Chronicles of Kartoba

I just finished Chapter 1 - Part 3, and I have to say I'm pleasantly surprised. The renders are beautiful, the girls are gorgeous, and the story managed to hook me much more than I expected. The pacing feels good, and I found myself genuinely interested in learning more about the world and its characters. One thing that seems to divide people is the vampire lore. Personally, I don't mind it at all. This isn't trying to be a textbook about vampires, it's the author's own interpretation. Not every story has to follow the same established rules, and I'm perfectly happy to judge it on its own merits rather than comparing it to traditional vampire mythology. The idea that the MC's bloodline makes him valuable because bearing his child grants political power is explained well enough to make Clair's manipulation believable within the setting. Monica was probably my favorite character so far. Her affection for the MC feels genuine, and the fact that she has been conditioned since childhood to become his wife adds an interesting layer to her character. I also enjoyed the fantasy creatures, the lore surrounding them, and Cassandra's scene in particular. As for the AI-assisted renders, while I generally prefer fully handmade artwork, they didn't negatively affect my experience. As long as the story is engaging and the overall quality remains high, I don't see it as a dealbreaker. Looking forward to the next release. Keep up the good work, @SinisterSlick!

I wasnt expecting much before playing but I must say that after playing the game, I was very surprised by the quality of it, clearly lots of effort has been put into the animations, the pictures, the story and the dialogues, I like choices that can be made and i've enjoyed it and cannot wait for future updates

Chronicles of Kartoba [ch.1 p2] I started it not expecting much, but it completely hooked me—especially because I’m a huge fan of vampire stories. The dark fantasy atmosphere, the mystery around the world, and the supernatural elements really hit that same intrigue you get from good vampire shows. For me, this is exactly the kind of setting I want more of in adult games. Story and world building is main attractions for me here. Characters are not that developed, as it's still early, but the world of this game has lots of potential. Not overloaded with scenes yet, but what’s there is good quality and fits the tone. It feels more story-driven than just throwing content at you, which I personally prefer. As the game grows, this could easily become one of its strongest points. 10/10 as I love vampire or dark fantasy stories.

(Review of Ch.1 P2) Well, well... Now this is something else. A plot-centered AVN with vampires and sci-fi elements that remains believable and doesn't let you go until you reach the end of it. The characters are excellent, and so is the writing that glues it all together. Sex is kind of secondary to the story, and yet it's also remarkably well staged, with hot scenes and sexy LIs. As the story unfolds and depending on your actions, your stats change and that lets you do certain things, RPG style. To top it all, the MC is likeable and you can decide which content you (don't) want to see. Seriously, we need more AVNs like this.

Classic, good looks but no substance. Story is cliche, choices are just an illusion without any real consequences and everytime you might actually want to make a choice for the MC, the author does not give you the option. Want to tell Hadrian and Monica to fuck all the way off to hell after you get raped and forced into a LI without choice? Nope, gotta be a good little bootlicker. Instead you get choices of wether or not to stare at an ass and about who is covering your eyes from behind lol. And then you think the choices become more interesting, when you can decide to bond with Monica, who set you up to be raped btw. But in reality its not a choice at all, because if you do not "bond" with that very unlikeable LI you miss 80% of the game. So in the end its just another fake choice. So overall, nothing of value would be lost if the author would decide to complete his withdrawal from F95 and not have public releases at all anymore.

Honestly quite incredible. The renders, though AI enhanced, are absolutely amazing. They look incredibly crisp and clear. The only negative I can think of is that during the AI animations, there is some blurring and detail loss, but that's a minor caveat I think. The writing is pretty good, not great but not bad either. I like the story and the world building. Though it can be a bit generic, I don't think that's such a bad thing if it's done well. I do think it's done well, it could be better in some parts for sure but it's definitely not enough to deduct a star from. I do wish there were a few more choices you could make though, especially at the beginning. There seems to just be the standard nice guy / vanilla route and the assertive / dominant route. You can reject or distance yourself from some of the girls, but sometimes you don't have control over what happens. The last thing that I'll touch on is the sex stuff. For the most part you don't really get any choice in it. It's just start--->change camera angle----> next scene -----> end. You don't really get to choose what happens or how you approach the girls. For me, I didn't mind that much because the girls and renders were incredibly good, and to be honest I was more invested in the story than the sex scenes. You also can't choose any fetishes or anything like that, but maybe that will appear down the line. So honestly, I thought the game was really great. I enjoyed it a lot more than I initially expected to. Yes there could be some touchups and some improvements here and there, but I really don't think the flaws are enough to reduce the games quality. If you're looking for a really solid vampire game with amazing renders, a good story and good world building, you'll definitely enjoy this, and I sure did.

