Aunt’s Secret Desires

The dev seems to think that his game lacking proper animation during spicy scenes is okay. As far as quality goes, the character models are pretty good. The story is alright. I don't fault it for much other than the fact that the actual 'content' itself that you're probably here for is not as well-developed as most would like. There's not a lot of variety in way of options to steer the narrative either, which wouldn't be a problem if the scenes the game has to offer carried the game's weight more. That's really the game's biggest fault. A distinct lack of decent animation during intimate scenes to reward the player for progressing through the story. It's just not impactful enough when there's plenty of linear story to go through.

Review for version 0.40 Good and enjoyable game overall. I thought it deserves better than the 3 star rating that it currently has. The story is basic but the hot Asian girls make for some beautiful renders. The pacing of H scenes and incremental progress are done right so far. H scenes looked basic at first but got better with time. Animation felt slow in some of the newer scenes.

VERSION: v0.40 SUMMARY: Ok, could have and should have been better though... RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐ ⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐ ⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐ ⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Good looking LI and models, good render quality. Writing is structured and reads well enough, but the script needs revision to correct grammatical issues and such. Some but very few bits of audio like moaning during lewd is nice, but there is little if anything else. Some "animations" that are not bad, but short loops. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Inconsistent and unrealistic age of aunt. Doesn't fit narrative. World visuals are basic and bland, no details Dialogue need work, sentences need revision and grammar needs to be checked. Fairly dull and uninteresting plot that has been done too many times now... Very little audio of any kind, pity...WAIT I heard the washing machine, AMAZING!...oh and a moan during a lewd, AWESOME... Poor UX/UI experience, no opacity or font settings for dialogue box. Pointless clicking events where there are no options save one, so why bother having the option at all. Per above point pacing and flow are hampered by having to click on doors and such, its mostly kinetic anyway so why bother? OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS: NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) "aunt" is way to young for it to be believed she shat out 2 kids, she looks mid 20s tops. She has no belly, sagginess to her tits or ass, no stretch marks of having kids, no wrinkles or age to her face, stupid to create her like she look more like a cousin than aunt... why devs do this click option when there are no other ways to progress boggles my mind. Why create more obstruction and effort for the player to carry on with the plot (non-existent one in this case) by throwing in these extra clicks...fml! World needs more fleshing out, e.g. right now the room has nothing in it, its lifeless and boring, same with kitchen its all utilitarian and doesnt feel like a home. Like the people just moved in which we know is not true as the MC was a kid visiting this house so where are any of the items accumulated over time...? The plot is so obvious and blatant that is actually very bad, the MC doesn't hide his sexual interest in his aunt even though she comes across initially as reserved and oblivious. But ultimately the plot is so setup to have these two characters connect on an intimate level that the dev kills the game in its infancy. Without plot and intrigue, driving it forward you basically just watching scenes unfold and need no narration. There are choices, no corruption its just too unnatural, including the fact that these two characters are clearly not bothered by incest...This is compounded when the rest of the gang and friends show up, ready to jump the MC without any hesitation, like its the most normal thing ever, this is just poor scripting/writing and its a shame really, this AVN could have been pretty good... TLDR: Been done before, countless times really. Visuals are not bad, models look nice, but Aunt looks nothing like a woman in her late 30s or early to mid 40s as she should be considering her kids etc. Plot holes and dialogue are in general can use work. While the LIs are beautiful, the renders in general are fine, this AVN feels like something that should have come out 5 years ago or more. By todays standards its lacking...

There's no real story here other than you go and stay with your lonely Aunt and her family for no real reason. All the LI's are very beautiful and everyone loves the MC. The only real downside are the animations, which are a bit grainy and basic. Nit-picking: There is some pointless clicking to progress the story. It doesn't add anything but it doesn't really get annoying. It's a bit too dark in each scene. One of the characters name doesn't really show up properly in the dialogue box (Naomi) and you can't change the opacity. The MC still hasn't cut the grass and it was weeks ago that he first mentioned it! However these are all very minor problems. Hopefully it will end up a harem game, as it would go along with the VN's sweet natured ambiance. It's a happy fantasy and that's about it but there's nothing wrong with that, as it doesn't try to be anything more.

The main issue is always the same for VN. 1. The intro already gives every plot that is possible in the game. ie, it's describing both the main character and the others with a clear objective and connection between them. If you write a story like this, there is no point in meeting or even talking to the character anymore. Since everything is already given in the prologue, there is no point in talking with said character in the novel itself. It's like you had a mind reader from the get-go. 2. You had the narrator. Stop using the narrator to narrate a VN, unless the narrator is part of the character in the vn itself. Let the flow build from the natural dialogue and the scene itself. People are not dumb, so stop dictating every nook and cranny of the vn itself. If you do useless internal thought and the narrator talks, you basically stunlock your reader with an uninteresting line. Other than that, it's ok.

V0.39 when this showed up on the latest updates page i first thought it was on my ignore list as the preview image there is so dark. decided to still give it a go as the tags float my boat. starts with an opening of backstory and then proceeds to make no sense, like the backstory was about a different character as the aunts reactions are way off. not to mention the timeline makes little sense too. written like contact is constant and then suddenly it has been years. a common writers mistake. there is a giant flaw in the design, one i absolutely hate. you must click the screen here or here to progress this now-no-longer-a-VN. it is exactly the same as a single option click choice. fucking stupid as adding it to the dialogue or just removing it and continuing the story changes nothing at all. so why add nonsense? most of the game takes place at night, which is not helped by the developer having never set their monitor settings right. one girl has her name on screen but it can rarely be seen and even in the day time it must be cloudy outside and god has popped a lampshade over the sun. just look at the page of latest updates and it will stick out how much darker it is to all the others. i gave up when the headache from squinting started. other than that it is not poorly written, just not consistent and certainly lacking in interest. the tags are the hook and the writer knows it, which is why the sudden growth of females for the male MC. dark and dull.