Zero Sum

VERSION: v1.0 EP.1 SUMMARY: Not terrible, but has some fundamental issues. RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Models, LIs look fairly decent...some much better than others though. Audio is fine, nice to have audio other than music, the ambient and other are a nice touch. UI/UX is generally fine, nothing that seems to be an issue and works in its simplicity, even not have dialogue box or font settings are fine. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Some character expressions are just not good, they look awkward and clumsy. Writing is not bad, but expressions/saying or figures of speech are mixed up and structured wrong. The dialogue is often simply poor and nonsensical, almost like several people wrote the dialogue and there is a lack of cohesion. Premise is poorly constructed, the intro of the MC and him starting on this new project just feels rushed and not done smoothly. Added to the above the porn logic of the office scene as it plays out is just really amateurish and there is no subtlety or attempt at even creating a narrative and story here. Same with many scenes that are just sudden, like the idea is to shock you with random events. World construction and logic leave some to be desired, like the MCs bedroom access being a ladder...WTF While I can appreciate the music it does not fit the scenes and actually make it pretty awkward, like some porno from the 80s or a soap opera. There technically are animations, several are more stills that are just looped back and forth in a very primitive way. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) Story just starts, the MC goes to work at his office just to say good bye, there is no context, the player doesnt really learn to care of give a shit, so why have this at all. World construction leaves some question marks like how the MCs bedroom is furnished, but its in the air, and he has to get to it from a fixed vertical ladder against the wall...wtf, does he sleep in a tree-house? Nice that you can "disable" futa content, but fking poor how its implemented. "woman" is drawn to MC...stupid dialogue, followed by stupid prompt enable to disable futa content, result "woman" has to go, END...wtf. No care in the world how this is thrown together...This is then followed by the MCs friend banging the only real chick and not futa in your apartment while the MC sleeps...is that not some sort of NTR shit right there? You decide, but I raised my eyebrow to that... TLDR: I am unimpressed, this AVN feels desperate in its structure and writing, I feel there are rushed elements and poor story/plot construction, same with character development. Its like it was just thrown in a blender and said there you go. Visually its not bad looking and there is some interesting concept here but its just poorly put together and that kills it for me. I mean the dialogue is just really a lot of shit, its bad and characters can spout random things are the worst moments. I would say that there are elements that are decent but others less so causing a disparity in quality and a lack of attention in many areas. If the developer shifts focus to balance the quality, this could be a decent enough AVN, but right now the writing/dialogue is just torture.

A realistic, very cynical story without fairytale elements. I think that's what hooked me. Controversial ethical situations. Models that look like people, not comic book characters. Some good, hot scenes. Overall, a good start, a solid 4. I hope the story doesn't disappoint.

Futa is avoidable. Not a lot of content but it is a first release and i would say it is a fair amount of content. Animation are really good probably not AI and even if they are it is indistinguishable , models are nice and beautiful, and the sex scenes are hot, pretty realistic cum especially on the first scene in the office i could even say the most realistic cum on body i have seen apart from reality 4/5 cause it's a first release Overall very promising worth it a try