don't act or appear to be virgins at all. Slightly odd for anyone that knows what it is actually like to be deflowered or to deflower a woman. I wouldn't say this game is awful but I also wouldn't say it is good. Like I said above, very mid. You may get some enjoyment out of it.
Sayora
2025-11-03
★
★
★
★
★
I watched this and now I want to unsee it. I tried in vain to see at least one normal girl/model in this VN and failed. The models are so terrible that it looks more like a horror movie than a porn novel. Okay, even if this VN isn't about the pictures but the plot, but no, the plot here is even worse than the models—some kind of wild nonsense about spies and a syndicate. Basically, if you want a beautiful VN or an interesting plot, avoid this thing.
Juerhullycin
2025-11-03
★
★
★
★
★
The game is pretty average, but I like the LIs and the overall tone. The pacing is a tad fast, but overall, I find the romance parts nice. Was another spy plot needed? Probably not. But it doesn't detract either. All in all, it's a chill feel-good story without much stress, and some hiccups here and there.
NoWay Jose
2025-10-22
★
★
★
★
★
IDK. This VN has some things going for it, but ultimately falls flat in most of the key areas. First off, the visuals. The model renders are fine, I guess, but posing is awful, being mostly store-bought poses that have little to do with the scene action. Another pet peeve of mine is when attention isn't paid to where characters are looking. There are so many scenes where characters are talking to each other but they're not actually looking at each other, or at the MC. It's disconcerting and gives everything a kind of uncanny valley effect. Once you see it, you can't unsee it. Second, the story. It feels like it was going in a particular direction at the start. Typical college story tripe, but if it's leading somewhere then, okay. But it never gets that far. Somewhere in the first chapter, it feels like the story ran out of ideas or something. It started veering off into, what? Spy hijinks? And don't any of these "college students" ever actually, you know, go to college? Aside from a couple of scenes meant to introduce a fuckable teacher MILF, not a lot. The beginning dialogue had a lot of "scene filler" content. You know, like "Thank you." "No, thank you!" "No really, thank you !" Then suddenly it seems like a switch flipped--"gotta have sex in here somewhere. Oh look, some random girl in a bar I can screw." Later on, it just seems formulaic-talk, talk, talk, do you want to fuck her?, yes-you do, no-nothing. Sometimes you have to speak to her twice, or three times. But (ironically, given the title) there are no consequences for saying yes to everybody, all the time, so what's the point? I like Alice. Her bubbly personality, her height, her body. It's okay that she doesn't have a model face, because that's kinda real life. But at some point, she just turns into another harem fuckdoll. No relationship other than some occasional sex scenes. Mia starts off as a tsundere sort, but eventually vanilla blends into a forgettable character, like most of the characters added over time. I'm torn on the rating, primarily because it's obvious that a lot of work has been put into this, and the visuals aren't horrible, and at least the writing isn't Engrish. And Alice. But beyond that, I feel like I wasted my time with this one.
m0us3r
2025-10-21
★
★
★
★
★
TL;DR: There's some honest work put in this VN, but the result is not too impressive. Models are mediocre. Some girls faces are unattractive (Alice, Rebecca...) But the developer chose 4k resolution, not fitting with models quality , just upping the game size to 11 Gb for no good reason. The game would look much better with 2k but more modern and more attractive models. Music is mostly not to my taste, though that's not unusual for VNs. Writing is not quite good: dialogs are mostly wooden. The story is bad. Examples (not spoiling, it's all from the first meaningful conversation, day 2): 1. Teenage MC lives for years with a teenage girl. They have (romantic) feelings for each other but don't realize that. What??? I was a teenager myself. I can imagine hormones etc. What I can't imagine is how I could be in love with a girl and not realizing that. Moreover, she's 2 years older and she does the same: in love with me but never realized that, in all those 3 years. 2. My (MC's) best friend is severely injured and taken to a hospital. Since that moment I refuse to see that friend. (Because it's too hard for me). Come on, it's my best friend? What kind of immense gaping asshole I must be to abandon my friend like that? It's not just weird, it's some mental illness here. I can't and don't want to imagine myself like that. So yes, at first the game seemed interesting (though only about half of the girls I'd call sexy), but... the interest was mostly lost at day 2. [v0.17]
N0madS0uL
2025-10-19
★
★
★
★
★
VERSION: v0.17 SUMMARY: Fine enough, does most things OK, but there are things that I don't like RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Attractive LIs, mostly, MC also looks OK, for a young "kid" Writing is structured and reads well enough. Story, at least main plot is basic but fine and not complex, this isnt exactly a Pro, but its better than having a purely bad plot. Music and other sounds are nice, but again music doesn't always fit like the piano song that fits a jazz bar more than a modern day young crowd... Added to sounds, the environmental and lewd scene sounds are pretty good, nicely done. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Some music is not really fitting for me, not for a game centered around young people. Some scenes make no sense, things happen that would not happen naturally or "in real life" creating a porn logic narrative that doesn't fit this game. Added to above, random encounters like the mensroom scene are just too much and bury the needle in the porn logic. Animations are slow, literally slow, they look like they running at 5fps...slowing them down doesn't make them longer, just FYI. Which brings about the next point, they short... Added to animations, if they not too slow they too fast and then they lack any sexiness and have poor camera angles. While renders are generally good, its obvious that there is a bit of skill lacking, like how characters stand next to each other, they don't fit or look at each other, as if they were just added to a scene but lack any interaction that is natural. While LIs are mostly attractive, sometimes there faces really leave much to be desired. While you have choices, there is technically only one thats right, else you just screw yourself over... While I do enjoy pregnancy kinks, having a post nut chat about getting the LI pregnant and being ok with being a dad/mom and all that right off the bat like its the weather being discussed is such bullshit, especially for a virgin, and that at day 5? WTF... MC accumulates LIs like he is giving away free cash. The very idea that "normal" sane characters would be open to a 8 way relationship again just hammers down on the porn logic of this game. It wouldn't be so bad if it was done tastefully and over time, intro to most LIs very early on and gradually develop romance, not here though... OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) Per nonsensical scenes, the MC find the new tenant coming out of the bathroom naked on day one. Firstly her argument that she is use to doing that is bullshit, she can't be that oblivious to not realise she is living with a stranger, first day, no habits, she also lets her guard down around a man she knows from Adam. Then the MC and naked chick have a conversation! What about "ill be right back after I get dressed then ill talk" ! Such writing are red lights to bullshit porn logic drivel which again, doesn't work for this game as that logic works on shallow, lighthearted and obvious porn games that are all about the sex and not the story. Some LIs faces look kind of freakish, like Jamies eyes are so small and far apart and she also has a pudginess that makes her look like a English bulldog. Some other have a look like they got some bad botox injections... To allude to the mensroom scene with a random chick who just walks in without issue, goes to MC and wants him to screw her and he proceeds, forget what are the odds, but ffs, what about STDs or how many other things wrong with that. The scene is clearly forced by the developer to create some porn logic scene for sake of having an H-scene, this is done so poorly, blatant and is so obvious that I can only shake my head at the developer. Classy...without spoiling it further, its simply a poorly conceived and executed event... The camera angles do get implemented eventually, sadly though they are missing from at least the first chapter and so create inconsistency in quality for this AVN. I would recommend the dev consider going back and implementing the angles on those also. TLDR: Not a bad AVN, but really not going to turn heads, it feels more like a debut for the developer and them getting their feet wet. In that case its a fairly good first attempt, but not a great game. Decent enough models and writing, but nothing exceptional or very sexy or kinky plus its filled with stupid porn logic scenes that make sense and clearly are there for the sexual scenes, but why bother with a AVN then when you can simply google porn...?
m00nsh1ne
2025-06-22
★
★
★
★
★
Version 14.2 as of review This is a solid mid-tier VN. It's not going to set the world on fire, but if you enjoy the major themes/fetishes then I think there is more than enough here to satisfy you. In my opinion, if you are a fan of Harem games with a breeding kink then this game has you covered. I hope it gets to complete its story.
MixQQ
2025-06-05
★
★
★
★
★
+ nice music + no harem drama, like jealousy etc. Girls even encouraging MC to "have fun" with others + animations, they could be better tho + MFF action + game has gallery + fair amount of pussy eating scenes. One of the rare protagonists who like doing that - forced lesbianism - no important choices, game is more like kinetic novel - story/conversations, hard to pay full attention what characters says because all that stuff is really boring - lewd scenes are very short - unrealistic, unnatural relationship development. Girls outta nowhere decided to "love you" and all other gals MC is in relationship with, they don't even know each other.. but who cares? xd wtf? - FPS drops during some animations - MC, he's not special, not interesting, dull man Could be a solid avn if only dev put more effort in it.. 2 stars
Jnx
2025-02-08
★
★
★
★
★
English :............ 8 /10 User Interface :..... 4 /10 User Experience :.... 7 /10 Art :................ 7 /10 Dialogue :........... 2 /10 Story :.............. 2 /10 Opinion :............ 1 /10................ Avg:............. 4.43 /10 [2.21/5] EDIT: APPARENTLY this ADULT website likes to edit reviews now along with the rampant censorship. Because being an adult means being childish and disrespectful. My review is long and I understand that. But to full on hide the review is a slap in the face. I tried this once before. My few memories of it are "Why is this called unexpected consequences when nothing happens?" "This really needs to be converted to webm/p to cut down on space" and "This is yet another milquetoast boring story where MC walks room to room and is rewarded with sex because pron game." It's a paint-by-numbers collection of assets flipped into a porn game nothing, that I barely remember. Every scene generally should make you go "are you serious with this?" The UI has a minorly edited textbox, default everything else. The cringey walk cycles in the main menu do you no favors. This also does the "I'm possibly a character from the game introducing the game to you like an actor" another trope that bugs me. You'll notice this intro paragraph is pretty lean, especially for me, there's not a lot to say about this and I kinda just wanna be able to say "I reviewed it, don't need to look at it again." The only other thing I kinda remember is that the poses look like they're breaking bones a lot of the time, can't wait for that. Spoiler: Long Review Anyways, the game opens to MC saying Jamie is getting married. Apparently, Jamie's MC's roommate and she had to move out, so she posted an ad for MC to get a new roommate. Okay, cool. Setting up a new relationship, establishing that MC is a little troubled by it. Not terrible. But, immediately, you're greeted by the worlds jankiest vertical pan of a video ever? It jitters, no one moves, and could have been handled by an imagepan in-engine.