Been playing at least 20 or more type games like this before. so I have some experience to form an opinion. A loot of exposition dumping trying to create an universe of some sorts. I had the feeling I talked more to Men than woman in this game, until we arrived near the end where the fighting mechanic was explained i had some hopes get some sort of interest in this but the game ended so it left me with an empty non really caring at all feeling. there is potential here but it remains to be seen in the future.

There are so many caveats to this 3/5. I've actually been a bit obsessed about this game the past few days since I discovered it. I know, I know, weird. it shows how much potential it has though imo. At its heart, it's a vampire intrigue novel (harem..maybe) with extremely attractive LIs. There's just two big issues that caused a whole lot of drama early in the game's development that might have irreversibly doomed it lol Spoiler: drama/plot/character spoilers, you've been warned, it's long :D PLOT run-through of beginning: So, game starts out on a bit of a sore note for me personally, a forced existing love interest. Not a fan immediately, so I start looking for a way out. Game plays it up that MC and g/f having been together since basically childhood. MC is about to head to a party, g/f gives him this weird drink, which makes his eyes go funky and MC start having headaches and is out of it at the party. g/f is a no show after saying she'll meet him there. Asshole says he saw her with another dude kissing and then they went into a house and didn't come out. MC freaks out and another very attractive girl, Clair, tells him to go relax in a bedroom (her eyes glow). He does what he's told. They end up sleeping together. He gets her pregnant, BITES her (le shock!) and she bites him back. All that to say, they're now bonded for life due to the cheating/rape (long story) and g/f was manipulated to leave (she didn't cheat) by her family. g/f wants to bond with MC anyways. If you do, she implies that she wants to be a cuckquean (your 'harem' if you will). If you reject, she disappears acting sad for now, and MC misses a ton of extra information. Drama: after the forced cheating/rape scene and the maybe NTR, the Dev made a post early on saying that there wouldn't be NTR but LIs might flirt with other guys and you'd have to step up to defend them/fight for them. Also mentioned that the LIs would stay loyal (if you want them to...). Caused the harem bros to freak out and abandon ship/get angry. (NTR bros are also not thrilled, since it's apparent a bit of sharing/lesbian action is all they're getting) Dev also tried to calm down the forced sex scene anger, but it didn't really help. Cheating + forced sex (rape depending on your perspective I suppose) = bad news. Dev left and was never heard from again. Dev refuses to have a public release, and doesn't interact with anyone other than his patreon supporters. Characters: the three girls on the banner are three obvious main LIs. left: childhood friend that is sort of like a sister/lives with MC's family. middle: existing g/f right: the vamp that caused MC to cheat/is pregnant. I LOVE the left girl, Jess. She is just so cute and funny, and also quite flirty, but uses it just to get MC's attention because she knows it bothers him. I'd love to have a solo route with her. The other two I have no interest in at all. There are a few other side LIs but nothing special so far other than one, Sam, she's incredibly attractive and has a fun personality. problems I have: My big problem and why I can't give this a higher rating is two-fold: 1. I want nothing to do with middle and right girl. Problem is, if you reject the existing g/f, Monica, she is removed so far, and with her, a ton of extra content. It worries me that she's going to essentially be the key to unlock 80% of the game's content, and if you refuse her, you're going to end up with almost no content at all. That sucks for people like me. 2. MC choices are frustrating. He has the opportunity to creep on women, and some of his dialogue is just over the top. However, if you DON'T creep on them, you can lock yourself out of entire LIs/side content. No current side paths seem to exist , with Jess, the left main LI being a 'slight' exception, but you MUST be a bit pervy to get on her path. There is a single choice to add 3 girls to the 'people gallery' I guess you could call it, and if you choose the non creepy one, they just aren't added and I assume you miss all of their content. Bizarre. You don't even know anything about them before you're forced to choose. Oh, they give you a choice menu at the beginning to avoid girl + girl without MC present, group sex, girl + girl with MC present, and squirting content. Always nice to have choices to avoid kinks. I'll stop here, because I could go on lol. If you've read to this point you might think I hate this game, but I really do think it has a lot of potential. The only problem for me is that I don't think I'm playing it correctly. The MC/relationships/plot I have in my head doesn't match up with what I think the dev is going to do. I'm playing as a nice guy who wants to be sweet and break up with his existing g/f (forced + he cheated) + take his child from the girl that raped him and be with Jess + maybe a couple of the other side LIs. The game doesn't like that. one last example: Spoiler: frustration with cheating/'make up ' sex 1. I really disliked the cheating scene, I think it's disgusting and want to get past it and reject Clair and tell her to fuck off. Thing is, if you have sex with Monica, the existing g/f AFTER CHEATING/being raped, MC TALKS ABOUT THE SEX WITH CLAIR "you know Clair deep throated me" and shit like that. It's fucking insane and makes me hate the MC. Imagine talking about how the sex was with the girl you cheating on your g/f with WHILE you're having sex with your g/f. I didn't choose 'that' MC, so it's..okay? but it still really worries me. If you're like me, a fairly vanilla guy, give it a shot, but be prepared for the girls to be quasi-forced on you and the game to feel ..weird if you don't

