30 Days

by AllNatural

Uncensored Windows Linux Mac Android
Versionv0.5.8
EngineRen'Py
Released2026-01-23
Updated2026-04-09
LanguageEnglish

In a not so distant future, more than 20 people, full of dreams and hopes (and secrets), are recruited to participate in an extreme Reality Show. Little by little they will realize that they made the worst mistake of their lives by agreeing to participate. Here, they will know the true meaning of the word "elimination". What do you think? Will you reach the end of the 30 days of extreme coexistence and competition or will you be Eliminated?​

v0.5.8 - 402 new images, for a total of 5,890. - 10,053 words corresponding to new dialogue, bringing the total so far to 99,466 words. - 5 new animations, bringing the total to 42 animations on video. - Added 2 new sound effects. - Added 90 new audio files for Mother and Guards dialogue. - Extra gameplay: 45 to 50 minutes, playing only one route and the longest one of all. - Save games with names implemented. - Fixed an issue where Mother and Guards voice lines would keep playing until they naturally stopped during fast forward, which could be pretty annoying. Now they stop when they should, throughout the entire game. - Fixed issue with white screen borders when shaking the camera. - Implemented the remaining variables so the future information interface shows whether a character is already crossed off the "Fuck List" or if there’s still "unfinished business". - Fixed everything needed in some poorly implemented texts without a narrator, making future translations easier. v0.5.6 - 726 new images (totaling 5488, from now on I only include the actual image files from each update’s image folders, leaving out other files needed for some things like videos that only end up bloating the changelogs). - 17 new animations, including the initial Logo animation (for a total of 37 video animations). - 12,951 extra words of new dialogue (for a total of 89,413). - 2 new music pieces. - 1 new audio file for Mother. - Extra gameplay in this version is aprox. 1 hour and 30 minutes, depending on reading speed. This is split across the 3 “routes” as follows: - Rachel: around 35 minutes. - Pamela: around 30 minutes. - Emma (not actually Emma): around 25 minutes. For reference, what you saw in Asami’s "route" was about 50 to 60 minutes. The times were measured from the exact moment the divergence begins in each case, which is basically right after Kaoru talks directly to Josephine while showing Asami that everyone’s a mutant. So if you want to check everything (and you should), that’s where you need to stop skipping dialogue and actually read. And of course you need your save right at the choice between the 4 girls, pick one, then skip ahead until that point… Sorry but there’s no other way since the choice doesn’t pay off right away. v0.5.5 This is the first time BOTH ROUTES get updated at once. They both kick off right after Kaoru’s "Surprise" moment. Even though both routes converge at dawn of the second day, the dialogues are completely different almost until the end, so don’t think that just playing through one side means you’ve seen it all. New words: 15,969 (for a total of 76,462). New images: 1,088 (for a total of 4,802). New animations: 5 (for a total of 20. There are actually more than 20, but this only counts the ones converted to video). New audio files: 18, all for Mother’s new dialogues. New music tracks: 4. Extra gameplay: About 1 hour and 40 minutes (playing both routes). With this, the total gameplay is now around 8 to 8 and a half hours. The warning for the first decision was fully reworked. It now pops up before the choice, with a new look, better visibility, and a clearer explanation about why it matters. Every warning and clarification from the game’s "narrator" were treated in a similar way to what was mentioned above. Small tweaks in some old dialogues, probably won’t notice them if you replay everything. I don’t even remember myself xD. Added a tiny new warning at the beginning of the game because of the changes I made to the game’s distribution system. v0.5 This is the continuation of the side path, where the MC finds out that Linda is going to die anyway... - An extra 1h 40m of gameplay (bringing the total to about 6.5 – 7 hours aprox.) - 16,001 new words of dialogue added (bringing the total to 60,493 words) - 804 brand-new images and 6 new animations (the total is now 3,714 images and 14 animations). - 26 new audio files for Mother and the Guards' dialogues. - One image was redone to reflect a small change inside The Fortress. - The Decisions menu got shifted to the side and made smaller to be less in the way. - First official port for Android... no compression for now. Future versions will be much lighter. v0.4b - Around 1 hour and 20 minutes of additional gameplay in this version (if you go through everything)... Keep in mind this is based on my reading speed, so it may vary from person to person. - 12,611 new words in the dialogues... Bringing the overall total to 44,916 words (this was referring to version 0.4, but after revisions and modifications, the total word count is now 44,492.) - 724 new rendered images plus 8 videos (first time using videos, but everything is running smoothly). This brings the total image count to 2,910. - 7 images redone: 2 in the menu and 5 within the game. These correspond to updates reflecting small appearance