Crash Course

[Review for v0.3.3] This game has a lot of soul for what is practically a concept demo in terms of content. We see the beginning of several interesting plotlines, side quests included. I'm interested to see how these will be developed moving forward - will branches be slowly worked on at the same time, or will certain routes be favored in development? As it stands, I've given Crash Course four stars despite its lack of content for these reasons: +++ City isn't bigger than it needs to be. God, some RPGM games will make huge areas with a slow walking speed that makes me want to fight god. We don't see that here. Yay! ++ Very good art, for what we have. A variety of outfits in a concept demo is very promising too! ++ Likeable characters. To dumb it down we have a bumbling, oblivious(?) aunt-type and a diligent tomboy with some confidence issues. + Solid intro. We're given a good look at the heroines for what they are and what they're trying to be. It's easier to miss the two foils, but I dunno maybe that's intentional since the heroines will tell us about them anyways. + Side-quests are... kind of fun? Not too much to look at yet but the mysterious dark building and finding the rabbit were nice. + The dialogue remembers. I like your words having consequences, generally, and though we can't really see the effects of the hidden stats in this concept I like knowing they'll be part of the development. We already see some scripted scenes change the writing depending on if you did something or another so that's promising. ~ Self-sabotage? I generally don't like having to work with the foils to have things happen. We're given an acceptable internal reason for *why* we're helping, but I prefer the protagonist lose without giving the other guy direct help lol - Minor bugs like certain items not being available when they should be. -- If you don't watch the guys messing with the heroines, it doesn't happen (so far). In fact, the heroines will be in two places at once until you choose where you want them to be. In the full game, hopefully their location is already decided by the hidden affection / corruption values.

The base for a great game is here. Currently there doesn't seem to be too much content though. I would love to see more parts of the map open up, and more places to catch stuff happening but as long as this keeps getting updated It should become a really solid NTR game.

I think the game has a really solid concept. I especially like the design of the two main female characters, both feel very unique and visually appealing. The core idea is interesting too, with the typical structure of moving around the city, completing tasks, and progressing through different events. I do think it would benefit from stronger relationship development early on, so the emotional impact later in the story feels more meaningful It would also be great to see more variety in activities. Right now it feels a bit limited with just a couple of job options like the dojo and the supermarket, so expanding that would really help. the game shows a lot of promise and has a strong foundation to build on.