It’s nice to see a new vampire story; the prologue in particular was quite promising for the game’s future. These kinds of titles usually promise politics and intrigue, but more often than not they keep it superficial and end up wasting their potential by drifting into a harem-style simulation. I hope this game doesn’t fall into the same trap as its predecessors. If you’re dealing with vampires who have lived for centuries, the narrative should lean on strong dramatic depth and political tension. Reducing such long-lived and experienced characters to a simple dating simulation would honestly feel like a waste. If handled properly, this could turn into a truly memorable story. Since I enjoy the fantasy genre, I’m giving it 5 stars for now.

Seemed to be solid at first, but then came the onslaught of AI-generated text. It wasn't particularly well written before that part, but at least you could tell the dev was trying to convey an original story, warts and all. Once you hit the part where the majority of the text is clearly AI-generated, it just becomes so much less interesting. It's as though ChatGPT wrote a vampire story. Hard pass.

Interesting and captivating story, with good renders, couldn't finish the game before sharing the name of the game with a friend. It's hard to review without spoilers but the game takes a short time to send you to a plot of intrigues with the promise of more to come.

I really like the game, the characters are very well-developed, and I already have a couple of favorite characters. The story is well-written, and the game has a good storyline and atmosphere. The world is well-designed, and the choices are well-made in some areas, but the game is still top-notch for me.