changes for 3 characters (Josephine, Katherine and Ronald). - Added two new background ambience tracks. - All dialogues received a deeper revision to make them flow more naturally for English speakers. Therefore, some dialogues remain unchanged, others have been trimmed slightly, and some expanded, but the original meaning hasn't changed, so you don't need to re-read everything... The dialogues of Mother and Guards aren’t affected by this, as they’re meant to sound intentionally forced. Important Note: This version features the first POSSIBLE Game Over. If you mess up, your MC could end up dead. Make sure to save the game before making any decisions... It's not a guaranteed death, and even if it happens, it won't be right away. So, once again, do yourselves a favor and save the game before making any decisions. This is in constant development, evolving. I've added an important extra variable, so I recommend replaying at least from the point where you had to choose between the four girls. If you don't, you might miss some dialogue variations and/or a small extra scene (depending on your choice), and in the future, the game might behave strangely. If you think it’s necessary to replay everything from the start or don't have a save at the point of that choice, remember you can use the 'Skip Unseen Text' option in the Preferences menu (so you won’t be interrupted when skipping because of text changes). Once you select it, just hold down the CTRL key inside the game and you’ll be right back at the choice in no time. v0.3 - 1034 new images, divided into 784 normal images (some of them are used in sequences anyway as I have done in other occasions) and 250 images corresponding to real animations in 30 FPS. With this the final count of images in the game amounts to 2186 for now. - The new words (corresponding to all the character dialogues) in this version are 9835. Given my actual reading speed, this converts to more or less one hour and ten minutes of new gameplay. The total number of words in the entire game, with this now amounts to 32305. - All saved games from previous versions are still compatible and I have finally (yes, this time I really did it) eradicated a small bug related to the starting point of those saved games. This update is entirely dedicated to expanding the events in the secondary branch, where Sally dies. So if you've already played the other side, don't do it again because there's nothing new there... The next update (v 0.4) is the one that will continue the main path... Anyway, I imagine that everyone who plays this is trying both paths... I guess, I sincerely hope so... because the information is compartmentalized between both routes. If you want to get a clearer picture of "what the hell is going on", you have to really explore the two paths. v0.2b - The old version of Emma has completely disappeared from the game. That means that a total of 407 images have been redone. This also largely solves several of the poorly rendered images at the beginning of the game, although there are still a few that need to be retouched in the future... - The game Menu has been changed to something a little more modern to give it a personal touch and not leave the old default menu. - Final interactions with Emma and Asami (hot scenes at the end of the current game) have been completed. Therefore now the four options are open to choose freely. - Due to the above, 103 new images have been added corresponding to the scenes with Emma and Asami. - The introduction scene of the "new Emma" was removed as it was no longer necessary. - Fixed small problems at the starting point of saved games. Now EVERYTHING works perfectly. - Finally, the total sum of words of all dialogues is now 22,470. And the total number of images is 1170. v0.2 - 488 new images (for a total of 1067) that follow the story of the main path. - Approximate gameplay time this version: One hour and fifteen minutes (which makes a total of almost 3 hours playing everything). - Total words (sum of both versions): 21,328 - Sound: 8 new songs and 5 new sound effects. v0.1a Initial Release
masterdc1976 2026-04-06
version 0.5.8 classical NV where the Mc has a big penis and the girls just cant wait for their turn. Visually it is okay, not great but above average and interesting, many different girls, not too extended. The writing and Story is good. Cons : not much sex, The Mc is supposed to do 4 girls a day but so far its the 4 day and only 2 girls sort of....
Bloogonis 2026-01-09
I'm still working through the threads of one half of the story so far and just needed to give this the five stars it deserves. Dancing around through the routes makes me really feel Kaoru is going through and its so fun... for a game, it would wreck me if I had to live this way. If I had to nit pick anything the boulder route was kind of jarring with how long the story goes before the change the choice causes. But yeah totally just a nit pick. Edit: finished all routes now, One side of the fork at the beginning is just better and handles the themes and character interactions better. wouldn't call it a dud route so still five stars overall.
NerdlyKun 2026-01-09
Great models but mid story and forced sex with shitheads. Choices are literally the most important thing here other than the actual story and you skimped out on the relevant places to put choices. Its a good thing this was a free experience.