(I will say, retroactively, it was that renpy was struggling playing the vids) Then, they follow it up with another one. Why? And there's this false urgency with the girls in that "only one can have the room" but you immediately learn there's two spare rooms and it was all a lie. So, a waste of time. Cool. This also does the thing where all the characters are pointed at the camera, as if they're talking to MC, but even while talking to each other. It feels weird and they could have saved space further by using sprites. But whatever. Then, MC calls Jamie to thank her, she'll, obviously, be a love interest later, and instead of trying to expand upon their relationship by showing their conversation, you get "They talked for a while until the doorbell rang." Great, already skipping relationship building. We then see our first choice "Flirt or be normal" This is obviously a harem game, so I'll take a wild guess and say "pick all the flirty options" is the answer every time. Then, if you call her down to eat, you get another "You made small talk" blurb. SKIPPING MORE RELATIONSHIP BUILDING. The ENTIRE point of this game is to get with varying women. When their only traits are "they're nice and have a different DAZ model" it's boring. There's no conflict, there's no drama, just what flavor of woman do you want to say yes to. If you needed any more confirmation, Alice, the worlds most naive human, immediately walks around the house naked "because she forgot" while MC just stands there staring at her, slack-jawed. Don't worry, she appreciates the compliment. And don't forget, right after that they play video games, skip more relationship building, and MC gets a boner when she hugs him because he has no fine motor controls. Awesome. Later that day, Mia finally moves in. Another thing I wanna point out is everyone's so nice and pleasant, like one of those uncanny 50's sitcoms. Everyone might as well have one of those giant fake-toothed smiles, it's weird. Alice almost already does. Then you get the "choice" to talk to alice, mia, and then go to work. Do you know what these "thrilling" conversations entail? "Hey [INSERT NAME HERE] just wanted to check on you before I go to work" and BOTH OF THEM reply with "Oh, thanks MC, I'm okay see you when you get back!" THAT WAS NOTHING. I'm starting to see why they're skipping the dialogue, because it sucks. His job, of course, is a personal trainer,(receptionist?) I guess. (I wanna take a second to interject and say I turned on the performance monitor and see that the game chugs during the videos, so renpy is struggling, maybe the videos aren't choppy, I'll never know.) Anywho, we meet Becca, MC's boss who clearly enjoys him ogling her, she says "Why didn't you and Jamie get together, you had feeling for each other" something we, the player, didn't know. But this is a porn game of course everyone wants each other. Then we finally get to meet Jamie. And their conversation? "Congrats on getting engaged, I'll see you later!" SERIOUSLY? When she arrives, because it just cuts to when she shows up, Alice and Jamie are posed in a way no human has ever stood before. To whoever sells these poses, I seriously want them to try to stand in the way the models do, and tell me how much muscle strain they feel, my god. And, of course, Jamie's fiance couldn't make it, which means he's an asshole. Because no human male that isn't MC in an AVN can be anything but a rapist, cheater, liar, or evildoer. Next, we learn a GIANT lore dump of information in the first ACTUAL conversation in the game. Jamie and MC grew up together, she has a sister that is also "like a sister" to MC, he pretty much abandoned her when she was in an accident, and he's the hero of this story? Okay. Then Alice is from a small town and wanted to distance herself from her dad after her mom died because... reasons? She just said "he's different," so in his grief, his daughter leaves too? Great. Then Mia: "I moved here with my boyfriend and we broke up so now I'm here." Wow. These characters are amazing. And notice how Jamie had no characterization or background. She's literally just MC's tie to his formative years. "They played pranks on each other" is the only tiny bit of anything you get out of her. But, really, they just gotta play it off as if she's not gonna be a love interest for a moment so MC can "save" her later on from a comically evil fiance. You also get some more surface-level questions about the girls. Why Alice went into game design and why Mia is in the music program. I will concede and say "it's pretty early and they're just getting to know each other." But the break-neck speed at which everything unfolds, this should have gotten deeper, but it never does. Also I want to point out how horrific Jamie's smile is here. At the line "Hey, you jerk,..." her disturbing chiclet teeth and surgically raised nasty cheekbones make her and her oompa loompa skin off-putting. They then go to a club and MC has sex with a stranger that is also a lesbian. Because we have to point out that every female is either a virgin or never had sex with another male before. God forbid a human being have real-world experiences before meeting you. And don't worry, MC tells Alice and Mia, in detail, what he was doing. This whole "drugged" thing comes up later, if I remember rightly, and they were drugged by some sex drug that makes this story into a MAFIA STORY. Hooray! This was getting too original... Back to the "plot..." Alice, of course, screams out that she's a virgin and would hate to have had her first time there. And Mia says the same sentiment about Alice and mc "You're actually attractive, I'm surprised you haven't done it more." Which, if you look at MC, he looks like Sid from Toy Story, he is not attractive. Inferring that Mia has had experience, I don't remember if she has, but we'll get there. And I'm