World

well I liked it it seems like it has a good future, still So many things are thrown on to my face ART: 4 Story 2 and half overall 3 Still yeah what is magic in this story most of the stuff is just modern.

Story all over the place, MC immediately calling people sluts, apparetnyl the relationships ahve been going on before you start, which is an odd choice. Biggest issue though is the weird black plastic dildo the MC has for a penis.

V0.1 er...what? yes that was my reaction from beginning, right through the middle, to the end that came very very quickly. Visual. art is the strong point here and that is with me taking liberties with the term 'strong'. not great looking but not uncomfortably so. just not even remotely erotic. no idea why the black dick... Novel. when i think novel i think some big global names from writers through the years. what i don't think of is dialogue written by a young teen boy who thinks a conversation with themselves is how all writers do it, regardless of who is apparently speaking. character? they all fell into the same blender. i suspect a boner was happening during the entire writing process. no doubt a max star game for some, but it looks like a quick throw together written on the fly to me. pure patreon bait. i will be fishing elsewhere

World [v0.1] Plot structure (story/events/writing): This is a confusing story; it's original in that certain things just happen out of nowhere. The story progresses along decently, IMO. The tags are correct for what you see in the game. There are minor grammatical errors. Graphics—Standard DAZ. The scenes are very well crafted. The models are believable, and the women have semi-normal proportions. The animation is decent. Gameplay— It's Ren'Py. It plays fine. The start screen looks cool. The saves are a pain to use. I've never seen save slots like this; you have 12 slots, but if you hover over a certain area, you can get more. I didn't like it. There are no issues with playability or performance. I'm not sure if there is music; I didn't come across any. There is a decent amount of content for a [v0.1]. (Opinions may vary.) Final words— The game has potential, but you're thrown into a mess of confusing story and conversations. The game feels like it was hastly written. The logic is off. Like out of nowhere, the MC becomes a Surfing Marvel character. More exposition is needed. The color choice for the MC's little soldier is odd, probably for shock value. IMO, the PR vibe in the thread is definitely not a plus for the game. 2 stars mainly for the confusing story; will up the score if the game improves.