Your Harem Will Be Mine

I’d seen the cover art for this game many times before I actually played it, and it’s great—well worth playing over and over again. Two main issues: First, the protagonist’s model is huge, and the proportions are a bit off, but this isn’t a major problem; I’m sure it can be improved. Second, there are quite a few female supporting characters, and some of their faces look very similar—at one point, I couldn’t tell them apart. The strengths are also very clear: the NTR storyline is outstanding. I enjoy seeing the many women around the male protagonist fall into potential crises, with each one at risk of being taken away by multiple male characters—and through various routes, whether out of sympathy, coercion, or other motivations. Lesly’s character model is beautiful, and the storyline is excellent. In particular, I’d love to see how the man on the train exploits her sympathy and affection—sometimes I prefer scenes where the woman takes the initiative, such as during sleep. Of course, the other routes are also well-developed, and the writing is thoughtful. As for future developments, I still hope the plot will build up slowly before reaching its climax, but I’m very concerned about updates—I hope the author updates as soon as possible. Also, I really like the female characters’ outfits, especially the stockings, and I hope to see more of them in the future. Overall, I’d give it 4.5 stars, but if updates could be faster, it would undoubtedly be a perfect score.

[v0.2] This is surprisingly good. Like way better than what you would expect from the title and the premise. I think a lot of people will be expecting a rather straightforward story about some pathetic cucked guy being delusional about getting a harem for revenge, and then getting cucked again. I mean... that IS kinda the premise, but the game transcends the confines of a basic porn story. First off, the MC is actually quite reasonable and likable. Like yeah, he wants to move on from his trauma and find another romance (or even a harem) among those women close to him, but he doesn't pressure them or use unsavory methods. In fact, it looks like he wants it to emerge completely naturally. He wants real love. And yes, this is the basis for the NTR choices, by making him dense and passive in his pursuit, others can swoop in. But hear me out and ignore the gooning aspect for a sec. The characters are very well written and honestly super endearing because they are not one dimensional caricatures. It's a masterpiece by porn game standards, being able to portray each character with a distinctive voice and personality without making it a caricature or using exposition dumps to tell us what kinda characters they are. We use subtext and just watch how these characters interact to get immersed in the narrative. The set pieces are LONG and drawn out. If MC is in therapy, we sit through the whole therapy. If MC is in acting class, we sit through the whole acting class. But it doesn't bore you (at least for me)... Because it's written by a person. It's not some flowery LLM written bullshit that plagues basically every game out there these days. What stands out is that all (well, most) the characters are believable. They interact and respond to each other without creating that uncanny feeling so common in porn game dialogues/banter. The way they interact is not contrived for the sake of porn. Well, until it is. You see, when it comes to the NTR and porn aspect, there is what I can only consider an intentional effort to subvert the characterizations. It can suddenly become incredibly, ridiculously, porny and farfetched on a dime. If you have read like a 2 or 4 page hentai doujin where the first part shows an ideal girl that seems good, and then the second part shows how depraved she is in reality? That's kind of how this game does it, at least for the side girls. As I said, the set pieces are very long. New girls that were just introduced are fleshed out as well-roudned characters. And then we see a side of them that is just completely depraved. For the main girls, it follows a bit more standard corruptoin arc, though. 5* could be overselling it. It certainly isn't perfect, but it is excellent. Some people might find the random porn shift jarring. Some people will find the scenes drag on for too long. There are some plot points like the age of these characters that left me confused. But I honestly think this level of character writing is very rare, and I want to acknowledge that.

This is an odd one, but I have to give 5 stars for stunningly beautiful girls and pretty good porn scenes with them. Personally I could do without the somewhat excessive NTR/NTS/whatever theming, but it's not bad enough to subtract a star. The plot is a strange mixture of really good and polished and extreme porn logic / NT* fetish logic with people behaving really strangely. Development speed seems a bit slow, so that when Episode 2 came out, I had completely forgotten I had ever played Episode 1. Episode 1 consists primarily of the introduction and scenes at school. Episode 2 is primarily about acting class, which in the author's hands is a very promising setting. I am very much looking forward to where all of this is going.

Has a lot of potential, and unlike other people who somehow thought the title wasn't an NTR title I went into it expecting exactly what the dev is making. You have a (potential) harem and others are stealing it. I did expect it to be a single rival NPC stealing your harem but this works too. Rating it 4* purely because there was over a year between updates and we still dont have any scenes of the MC's harem actually being stolen. Lots of sex scenes with side characters but 0 scenes with the main girls other than groping. At this rate we may finally have a scene with a main girl by 2028.