remembering that Kat, the sister that MC abandoned was the person he had sex with. The day passes with two different blackscreens with a time skip. One where MC goes to work and nothing happens, the next when he shows Alice around town, and instead of interacting with her to get better acquainted, its a black screen that says "you showed her around town it was fun." Yikes. Enter Sakura. The japanese girl with pink hair that plays keyboard in Mia's band. I shouldn't have to get into how tropey, at best, that character is. Wow. After that they go to play pool, I'm honestly shocked they didn't use this to say Alice is good at geometry because game design. Nope, she just played it a lot. I also want to point out that Mia's boobs have been shrunk down so much that her clothes no longer make sense. Her bra straps and forced cleavage physically don't make sense, it's kinda funny. And the day finally ends with two more time skips of "You ate dinner an got close. And you watched a movie and got closer." The night is then punctuated by MC having a dream/memory of his parents talking about the aforementioned mafia. I want to say that the dream is cheapened by the fact that his parents died only 3 years ago, so it's not like this is some kid stumbling on his parents investigating a crime syndicate. More a 17(?) year old hearing his parents talking about a car crash his girlfriend was involved in. It's odd and a little cheap, so it doesn't help the story, what little there is, at all. He even wakes up and somehow, out of the kindness of their hearts, the girls wake up to comfort MC about his sad dream. This does that "terms and conditions" type romance. "You don't have to continue if you don't want to. I want you to be as comfortable as possible at all times because we are all frail and unique and special." As if they're all reading from a teleprompter. They also do this faux psycho-analysis of his dream and what it all means as if YOU, the reader, couldn't infer all of that having seen ANY MOVIE EVER. The "Wow, that's so nice. Everything is nice. Thank you for complimenting me I return the same to you" dialogue just continues forever. Even moreso when you learn Jamie's parents are rich and they have a private beach and yacht on the water. There's even the cringey "this scenery's not as beautiful as you two." If the fruit was hanging any lower, it'd be under ground. And they even downplay the wealth saying "They're not rich, they're just insanely wealthy." Like "We don't like to draw attention to wealth disparity please don't mention it." It's dumb. ONLY FOR THE GAME TO SKIP OVER THEM INTERACTING AGAIN. Wow, they really just don't want to write two characters getting to know each other. It's punctuated, AGAIN, by a dream. Only this time, it's a sex dream because MC hasn't had sex with anyone yet and we need to shove sex in here, somewhere. And, since MC has no bodily control, during his dream where he's having sex with one of the two girls he's currently with, he shouts out that he's having sex with them in his sleep. This also triggers him to have a date with the chosen girl the next day. He's known them for three days and has already had random sex in a bathroom with someone. Why are they about to go on a date? No matter who you choose, the other looks sad you didn't pick her, by the way. When they get home they repeat that they're so happy to have found this place to live and that you're so nice, and the other girl is so nice, and the food smells nice, and all this crap that has already been 90% of the dialogue so far. IT'S MIND NUMBING. Are you serious with this? WE GET IT. Everything is lollipos and rainbows my god. The next day, the other girl, that you didn't choose in the dream, asks MC out anyway. It's so weird. Neither of these girls know anything about MC other than he abandoned his long time friend when she needed the support. Had random sex in a club toilet their first night out. And dreamt about vulgar sex with both of them their second time out together. What about him screams "Yeah, lets date" can you tell me?? MC even tells the other girl, in graphic detail, what he was doing with both of them in the sex dream. This idiot has no social awareness, it'd be concerning if he was real. All of the dialogue sounds like they're talking to gradeschoolers "Did you have fun with your friends today?" "Oh yes! we played at the beach and it was great!" Then Jamie appears and they reveal that they're all going on dates. But instead of saying "it's just like a first date" they act like they're already planning to be a throuple or something. No planning was done, they all just agreed to date because everything is a commercial from the 50s? I chose Mia first because... Eh, I don't know, I just chose her. Her and Alice are completely interchangeable so it doesn't really matter. But her sob story is her parents are devout catholics that didn't care about her for no discernable reason, so she sought escape through music. They were mad she joined highschool jazz? That's the only thing that remotely explains why they didn't care for her. I don't know. And MC's story to her? "Oh you know the yacht I showed you yesterday, well this was on a different yacht, everyone got sick and I drove it home" Wow. That told us so much about you. the only thing you get out of it is he doesn't like caviar. So humble, so amazing... Then MC gets sex on the first date because these are caricatures, not people. And the sex animation? Lol, I'll just say that. I'll say here, at the Kat reunion, she's the only really visually appealing character. Alice almost comes close, but everyone else has something just odd about their character model. Mind you, Kat has a missing leg and she's the only one that doesn't look like a case of body dysmorphia. But the fucking dialogue here is a JOKE. "Yes I am glad you are back in my life and I loved and still love you. Nothing we did together was a regret and I'm happy you stayed away, not because you didn't like me but because you blamed yourself." That was paraphrasing, yes. But it's actually MORE verbose and on the nose than that IN THE GAME, it's kinda sad. "I want to be honest with you, I still