AlienCatGames 2025-12-05
The game was a pleasant surprise. The battle-royale theme works very well and draws you in immediately, and you enrich it with layers of mystery and narrative that keep the story engaging, especially the idea that the characters are mutants with unique abilities. The voice acting for the androids and Mother is also a great touch. Another strong point is the facial expressions: they're highly detailed, with careful attention to wrinkles and expression lines. The effort to give the game a cinematic feel is evident, with plenty of renders and animated (or semi-animated) sequences. As for areas that could be improved, the texts and scenes sometimes feel a bit long to me, although this largely depends on each player's preferences. Even so, overall it's a very enjoyable experience, and the hard work and dedication behind the project really show. Excellent job!
Mii88 2025-11-24
This one started okay but as you go on the MC's personality is all over the place. It begins as a Hunger Games knock off but then goes dark very quickly. There's no fun and adventure exploring a new world, no pace in the writing, you're just straight into a death game. Added to this I can't get a hold of the MC. Sometimes he's kind, other times cold and emotionless, others he's verging on cruel but there's no explanation as to why. Is this a medical condition; as others have said? Is the MC bipolar or has some sort of personality disorder or is this just inconsistent/poor writing? Is he going to be an antihero? I don't mind if that's the case, I just want to know why or to be given the option to choose. Everything just seems so forced both in the story and for you the reader. Clearly the one thing that the dev succeeds with is making you the reader, feel out of control along with the MC, however this just gets tiring after a while. It's just not for me. If your looking for dark and depressing rather than fun and entertaining, this one is for you.
Saphfire 2025-11-22
One of the best games here. The premise is new and refreshing. Somewhat "normal" women with realistic proportions. Writing is great, animations are awesome. Renders are not top of the top but they are more then satisfying.
consumptionist 2025-11-22
V0.5.5 can't say i am liking this one. visually it is okay, not great but okay, does the job until you get to sex, then it's lacking intimacy. the writing is off the charts. the MC is bipolar as he is one way then the opposite randomly before we even get to meet most of the characters. his character is on a rubber band pinging this way and that and even has the writer confused. kind of weird when you consider the quite basic plot that is being delivered is so messy in it's delivery any hopes i had for this project have vanished as not only has it undergone changes but it has taken a year and a half at least to complete the first day and it has to rely solely on some sex scenes to keep any interest, which for me it has failed to do. failure to pre-plan is a plan to fail dev and nothing here suggests planning. adding visuals to your VN is the LAST step in the development process or you lose any hype you generate. good luck
Leobbb 2025-11-21
A pretty interesting game, something that is actually refreshing with how the nudity and sex is nested in the story. Usually other games with VN style gameplay have some long periods of normal narrative, then maybe a sex scene, then they go back to normal again and so on, which makes them pretty boring. Here we have some hot stuff due to the premise of the story and having to go topless or naked due to that is a pretty nice touch. That being said the visual side could use some upgrade, I'm pretty sure you can squeeze a lot more quality from daz studio. Most girls look average, some look decent, but maybe only one or two are really pretty. And the renders overall look not that great. I wish there were fewer of them but higher quality. Also I'm not a fan of mc being not really in control of what is going on. So far it looks like he has to do (which means you as a player) whatever the ai mother or the precognition girl tells him to do, making him a weak and indecisive dumb guy with the nice penis as the only redeeming quality, which is never a good idea for a protagonist. I hope he absorbs that precognition ability as soon as possible to free him from being a pushover otherwise it can become unbearable. Overall not a bad game that could get better in future. The estimated play time is overstated in the changelog. I finished both paths reading everything in much less time.