PROS + MC's heritate, and his powers are kinda interesting, like the whole having ability to change his eye colors (or his bonded ones having same ability, something can be very dangerous, that makes Richard & Angela think this was the reason other families wiped out their family) or being able to have multiple bonds, and with every bond having power increase (bonded ones get increase as well) and he seems not weak despite just woke up thanks to his heritage, and powers, he was able to do good job against Marcus at his training while he is using half of his power. + Jessica is probably the most likeable Love Interest, and the character in the game. She is playful, cute, funny, and she was the literally only honest person in MC's life, so she bears special meaning for him as well. Even tho we seen almost nothing about her, or her path, she still has some good potential. + While most important things about the story/game give you no choice over it, interestingly enough, for other matters, your choices kinda matter, like being able to choose to have sex with Monica or not, being able to dom or sub with her, or being able to choose which type of fetishes you're gonna see in the game, etc. CONS - The whole prologue's main story, and the baseline for the other parts, is simply written in the most annoying, dislikeable, and poor way possible. It all starts with Monica asking MC to meet with her before the party, they drink a special family heirloom ''wine'' together, and their eyes glowes, MC feels like a cloud removed from his mind, then Monica leaves to give the ''wine'' back to Hadrian (her grandfather) before coming to the party, but she won't come, MC gets frusturated with some other stuff he learned as well, and meet with girl named Clair, she openly flirts with MC, and then uses her powers on him to suggest him to take rest at one of rooms in the party house because his nose bleeding, etc. Then she comes into MC's room, and uses his intoxicated state to have sex with him, and make sure he cums in her. MC loses control and bites her, and she does the same, and he loses his consciousness. When MC wakes up he finds himself in another room there meets with Marcus (Monica's brother), Marcus takes him to Hadrian's room, at door we hear someone yelling, when the door opens it turns out Monica is yelling to Hadrian, then she sees MC, says she got set up, they set them up, then leaves the room saying she needs to cool off, while MC thinking about she will never forgive him for what he did (like he or players had any choice in matter, it was forced, there was a no choice, but his personality seems revolving around guilt tripping himself constantly for stuff even he has nothing to do like the accident with John's sister) then Hadrian starts to talk like normal, like he didn't just manipulated two young people into his own sick scheme, then when MC says how he can trust after he orcastrated this insanity he has audacity to say ''You are in no position to grant trust MC... And I do not require it.'' then proceeds to say he is not leaving until he listens him, and start to inform him about to situation, says he is head of House Varkon, one of the four great houses of Sudra, and MC simply become a vampire, what he will become in years fastened with the Elixir only, for that Hadrian used Monica's dislike for constantly needing to lie MC about what she is, he says she was easy to manipulate, then proceeds to talk about MC's family, and how he spent nearly two decades to keep him alive, keep him from sharing his families fate, then says that his family with his whole bloodline wiped out by the other houses, only MC, Richard, and Angela survived. Angela and Richard were part of his dynasty, House Kaiden; they knew what happened to his family, etc, as well, but lied to MC to protect him. Hadrian says he made sure that he spent years making sure they think that MC's bloodline is gone. Then when MC asks why todays events happened he says someone from one of Kartoban Houses found MC, so he orchasterated this whole thing to give them a heir from MC's bloodline, so they won't expose MC, because that will expose their heir as well, the one that Clair is carrying now, MC's baby, that was the price, House Idalon wanted Kaiden Blood in return to shut up. When MC says he used him, he says ''I protected you. Without me, yo'd be dead.'' like he gives a fuck about MC, which he reveals couple dialogues later saying his bloodone was rare, powerful, too precious to waste, and he was promised to his granddaughter, he says MC was just a scared child after the purge, etc, as well, but you can see he is not really caring about those kinda stuff, along the lines he even says ''my investment'' to him, and before the talk ends he even says ''If your doubts turns into recklessness, and other houses find out who you are, I won't protect you, and step aside.'' like this info is any surprising. Obviously, the game continues and throws more stuff at you, but this whole thing is already bad enough to drop this game, especially since it has long-lasting effects. Not to forget, Claire is not even single; she is married, so basically, MC got drugged, then got raped by a married woman, got her pregnant, and his kid is gonna burn into some unknown place, unknown house, unknown step-father, etc, as well, which makes the whole thing even worse. This whole story could have been written in way better way with small changes, it's not even that hard to do so, they could write in a way with no drugs or rape involved, make Clair female youngest heir of her house, not married, she, and MC will have a child like in the current story, and bond, but child wouldn't grow without no involvement from the MC, and he, and Clair will share a actual bond. - SCI-FI, Technology, Vampirism, and general world design feels mismatching, and problematic, there are even some weird stuff like in one scene we seeing other planet in very big scale, if that planet is really that close effects of it to the world, and humans living there could/should be drastic, but nothing is explained about it, and it feels like creators just throwing stuff that can look cool, but not think about the logic behind it. - The whole MC's living dynamics with Richard, Angela, and Jessica is way too much like a fake incest trope, the one that writers decide to do when they wanna write incest, but are scared of platform rules, which is nothing but lame. And for some reason Richard is called ''Uncle, " and Angela is called ''Aunt'' of MC instead of their names or anything could make at least a small amount of sense. - The whole Clair bonding with the MC was simply stupid, and it made no sense at all. The deal Hadrian talked was to give their family a heir, not bond with the MC, the game explains that only one bond can exist, so Clair wanted to stole his bond with his girlfriend as well then, not to talk about since MC is a exception, and can have multiple bonds, and Clair's bond is still there, which probably means at some point she is going to be a Love Interest, and that is awful idea with her current status. Not to forget thanks to her bond now she has eye color shifting powers MC's heritage has, along with her abilities getting more potent/powerful because of MC gaining another bond, she wants MC to keep gaining more bonds, so she can amass more power, and depose her father with taking control, considering things she did she doesn't deserve any of these. Let alone the whole bond mechanic seems really stupid, because according to her words, and Monica's reactions Monica didn't gained any power from joining the bond, so that means the ones joined early gonna get more power, and others will get less, and less, which is simply illogical, the bond should give power to MC most, then all other bond mates equaly, only than it would make sense. - MC is one of most powerful heritates, yet Hadrian gives upper-middle rank glowing eye contacts (Quintus), he should have given higher rank glowing eye contracts (Hierarchs) especially since he said that his true heritage should stay hidden forever it makes no sense him to be shown world as Hadrian's Quintus protege, new son of House Varkon, especially since Quintus & Hierarchs or his actual family has vast difference with their life-span (another thing writers done creating plot holes already) at some point it's gonna come out he is not Quintus anyway, and I'm pretty sure in that case that will backfire badly, how Hadrian can't think about that? He acts like someone who thinks about all the details, but he makes stupid mistakes over and over again. In fact, this gets released by Samantha (Marcus daughter) when he does something; it should take weeks for him in less than an hour, but she says it's too quick for a Quintus. - We have the cliche/classic MC's perverted male best friend that openly admits he checks out MC's girlfriend's, Jessica's, and Angela's asses, etc, he even goes to great lengths to say he is a " gentleman " about it, and makes sure MC doesn't see it, like it changes anything. - We have the cliche/classic bully character y'all know as well, his name is John, and he seems to be bullying MC for most of his secondary and higher education. What's worse is the excuse for MC's tolerance of this MC, and how poorly written it is. So apperantly; 5 years ago when John was supposed to drop his sister off at school, he didn't, because he stayed up drinking with a girl he was seeing, instead MC dropped her, and one dumbass hit their car's passenger side with passing in red light, the accident left her paralyzed from the waist down, and since that day John bullies the MC. MC says he thinks John feels guilty, but it's easier to blame MC than himself, and that's why John is bullying him, why he has done nothing against John all these years, so convenient, right? And if these are already not poorly-written enough, we have the whole John making sure she is not talking with MC, and she is becoming a complete recluse, barely leaving the house, with no one to talk to, etc. - Combat QTE design was awful, it needs to be changed for future versions if combat is going to have any significant role in the game, having simple choice-based QTE combat stuff could be way better than the one we have now. - The visual parts of the game, especially in the early parts, are quite inconsistent. One second, it does look good; the next second, it looks really bad. This is because of the possible use of AI, which can be seen in most of the game. First of all, there is almost always some washed-up, generic-looking stuff on screen, and it's mostly the faces. Secondly, whenever characters show any emotion, and their facial expression changes, they look almost like a different person, and it mostly looks bad. - Male body design, especially MC's design, sometimes looks really weird, with a big head, long neck, long and big traps, and small shoulders compared to those. And as I told, since visual parts are inconsistent, there are a lot of parts that he actually looks normal as well. - Sex scenes have multiple speeds and positions mostly, and to continue, you need to press the button at the top right corner of the HUD, very stupid/tedious, it should be in the middle of the screen like almost all other games, don't fix the working thing as they say. While their numbers are not much, we have some static animations as well. And a lot of animations look quite weird, again, probably the potential use of AI is the reason. VERDICT The game has potential, but it has some serious CONS to be fixed as well, especially story needs some changes, even serious changes not made making small changes about the Clair situation, etc, can still change things for better, it doesn't have that much content either, so waiting for CONS to get fixed, and more content could be good idea.