love you but I'm dating two other girls who I already love very much" WHAT. WHEN DID THAT HAPPEN? When did they "love" each other? I am all for being transparent and maybe even having the "maybe you can date me too" bullshit, but at no point was love discussed. They've known each other for FOUR DAYS. When they get to MC's place they continue reiterating the apology and how happy they are to be talking again. Please. End me. This is absurd. And when Alice and Mia show up to meet Kat? THEY TALK ABOUT IT ALL AGAIN!?! Why? We've heard it three times now, come on. They even unceremoniously have Kat interject with "Do you guys mind if I date MC too?" Absolutely zero chill. Then they start to address the Brad issue. If I remember right, Brad is some nefarious guy that wants to savor in Jamie being a virgin? It's some stupid thing like that and he's even tied to the syndicate somehow, to loosely tie the "...plot" to him. Either way, as soon as MC "saves" her, they sleep together, to spoil it early. They continue to drone on and on about how nice everything is and how positive their world is, until they finally doll-up Alice for the date. Only to continue the veggietales tier dialogue complimenting each other. It's so babyish, it actively makes me laugh in frustration. When they FINALLY get to the date after complimenting each other for 20 minutes, MC TAKES ALICE TO THE SAME PLACE. What. Even the host is like "you waiting for your date from last night?" And Alice is like "nah it's me lol." Which further backs up my statement about Mia and Alice being completely intercahangeable. Even the beats are the same, hold hands, ask about her, and all that. The only thing that would kill me with laughter is if he told the same story about the yacht. No, instead he tells a story about Jamie, because MC is an uninteresting nothingburger. So much so that Mia and Alice's date are exactly the same, to the point he even touches them the same way. Alice even says "I'm not ready to go further" the game cuts to their home, and she takes off her clothes saying she's ready to go all the way.... WHAT?! The next day, Alice is at work, dressed like a slutty maid(?) has a guy get handsy with her, we'll come back to him soon don't worry, then she wants to have sex with MC because of it, right away. TWO sentences ago she was a virgin that wasn't ready for sex. So much has happened... And the sex scene, my god it's so weird. She positions herself in a weird way I've never seen before and it's so robotic. When they return from the stall sex, the "Alex" that MC has been searching for just happens to be the daughter of Alice's new boss. And the guy that was groping her is a member of the Syndicate that killed MC's parents and attacked Kat for no known reason. WERE YOU READY FOR THAT LORE DUMP CAUSE NO ONE ELSE WAS?! Honestly, if MC stops "the syndicate" himself I will sigh so hard my lungs will pop out. And if you doubt me on this, Kara, the old friend of MC's parents, tells him about her top secret task force. HELLO? NOT MUCH OF A SECRET. They TRY to waive it away saying "they're too involved" but MC knew nothing of this and alice was just groped by some weirdo. They do not need to know this. AND GUESS WHAT! HE TAKES KAT ON THE SAME. FUCKING. DATE. The next day. I wish I could laugh at this. MC is a receptionist at a small yoga studio that can't afford the house he lives in. Where is he getting the money for 3 high class dinners in a row? There's also the little line Kat throws in "I think I'm starting to develop feelings for the other girls too." HOW? MC has known them for 5 days, maybe. She's met them twice. How in the universe has she developed anything more than enjoying their company in the 4 hours of knowing them? I also want to say, IT'S A FFECT NOT E FFECT. It's been bugging me the whole game. Every time, they use the wrong word. But oh man, I was proven wrong, instead of a walk in the park, a walk in a park next to water. This guy is full of surprises. Even the sex is the same. The next day, they meet with Alex to learn, yes, Brad is involved. They were trying to keep them virgins to rape them because...? Question mark? Jamie's rich parents were rich, I guess.(To get back at MC's dad?) Then. "Finally." The Jamie sex scene. It's at this point I have to ask, was this dialogue written by AI? "Thank you, I enjoy it when you compliment my body" doesn't sound like a pent up 20something having sex for the first time. That sounds like a robot's predefined response to a compliment. When they finally have Elizabeth added to the story, they go through the whole "MC is dating all of us" bullshit some more and it makes me want to rub my eyes until they fall out. Every time they meet a new character, they summarize the story so far to the new character. We don't need to hear that. Not every time. Maybe a character reacts to things or says something to another character, but not a full story synopsis every time. And now that you notice that, I hope it bugs you. When Chapter 2 rolls around, they literally skip past all the relationship building with a slideshow that says "You got closer to everyone, it was fun, you really shoulda been there! But you weren't because fuck you." According to the game, they skipped over a MONTH. Two of the girls now have morning sickness, if you chose that, and nothing has really changed. You then meet Violet, the undercover agent that shouldn't be meeting with anyone. But nothing in this has been planned well, so what would you expect. She then tells you her ENTIRE backstory. Because, instead of just telling them what she has to report, you need context on her childhood hopes and dreams for some reason? You learn that this story has a legitimate "evil twin" story, I honestly can't believe it. Suddenly the uncle MC never knew he had is the leader of the Syndicate. And now, MC is going to infiltrate the syndicate undercover too? Oh! Alex also makes a move on MC because "thinking someone's attractive" is enough to dive into a polyamorous relationship. She's also now his coworker and handling an investigation around him. This is dumb. They've met twice that we know of and absolutely ZERO information other