Hephannon 2025-09-19
Awful Looked like a fun game with the "Hunger games" promises, played it for about an hour Suffered seeing the wimp beta MC being bossed around, always apologizing for existing, getting constantly blueballed and happy of it The girls are nice tho, but no action like at all, seen a few boobs and "your" dick (which is huge, but no balls!!) , while everybody is talking about fucking like rabbits and half the girls are nymphos or repressed, wtf ?? Then there was the "volunteer choice", which is a game over choice, even after you change your mind (which isn't even a choice) and end up not being one !! And the dev tells you you was wrong because you "didn't think" ?? About what, as you had no idea what was behind ? That's too much, quit and uninstalled, bye
RGMedia 2025-08-16
What starts as an intriguing setup quickly collapses into pure porn logic. The premise: a competition with four teams, each consisting of one guy and four girls. You can already see where this is going. The author apparently couldn’t imagine anything more compelling than women being forced to orbit one man. If that’s supposed to be a “fantasy,” it says more about the developer’s repressed frustrations than anything believable because in reality, no woman would want to be stuck in a situation where romance is framed like this. From the start, player choice is almost nonexistent. You don’t get to pick your team; the four girls are forced on you, and so are the sex scenes. For something advertised as a choice-driven game, it plays completely linear, what’s called kinetic. And not in a good way. The competition itself? Losers are killed off, including the girls. Personally, I can’t stand when characters are disposed of this way, especially when the player has no say in it. One example: if you let the two girls at the beginning hook up with the MC, one of them is killed off later. So the game punishes you for liking characters that clearly weren’t the “intended” main heroines. Try to follow another path, and those girls get eliminated. It’s obvious this is a “developer’s route or nothing” kind of game. Points are gained mostly through sex forced sex, in fact. Who, when, and how isn’t really up to you. One scene even has a character say she doesn’t like anal, but “for the points” she does it anyway. That’s how fetishes are handled: not as optional choices but forced content. The result? It’s not an interactive romance, it’s a queue of interchangeable women lining up to service the MC. There’s also a half-baked subplot where people are revealed to be mutants, including the MC. It feels tacked on, like the author realized too late the story had no real backbone and tried to add “depth.” It doesn’t work. The MC himself is the typical childish, submissive archetype, cringey and unrelatable. Random erections appear out of nowhere, which only underlines the author’s middle-school mentality when it comes to writing men. Visuals? Generic. A few body types, sure, but nothing stands out. The girls’ outfits are just bland athletic gear, like the designer had no budget or imagination. Animations are mediocre at best, serviceable, not impressive. There’s a bit of music and sound effects, which helps slightly, but not enough to elevate things. In the end, what could’ve been a great story-driven game is gutted by lazy writing and uninspired design. No build-up, no character development, just a conveyor belt of sex scenes dictated by the developer’s fetishes. Instead of tension or romance, the girls act like brainless NPCs who exist only to sleep with the MC. This game is shallow, predictable, and aggressively unoriginal. Potential wasted. I can’t recommend it.
nutka 2025-08-04
I am reviewing the 0.5 version This is not Running Man nor the Hunger Games but an even worse game show. Pure dystopia! You're there just because you want to win a prize and you have no idea what to expect. You will meet a very diverse ensemble and many of them you will fall in love with; not only you the MC, but you the player. In any case, many of them will be falling in love with you. And they are very kind. Each in their own way. I haven't seen characters like this in other games on this site. That's why this game here is unique. Not everyone will like the game, but I can only recommend it because it really hooked me. The world, of which we have no idea, is outlined in a short text into and the dialogs of the characters. You have to imagine a lot of things or play a different path to experience it from a different perspective to get an overall picture of the world that has been created. The game is very dialog-heavy. The graphics are good, the emotions well expressed. Transitions between images are good and help to digest the dialog and what you have just experienced. The animations are sometimes mechanical sometimes good, the angle changes to get a spatial impression are good (I don't really need animations in a RenPy game, but they are there). The background noise is perfect, the music is there when you need it and is well chosen. The synthetic NPCs are dubbed by an AI, the human NPCs and the MC are not. The decisions you have to make are stunning, spiced up with a dash of random chance. Both build up your character in a hidden way, which will eventually™ determine your character The story is already written. This is credible because a character can see into the future and spoil it. The developer just has to finish rendering the story and you'll like what they get out of an ancient graphics card. If you can, support them. They are very active with timely weekly reports, and even in this dubious forum they take the time to exchange with us. As I said before, the characters are unique here and you haven't seen them in any other game. You haven't seen a game like this either. Try it!
Splaster 2025-05-23
An extremely enjoyable game. A true choose your own adventure that actually has consequences for your actions. I am looking forward to what comes in the next chapters. The writing in good, the renders have been getting better and better as the developer issues updates.