"As you forge bonds, uncover buried truths, and grow your influence, your choices will shape both your harem and your legacy. " I know it is only the prologue but this is not fun. The choices in part 1: stare at ass, play guessing games of who's covering your eyes, spy on girlfriend at school, stare at tits, masturbate (then pick who to masturbate to - and if you want to fill your gallery you'll need to pick both - doesn't everyone love masturbation scenes?), stare at more ass, punch an asshole, leave a message on girlfriends phone. Oh, and then you get a sex scene (the posts and replies make up 3 pages if you search "forced" in this thread. But the Dev says it is important and a 1 time thing... Onto part 2: starts off waking up in a dark room and already someone else sitting in the dark waiting for you to wake up - really set you at ease for the bullshit they are about to lay on you. First choice: try to stab the fucker? (and we introduced the beloved timed choices) Second choice: sex with the girlfriend (and to the Dev's credit, it is not forced). Third choice: stare at tits (timed choice here). You are given a choice that alters stats (assertive/diplomatic). Finally, to end the scene and update you're given choices but is a checklist and have to click everything anyway. When chapter 1 comes I hope it follows another middling game - we wake up 1000 years later and begin to hunt down our son. That important forced sex scene from part 1: a third party sold your baby batter to another family. And your girlfriend is that third party's granddaughter. I kind of checked out - everyone and everything was making me mad and in turn losing interest in plot and characters (intended consequences of all prologues, I'm sure). At least the renders were above average.