than "she worked with MCs parents" has been given to the player. Don't worry, her slow motion sex scene is in a slightly different position though. Can't have you getting too bored, now can we? Later you finally meet Holly and Andi, the bandmates MC somehow still hasn't met. Remember the lesbian MC had sex with? She's one of them. She also didn't go out to buy the $40 morning after pill after she screwed up because...? That is the first damn thing you should do you absolute moron. It's called the morning after pill for a reason. I'd also like to point out that Holly and Andi look HORRENDOUS. Their faces are contorted into these nightmare creatures and I have no idea why. I'd like to say that this is around the time I quit last time I played, so I'm going into the rest of this blind right now. I won't lie to you, I'm almost completely mentally checked out by this point. MC and his gaggle of idiots go around town telling anyone they meet about everything they're going through. It's so unbelievably stupid. The only way I can describe this is, it's as if the writer's of Barney the Dinosaur made a porn game. Kat even almost says "I love you, you love me" verbatim. This has to be a joke. I honestly feel bad for the AI that spat this out. I also think I figured out what Jamie looks like. She looks like she got an allergic reaction to a bee stinging her cheeks, perpetually. The sex talk is also a joke. It's all the same, all the women just start autistically screeching as soon as MC looks at them. And when he tweens in and out of them they always scream at the top of their lungs that there is a penis inside them and they need to cum from him ejaculating inside them. That's not even funny, it's cringey. Once, maybe twice, sure, I guess. But every single time it's inferred they yell loud enough for the tri-state area to hear. And most of the sex happens in shitty bathroom stalls, why? If you want public sex go to a park, a pool, a movie theater. But no, we want to have sex in the bathroom? Hot... After that, the conversation for the next 10-20 minutes? Them yelling out lout for any and everyone to hear "MAN! We have so much SEX! It's CRAZY! Can you guys believe how much sex we have?!" Then whoever is around with a name says "Um can you guys keep it down, talking about sex makes my panties wet, I want to have sex with MC now." It's to the point where MC isn't really saying anything, but all 40 of his girlfriends will say "Hey, MC, wasn't that girl hot? You should sleep with her." And you're given a yes/no choice based solely on if you thought that DAZ model was hot. MC's dialogue after the choice is usually "Well, yeah I guess she was beautiful, but I won't make any promises." Then time skip ahead to when his flock of cuckqueans have acted behind the scenes to get the girl to sleep with him. Do you remember when the mafia was after one or more of them? Because even though they tell everyone about it, I don't think they understand it. The fact they continue to rehash events and tell everyone EXACTLY what happened with XYZ is exhausting. They scheme behind the player to get other girls to sleep with him, so how is it they don't explain situations and get permissions the same way? Or is the writing just padded out by every character telling MC how magnanimous he is for sleeping with every girl ever, after they just recanted every event that happened while that character was not on screen? I'm not even at the "undercover" section and I half expect it to either be a black screen time skip that says it all went well. OR MC walks in, finds a girl, tells them everything that's happened up till that point, she converts from the syndicate and joins the gaggle of morons. WAIT A MINUTE! THEY SAID THE TITLE OF THE GAME! Except... "Consequences" generally denotes a negative connotation. And nothing has been unexpected or negative. After the terrible undercover operation goes awry, probably because they scream the plot to everyone they meet, they have to move to the beach house. You know the one on a California beach with a yacht in the bay? Poor souls. By this point, there was a change in the sex scenes to have buttons that change the camera angle. But it makes the sex scenes feel shorter on top of not noting the change means I didn't see it for quite a while, admittedly. And the ONE line of dialogue you can use it during means if you misclick, you have to rollback to see the other crap angles. Back to the story, the Violet arc is dumb too, MC fucked his cousin and they kiss over it? This ham-fisted incest insert makes the game even dumber than it already was. This just proves that they're trying to appeal to dumb fetishes. And the fact that he's related to the only black girl? Yeah right. I finally got to Chapter Three and I want it to be over. Kat's getting a bionic leg that looks infinitely worse than the prosthetic before it. A global cabal is about to run a train on the only character MC hasn't met in person yet and I, as a player of the game, don't care. The tie MC has to the story is minimal at best. The villain has had 4 lines of dialogue, and even less of a reason to do all this. The actual overarching story is completely unoriginal. The dialogue makes me want to die. None of the characters have a character to speak of. The one they're TRYING, really hard, to push has some sort of character is MC. All the girls TELL MC about how great he is. They TELL him all the amazing things he's done. You, the player, have seen him do one thing: Get caught trying to sabotage a crime ring. Other than that, he's just shown up. He's done nothing but say empty compliments and have that same dopey ass look the entire time. Which isn't to say the rest of the cast doesn't have a giant smile all the time. "Aunt Liz has been kidnapped to be assaulted until she dies" As they say with giant smiles as if they've been dosed with Joker's laughing gas. They don't care, why should I? And them suddenly adding some weird cyberpunk altered human story on top of it all just shows they had no plans for this. They're just adding stuff to write something. No reason, just trying to tie together the empty sex scenes. If you have half a