Mar_Bude 2025-05-16
[0.5] Great execution of a really interesting world and plot. The player actually seems like a real guy not just some idiot or rapist. The women are also very distinct and dosent just jump the MC. The world feels like it exist outside of the MC and isn't just made of th MC
UgoGini 2025-03-25
It's really well done. It's a clever idea, with well-defined characters that are well-developed. The dialogues are intriguing, and the passion is established in an almost real way. It's great, and we're excited to see what happens next.
kameohawk 2025-03-10
It's... okay but the story is kinda paper thing. So it's the hunger games, kinda. Except rather than kill anyone it's all about dicking. That's.... fine but the issue is it seems no one knows much about anything, or if they do they aren't sharing so as a result the player doesn't know. The game starts a spiel about how reality tv kinda became stale and basically the sex and the violence had to be ramped up to keep people interested. Makes sense as that's kinda what we're seeing now but that's it. From that point it starts with the MC waking up in a game and he wants to win. But the MC seems to know precisely nothing about anything. He doesn't know the game beyond what he's told when he's there and as the game processes he seems to be taken aback at some of the things which happen. So the MC is just as clueless as the player and it's jarring. Even if this gameshow hasn't been done before was there not similar ones? Nothing to give a hint? It's not helped that it seems some characters do know what's going on, but instead chose not to say and play the "I can't tell you right now" nonsense which is always a poor crutch for storytelling issues. I think the game just suffers from odd porn logic nonsense. Like the premise is very obviously set up where the women have to do stuff with the guys but everyone seems to just be down with it, almost absurdly so. Which kinda suggests they know what the game is, and they might but it then means the MC's own ignorance to be kinda baffling. How does everyone know him? Or maybe it's just the women who are told but as it's never addressed it's just a plot hole. Oh and did I say there were people who have powers in this game? Cause there is, it's never explained until it's said but yup so.... yeah...
MikesDK 2025-03-03
Started out really loving the story, but then it turned to porn logic and story went to shit, MC is in a competition where there are 4 teams, each team has one guy and 4 girls. You dont get to deside much as the player your 4 team members are forced on you and so are sex scenes with them, so its clearly not a choice driven game which is to bad since it would have been a million times better without going all out porn logic. As for the people losing in the competition they simply gets killed off and that include girls, yet another thing im not really a fan of, unless you have a say in the matter as the player. If you allow the two girls at the start to get it on with MC one of them will get killed off? i mean wtf is that about? i liked the 2 girls better then the 2 main girls that dev clearly forces on you...so try to pick some other route and they get killed off? rofl no clue what dev are thinking but clearly its a dev route game or nothing and that is just not a game for anyone. And ofc one of the main aspects of gaining points is by having sex aka forced sex with whoever whenever and that makes it feel very very kinetic and it is 100% kinetic right now, all you deside is who to fuck first and thats it. Theres also some weird side plot where people are mutans of some kind and that includes the MC. The MC feels very submissive and as always very childish like so many MCs, not sure why this is the standard its cringy as hell, also the getting a boner from nothing is getting old..... Girls look pretty decent and there are a bit of diversity in builds as well which is nice, but when you arent free to pick yourself it all feels a bit pointless. Animations are meh, i would say average at best. Theres a little music and some sound effects so it helps a little. As for choice its like i said very kinetic and i expect it to go on as such, it already has forced sex scene with one girl and one forced pick a girl out of 4 to fuck, so its pretty clear what this will be like, as one forced LI also said in game is that she dont like anal but for points they have to do it, meaning fetishes will most likely be forced as well. Its pretty clear that dev will deside everything when it comes to who you fuck and who MC lusts for even if its the most ugly LI which it is....so why not just make it all out kinetic and give it the tag so the players who hate not having choices can stay clear from the game. It had potential to be a great game with a fun and decent story, but when it turns into a mindless fuckfest it loses everything it had going, no build-up with girls, they are all just ready to jump on MCs dick like mindless whores and they are pretty much just lining up in a que going one by one to fuck MC, this makes it insanely boring.
yeetermcgee123 2024-12-21
Weird game. Throws you right into it with no background, unfortunately the dialogue is not very good. This is one of those where every character wants to jump the MC immediately. As far as AVNs go, this is about average overall.
Asteroid609 2024-11-01
Looks very good, nice supernatural elements in survival game. Feels realistic and some of the renders for the girls are very good, I especially like the Megan(2nd) render. The design for the girls are a bit modest compared to my tastes, but seems realistic. Engaging plot with some mystery and the MC is not a wimp but a nice guy overall, he's not a degenerate but can hold his own. Characters all have varied personalities as well , and some choices have very significant impact on the story, when it comes to character interaction. Currently looking very promising and hope it blooms well as well. Though I do have one complaint,it's that some chars are kinda not meant to interact at all, so I do get it that they have different personalities which make them so, but maybe introduce some kinda weaknesses for them which can be exploited by MC or something similar so that interaction becomes possible with them.