Models - 3/5 -Those 8 girls you see in this thread are very nice but then you can be sure theres at least 2-3 characters in game that look like just as them, making it hard to know whos who. - The MC model is unusually large, i think its unnecessary and odd, dunno why he thought its a good idea. Animations - 3/5 -You can tell its definitely made by an amateur, its not bad but not too good either, its enough i guess. Audio - 3/5 -Sex sound is not perfect but its better than nothing so its appreciated. -Background music dont even remember it exists, its that unmemorable. Story - 4/5 -Its engaging enough, keeps you interested and just roll with it. I think its made well, nothing feels rushed and things take time to see and take place which is good. Dialogue - 4/5 -For the most part its actually readable, like you dont try to skip as much, finally you can take your time, enjoy and read.

I love literally everything about this work! The art, the plot, how it flows! If there are updates, they're real, and they just showed me a fake organ and we're off! I really like the author in general, I've played his previous work, it's amazing!!! Thanks! I'd like more like this!

It's really to bad this game focuses on NTR! I absolutely love the visual style of the characters. I did give this title a try because I don't mind a little NTR especially when it's just setting up a story and providing motivation., when the girl is another mans girl to begin with e.g. not a love interest ( LI ) of the POV, And I do like NTR games where the objective is to ( or at least provided for ) a challenge to avoid the NTR. I do have zero tollerance for games with SIMP/Cuck mail POV characters. This game does seem to have an "avoid the NTR" path but looks doomed to fail. On the strength of the visual style alone I am going to give it one more play thought where I read more careful. If the +LUCK Path keeps the POV from being a total SIMP I may follow this a bit. But if it's all about a cuck POV its going into my trash bin. I do hope the Dev does a NON-NTR game.. because again I absolutely LOVE the style of his characters and his visual storytelling is solid.

I like what's going on here, but the title doesn't fit what's happening. The title should be closer to "Losing Norman's Harem" instead of "Your Harem will be mine" which would imply you're playing an antagonist character there to cucked the MC, Norman. Really, you're just some entity witnessing Norman get cucked, and slightly influencing him to either get more cucked or getting him some scraps. I think the writing is engaging enough to read but it might benefit from focusing on how your choices makes thing worse for Norman. Like if we had to really make him lose his harem to the "ugly bastard" archetypes you see hinted at. The setup is there, where you got impossible charming handsome MC, and your goal is to fuck him over as some random entity. I do like the characters though. They all fit an archetype that will satisfy a decent amount of people. I personally really like the look of the therapist character. 10/10

REVIEW (v0.1) The game tries to combine elements of an NTR storyline with a harem protagonist, and the result is not compelling nor satisfying. First, the name of the game is misleading. It sounds like the MC already has a harem and someone else is coming in to "take it over", but instead the premise is that you're a harem protagonist that is fated to not get the girls. As such, the dev appears to be trying to subvert the typical tropes of the harem genre. This is an interesting premise! While there is a lot of leeway in how this subversion can be done, I think the game shoots itself in the foot with many of the narrative choices it makes from the get-go: > You don't get to name the MC (Norman), and the game even makes a point to say 'this is HIS story, not ours'. The point of a harem MC is that they are a self-insert to create a power fantasy, so deliberately making the choice to NOT follow this (and thus subvert the dynamic into a kind of "reverse" power fantasy) is strange. Even stranger is that you still make dialogue choices for the MC, which creates further dissonance between the MC being a self-insert and their own character. I think the game should commit to one. > The MC is conventionally attractive (FREAKISHLY tall, fit, described as handsome, big dick?, etc.), which is typical of a harem protagonist. The problem with this is that it limits the reasons as to why a character would choose to be with someone else, and thus makes potential NTR where the girl chooses to be with another man over the MC less believable. > Many of the characters are already falling head over heels for the MC (e.g. sister and childhood friend), which means EITHER the MC is going to have to fumble the bag so hard that they are no longer putty in his hands, which only serves to make the MC less likable/believable; OR are going to be involved in some kind of ultra-contrived NTR scenario that lacks much emotional weight (blackmail, being tricked, etc), which likewise weakens the characterization of the involved LIs. Each of these elements combine to give me the impression that neither the NTR nor harem elements will be delivered particularly well (the dev even outright stated there will be no harem elements), so I don't have high hopes for the narrative of future updates. The writing quality is also generally poor; as many have already pointed out much of the game (and ESPECIALLY the opening) is incredibly verbose. I think the entire script for each scene could be slashed in half and the game would be better for it. The game does some things well, of course: > The models are obviously very attractive. > The renders are of okay quality and composition; shading could use some work, but the "focus" in most of the CGs is apparent. > The game has some decent music and SFX during sex scenes. I would give the game three stars simply for the renders and existing scenes, but due to the overly lengthy dialogue I'm reducing it to two, since it feels like a waste of time for said renders.