brain, you should realize why this is bad. But I'll sum it up anyway to not have to play this again. The English, they constantly use wrong words and there's spelling mistakes, but wherever they got this dialogue from seems English. I don't know if it's AI or not but it reads so robotically that I can confidently say no human had fun writing any of it. The UI is just a few changed images and the UX is untouched, as far as I can tell. The Art is weak. Only two of the girls look appealing and one of them, MC never even gets with. The rest have these weird claymation faces that over-emote and would scare children. The dialogue is as if Barney and Friends or Barbie's Dream House made a porn game. Nothing any of them say feels natural or earned. MC will meet a girl and within 10 minutes they love each other and are having sex. MOST of the dialogue is about how much sex they are having, want to have, or will have. And if not, it's the entire group sitting around a table retelling every event of the story until that point to some new character. None of it is any fun to read. The Story itself is nothing. A global ring of evildoers and human traffickers want to make genetically altered people? Question mark? And MC's dad had a twin brother that was evil and got mad at his brother because he got caught? None of this happened on, or even near, the screen. It's all exposited to you through heavy handed dialogue by a surprise character. The only parts close to MC in any way is they want to rape MC's women and he's mad. Sure, they're awful people. But at no point did I give a shit about these robots. Half the time they're galivanting off to a toilet somewhere to have sex. But I also wanna ask, to the 4 people that get this far in my review, how is this game 2 stars but the other games that are exactly this bad 4 stars instead? Why do the other shit games get a pass? Because the models are prettier? That's the only thing I could possibly think of. Sure, maybe they're not written this vapidly, but not much better. Either way, this game is not good. Anyone that says otherwise has never played a game, read a book, or heard a story before. That's all there is to it.
kantigura
2024-11-08
★
★
★
★
★
Was going to give 3 stars, but adding 1 for Alice. Usually the taller than average women in a story are muscle bound dommy mommies, so it was nice to a see a normal tall ginger who loves to game. The main story is a bit out there, but that is nothing unusual for most AVN's. The story and romance move pretty quick as well. Grammar and spelling are better than most. LI's are varied and unique. Like that some are virgins and other's have had some life experience. Being bi is mentioned a lot, but at least so far it has all been as part of three ways with the MC. Overall enjoyable and looking foward to seeing where the story goes.
MikesDK
2024-09-27
★
★
★
★
★
I just dont get it....it starts out ok for like 5 mins making you think you have choices in this game, like keeping things professional with the boss and such, then you go to the club with your two new rooms mates which are both hot, MC then takes a piss and some extremly ugly whore walks in telling MC to fuck him, and MC goes "this is not me, i wouldent do this kind of thing" and then goes to fuck this ugly bitch....it makes 0 sense for MCs personalty, 0 sense for the story and it makes 0 sense to do that shit when he has 2 hot girls waiting on him. I can clearly see the plot from 50 miles away as well, MC and the ugly bitch was somehow drugged so they couldent stop wanting to fuck one another which changes nothing, its just a sad excuse to make forced sex shit and a piss poor plot seen a million times over and sure enough game turns into some mafia/syndicate story going even more crazy so yeah most defently not good and no forced sex scene in bathroom was not needed for story since you could just give MC the option to resist but still find it very weird, 0 need to force something the players dont want and story could still be the same. Not that it would make story much better, the first roommate Alice comes stright out saying she dosent mind sharing MC at all even though hes her very first boyfriend...it just to weird and idiotic and ofc everyone loves the idea of sharing MC....fuck me.... So its very very clear that this game is just yet another mindless fuckfest game, with 0 build-up and no choices, i will never understand why devs belives forcing shit on people will result in more support for the game and then make more money on it which is most devs goal, its simply just dosent work that way. And maybe 10 mins or so in, you already fucking one of the room mates as well, theres no romance or build-up with anyone really, it goes from 0 to 200mp/h in a second. Game also makes use of yet another idiotic way of forcing sex scenes on you, by dreams.....so when MC dreams he can now fuck the room mates in them... i just dont want to see any kind of sex scenes with a girl before i deside i want to be with said girl..... And if you go for another girl it goes stright to giving you lesbian vibes, i went for Alice the room mate and the girl missing a leg, when MC comes home with one the girl she has already texted the Alice to start up a 3-some....turning that down will then result in the girl saying she wll go into Alices room and see what she can do to make Alice happy.....so that means i now have to restart game to dump the one leg girl so that shit dosent happen. Also game shoots it self in the foot, if you want to play faithfull route its impossible and if you do undercover your yet again being forced into sex scenes you dont want and not going undercover will make you miss alot of content, its simply just awfull. Virgins scenes are also shit, even though they have hymen theres close to no pain and ofc no blood so very poor deflowering and virgin scene. Animations are average at best but some scenes has very bad cam angles so you cant see shit or its just to dark. Music is very nice has some with lyrics, proberly the best part of the game. Choices, multiple forced sex scenes and dream sex shit. I dont really see a way of saving this one, it would take to many changes.