Version: Prologue P2 (Fix) I'll revise this review at some point, but I primarily wanted to leave some kind of rating while offering a succinct overview of the game and story. First off, the underlying plot is a refreshing take on the whole vampire trope that seems to be rising in popularity in recent years (seems the Twilight burnout is fading...). While politics and intrigue are at the center of this story as well it at least changes up some of the setting (we're definitely not on Earth) alongside introducing a lore friendly version of vampire hierarchy. If you've ever experienced Vampire: The Masquerade Bloodlines then this story isn't all that different in terms of what it's attempting to convey story wise. As for the MC... I sincerely did not like him in the first few scenes with how he felt somewhat schizophrenic while having a personality of a wet towel (gross and slimy). However, the second part of the prologue changed my view of him after the added perspective, and in doing so fixes the issue I had in believing the MC was a weakly written character. Spoiler territory below: Spoiler: The MC Well hello people ignoring the spoiler! Right, about the MC... The protagonist is eventually revealed to be a descendant of the most powerful vampire House in the world. The other Houses banded together to wipe out the MC's bloodline only to fail (in a rather spectacular way). Essentially he gets saved by another house due to being promised to this dude's granddaughter (there's a whole drama subplot I don't feel like discussing right now), but he doesn't entirely explain why the MC's family was murdered or what power they have. My two cents? There's a scene with Monica where she discusses that bonds between vampires are singular, and because our MC decided to bond with another vampire she's livid and tells him to bond with her in the hopes that the "stronger" bond will prevail. Come to find out that part of the Kaidan power is that they can bond with more than one vampire (hence the harem tag), but it's unclear as to why the other houses would fear that power specifically. Only time will tell. Anyways, our poor MC was lied to while have his memories suppressed to avoid long term trauma. The leader of the house whose granddaughter we were promised to pulled the ultimate dick move by wiping both of their memories and manipulating the MC into fullfilling a contract so another house wouldn't oust him. His frustration and stubbornness are well justified given grandpa vamps is a major dick (even if he had good intentions).

Aside from the blood I would have given this a 5. Sure its a vampire game and blood id to be expected.....but during the sex scene it was a huge turn off as it came from the wrong locations. Great story. Although it takes a few wanderings from the beaten path at points it is not terrible and I can stick to it well enough. Well enough at least that I failed to do my usual which was to skip through most of teh story. So I should say that that alone says a great deal about the quality of the writing in this one. I really really want to come back and revise this one to a 5 star in the future. Please, God above, Please!!!! Do not turn this MC into some simp cuck little yes man bitch. Let the players choices matter and above all else let him have a set of balls if he chooses to and damn the consequences as a result. I would rather die as a full blown male MC in a bloody blazing hellfire than go as a nutless cuck. So sick of games that do not let you live and die by your own choices but sneakilyy force you to play the game the Dev wants to play instead. That is cute but it royally pisses me off. And it gives me a strong distaste for anything I see their name on in the future. I am angry at being decieved but also curious enough right now to bide my time and see how things unfold around the MC before choosing a course of action. If I was to choose a course right now it would be a reckless one. One of vengeance and destruction. Lots of needless people would be hurt including the MC. So yes, its best the game stopped where it did so I have time to prepare myself for futur eepisodes. Well done and well played so far. Look forward to future eposodes and as such currently recommend this to others as being worth their time. As I said, I usually avoid vampire and moster related stuff but something told me to give this one a try. Not a lot of sex here but it was well presented at least.

Just another vampire game... Or so I thought, high quality, reasonable story thus far, and the models are high quality. This game has a very promising story if it keeps it up, things are ominous enough to the point where you as the player want to speculate what's going on behind the scenes. Bright future.

review for Prologue P2 fix Really nice renders, girls be super cute. lots of forced drama, super mid writing. cringe ass protag, to be fair to him, he not the only cringe character in this. weird start, hope it gets better.

Not a lot there at the moment, but what is there is good. Interesting story, well written with minimal spelling/grammar mistakes. So far not an overload of characters, hope it stays that way. Looks like it will be story driven rather than slice of life. I would keep an eye on this one

This VN is worth watching just for the stunning renders. Everything else is just cheap. The plot, if you can call it that, was clearly written by some horny schoolboy after watching Twilight. Basically, you can skip ahead and watch the images; you won't miss anything. - Models and visuals - 6 out of 5 - Plot: 1 out of 5 - Sound: hard to rate (I haven't listened to it) - Interface: 3 out of 5, unremarkable