Right out of the gate the game is extremely repetitive and clumsily narrated with excessive and pointless exclamations. The character will tell you the same basic information for many times longer than necessary, all while being incredibly unlikeable and neurotic. The introduction needs a serious rewrite. Animations and renders look fine. Look at the pictures, you decide for yourself how you feel. (there are some badly posed shots and composition is average, but you can see the model quality is fine) The plot is flimsy, characters often don't have believability, pacing is atrocious. There are some bones to this that could be worked with, several concepts have traction, but v0.1 fumbles it all for now. I recommend against trying it until what it has so far gets heavily rewritten. None of the ideas are bad, it's just the execution of it. I would say key things to do are to tighten up the exposition at the start and make the main character more likable. It doesn't feel like NTR if it doesn't feel like anyone should have wanted him to begin with.

v0.1 Review I downloaded this expecting a revenge game and was very disappointed. You play Norman who is 8-feet-tall and it makes every scene look like the part in Alice in Wonderland after she eats the cake. Norman is very sad that his wife cheated on him so he's moved back home. He's also in college despite being 30 and you might think "oh, he never finished and now he's starting over" or "he's an undercover journalist" but the youngest person at the school is 27 so maybe it's a special school or something. Norman has decided to get back at his wife by having lots of sex and proceeds to do this by... not having any sex. This game is extremely sex negative for an AVN about having revenge sex. For example, one of your "targets" is your childhood friend who has always had a crush on you. Instead of asking her out you spend all your time together telling her that you can't be together because you're still married and "what will people say?" Also, half the teachers at your adult daycare school are former porn stars or erotic novelists for some reason and every conversation involves Norman acting as though they're aliens and being surprised that they're so much like us. It's a visual novel so gameplay is pretty straightforward: occasionally you'll be talking to a woman and be given the option to reply to something she's saying. Giving a normal person response like "Oh, I see, that must have been difficult for you" gets you a Luck (Netori) point while belittling them gives you an NTR (netorase) point. There's also some mommy and daddy issues and a whole thing with one of your sisters being an adult model and the other one being sent to a convent because you were grooming her. It's a lot. I could see a thoughtful VN about Yao Ming struggling to get back into the dating game after a bad breakup. Or a revenge porn game where Giant Gonzales corrupts his ex's friends and family. Perhaps a sexy school game featuring Manute Bol? Or a family incest game about Andre the giant. This game is what you get if you put all of those in a blender and hit puree. The result doesn't taste good.

First i want to start with downsides. Text repeats itself, like a lot. It is almost like in a enforcing a propaganda manner. I get it, dev is trying to improve the relationships between characters yet this is not the right way to do so. Other downside is the game is a bit buggy but nothing gamebreaking. Now you might be wondering why i rated it 5 star despite few obvious flaws. Because game does what it wants to accomplish. There is a guy who will get NTRed by the harem he is trying to build. Story is simple yet direct, girls are hot and they look unique, scenes are really good. Also it has choices, i don't they will change the entire direction of the game but still they effect few things. If you are expecting a complicated novel type of game which insane mechanics then this game isn't for you. If you are looking for hot ntr scenes then this game serves it really well.

Compliments: The game has a clear idea. The story of a man trying to form his harem is easy to follow. There is a lot of art and many animations that show the work put into it. The point system is simple. You earn Luck Points and NTR Points, which unlock different scenes. Criticisms: The game has bugs that affect play. The text repeats itself and uses too many exclamations. The story is very simple and does not give many choices. Ratings: Creativity: 6/10 Playability: 4/10 Fun: 5/10

Really good game, incredible art, enjoyable gameplay, and great characters! Perfectly matches the type of gameplay I'm looking for in a renpy game. The dialogue is good and understandable but a bit repetitive. The mechanics are good. No bugs were found. Hope the following updates will still be as good as this content. The only negative point would be the 1-star review. It doesn't make sense. The body proportions are not odd.

I was pleasant surprised with this game. Even been the first released the plot got me trapped. Usually NTR based games are only based on the NTR itself, humiliating, cuckold and how MC passively suffer. They don't have any interesting topic behind nor a real story. This game managed to put the MC story in first place keeping a close look on MC family, fiends, college and work without loosing the story progress. Maybe some of you claims about the image art, in fact I don't care if it's the highest quality, sometimes i don't even notice any difference, but i can say that the females are pretty hot and sex scenes are pretty hot as well. With that said, i found and original kind of game and with a simple first release the got me really into the plot a wanting for more. I hope as the game progress keep me surprising me.

It's not a 5stars yet (its the realease) , just a good start and i want encourage the creator. So it's good start, you have a good story for a porn game, a story for justify porn scene. Some choice,if you want skip scene, the models are good. No reason to not give a chance, a lot of potentiel.