LordWanze
2024-08-22
★
★
★
★
★
Another one of those ... The game pretents to have choices, then proceeds to force you into sex scenes. Not worth anyones time. The graphics are fine, if not up to date. The MC is not ugly, but mis figured. Doesn't help that the dev decided to focus a lot of pictures on his face. Visually it ruins a lot of scenes. The few LIs I met until the mentioned forced scene looked good. They seemed somewhat unique, although I read that they're basically rip-offs from another game. Of course several get ruined by (ex-)boyfriends and colorful stories about their sex life. All that weren't as as bad if you had any choice. But there aren't any. Only choices consists of skipping or seeing sex scenes. All relationships are forced as well, even with ruined LIs like engaged exes etc. Overall this is completely kinetic with meaningles choices that pretend to give the player any agency. The English is fine. Some wrong words, some misspelling. The dialogues feel unnatural but not unreadable. All in all a big disappointment.
An_Able
2024-08-20
★
★
★
★
★
[Re-reviewed at v0.14] So, been a couple of months and decided to try it again. I think the bump down combined with the other reviews tells you pretty much everything you need to know. If I had to put it into words, I just don't see that charm anymore. The parts of the game that I found charming stayed the same, so it's me that's changed, but without that charming veneer to brighten things up all that remains is the incredibly flawed game. Bad grammar, poor writing, boring and one-dimensional characters, eye-rolling levels of comedy, middling renders (at best), exhausting pace, and tons of porn logic. Can't really bring myself to give it one star, but it's certainly not deserving of three. [Reviewed at v0.10b4a] I'm gonna be real, the only reason I'm giving this 3 stars instead of 2 is because I find it oddly charming, because in truth this is an incredibly flawed game. The plot is fairly cookie-cutter for the AVN space, your parents were mysteriously killed and everything bad that's ever happened in your life is one big conspiracy, plus incest, plus cute roommates, plus sexy cougar boss, plus weirdly passive MC who somehow woos all the ladies, etc, etc, etc... You've read it a million times, and so have I. Additionally, this game suffers from a chronic need to make everyone okay with each other. You're attracted to both your roommates? They talked amongst themselves and are both fine with being a throuple. Seeing your first love (with whom you traded virginities) for the first time in three years and you've recently started dating your roommates and you also didn't speak with her all that time even after she lost a leg? No biggie, she forgives you and wants in on your throuple. You went on a first date with your virgin roommate and ended up bedding her and cumming inside her? No problem, she says she's always wanted to be a mother and life's too short to play it safe. See what I'm getting at? There's no drama, no conflict, no friction--everyone's just magically OK with everything, and that makes for a pretty boring story. But the worst, for me at least, is the machine-like nature of the dialogue. Every character talks like they're a robot, in the most unnatural way possible, explaining what they feel and why they feel it in a manner no person would (especially not with people they met a few days ago.) The truth is that people suck at being clear and candid, especially when it comes to their emotions, which is why every sentence spoken in this AVN feels like it was written by AI. And yet, I find the simplicity of this world to be weirdly charming. People say what they mean and mean what they say, everything just immediately works out fine, everyone's just happy to be there... Ultimately, if any of the things I pointed out tick you off, it's probably not worth the download. If none of that annoys you to the point that you'll still try it, maybe you too will be charmed by it.
eltharion83
2024-08-20
★
★
★
★
★
This VN is mediocre after all. Writing is right down the middle, mediocre. Not terrible, not good. English is mostly decent. The "story", as in the background, is developing slowly, everything else is at a fast pace up to a point where it's just ridiculous. Some things make no damn sense at all. Some examples: MC has had sex just once in his life with a long-term friend of his out of love. That doesn't stop him from having a quickie without any protection with some lesbian in a men's restroom at a night club on his first visit to one of those. Both couldn't hold back in the moment and both regret it seconds after just going their own way after this. Both think they have been drugged, but hey... No big deal (...)... Second example would be MC going on a date with his new roommate, a virgin girl who never had a date before in her life, who he "knows" for barely two days. She was nervous beforehand and MC thought it would be a good idea to fondle her private parts out in a public park right after they've had dinner. Totally out of character for the MC and even more so for this girl considering the provided backgrounds. Renders are good for the most part, dev seems to have his problems with facial expressions, they're often distorted, putting it mildly... "Animations" are as bad as they get. Barely any movement, no natural movement, looks like switching the same two pictures back and forth for the most part, resulting in "movements" of an inch or two here and there back and forth... Would be better off without animations at this part. Considering everything so far I'm somewhat generous in giving three stars here, I pondered giving two or three and evaluating the potential of this one as well as comparing this to other VNs I go with the three stars for now.
MD-Geist13
2024-08-18
★
★
★
★
★
So far so good, good start, story doesn't start off too bad, it depends a bit on how it continues. Characters are well done and the graphics are good too. Since it's still early days, we'll have to wait and see how it develops. 5☆ from me .