Deleted member 2093814 2024-10-10
I thought this might be a really good AVN as the story plot has a hunger games type vibe. It turned out pretty average so far. I find having choices in an AVN always ranks highly for me. SPOILERS Unfortunately the dev wants to retain such tight control over his story that it literally feels like a kinetic novel with most choices being made for the player. Choices I didn't appreciate for the most part. The dev picks the girls you get in your team and who he thinks the MC likes...i.e. MC fawning over Emma...dude i'm not interested in Emma! her facial features are just fugly (like Asami) and as for personality...yeah, ginger, obnoxious, tom boys is not my type...yuk. Also fawning over Rachel...and others....erm, that's usually what should be our personal preference. The dev also decides at one point he's going to make MC start groping the now slutty Emma and acting like a 12yo teen. Again, no say in the matter, so if you find Emma repulsive...well, tough. There is a chance to pick a girl for sex at the end of the good guy path in this update but something happens and dude gets blueballed...ofc The part where the 2 little girls just grab the MC and start molesting him...this MC is a retard that stands there with his dick hanging out as a whole bunch of girls roll up and start talking... That's another problem....i don't think i've seen so many ugly girls in an avn before and i've played hundreds of avns. I struggled to pick even one semi attractive girl and the one i did pick was a little blond nympho who gets given to the other guy anyway. Actually, on the bad guy route I found a half decent girl...Linda....hurrah! aaand not for long it turns out...oh ffs! well there goes the only decent looking one.. Dialogue feels cringy at times and sometimes I was scratching my head....like when some random girl comes out of nowhere and starts calling them "Dear" Maybe a translation thing? But yeah, convos don't seem natural at times. That could be due to the dev not having english as their mother tongue in all fairness I guess. Often it devolves to typical horny teen type stuff like "oh baby your pusssy looks nice.." lol. The MC alternates between indecisive wimp and (mostly) just a complete moronic teen perv at times, it was hard to like him. I had hoped for a strong leader type but that seems more like Emma than him. Occasionally he acts a bit macho but tends to get ignored lol. The bad path appealed more to me as MC might be a bit more assertive and it did feel more fun with the promise of more lewd stuff. The girls Linda and Megan are hotter than the 2 girls you gain on the good path. The story and dialogue seemed to flow better in this path and actually got me interested more. Renders are pretty much average, nothing great but not bad really. I get the dev wants to tell his story his way, but if the player has little choice over who he likes, what he can say or even actions, it's pretty boring...like reading a comic and it's annoying when the MC is gushing over some ugly girl you would never pick. Shame, i liked the story premise in this. Oh well, shit happens. At the end of the day it's the dev's story and if he wants to direct it on rail tracks, so be it. I noticed the discussion for this game was a bit heated and the dev getting a bit defensive, even going as far as calling out another reviewer a troll. Well, I can only say that you have to also expect critisicm from those that didn't enjoy your choices, it's part of putting your AVN out there. Peace. - Update. I added another star due to the bad route being more enjoyable. I feel 3 stars at this point is perfectly fair.
N0madS0uL 2024-07-04
Different but not exception or anything (so far) Pros: Some models are not bad looking, Writing is OK, not great Story is interesting and is different than the usual so there is that. Cons: Some models are "fugly" IMO and the developer messed up Emma for me by replacing her, her previous model was better (not that, that one was great either) Models are generally not very good, considering the quality most players now have come to expect, its not horrible, but mediocre now. Choices are non-existent and those that are there are kinda rigged, like picking a chick at end of v0.2. Nor can you pick who you want from the teams. Writing, sentences, grammar, structure etc all need some more attention, maybe get someone that is proficient in English to check your dialogue before release. v0.2. not sure if there was a 0.1 but the content is very little, its more story and reading than anything else. I usually suggest having enough content with at least one decent lewd scene in your first release else its not going to rate well IMO. Story and premise seem actually good, but some characters are just totally bullshit, unless I live on another planet. Woman don't throw themselves at a random dude like that unless paid or complete sluts. Even then some pretext would be nice (talking about two early characters) Game has potential but IMO needs much more work, dialogue needs to be redone and structured better, models could IMO use some much needed work, at least which are clearly the love interests. More lewd would be nice, at least per update and updates should have more decent amount of content. I would even venture to include a glossary for players interested in background to the world, terms like mutants etc to provide more context, even more info the social, economical and technological conditions would helpful. TLDR: Decent but not great, feels a bit rushed and not REALLY thought out completely, looks dated, dialogue needs work and story + characters need to be fleshed out. More lewd!

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