Dark Vengeance

screen 1-2: "The first of these girls is Brooke ... who has been invited to the house by her lifelong best friend Holly" screen 4: ".. there is Holly ... who has 'convinced' her boyfriend to invite her and her friend to this private house.." screen 5: (Brooke) "Hey Holly, ... can you explain to me how you got us invited to this house?" screen 6: "...I managed to convince my boyfriend to invite us..." screen 11: "..this is Nathan. Holly's boyfriend and owner of the house.." ... the art is in the screenshots. these are literally the first few pages at the time of this writing (v.0.3). ... and that's where I am stopping. I'll come back and check it out in the future, update the review if it warrants it, but... Ok, to be clear, the problem is that this level of writing is pretty literally "This is Spot. See Spot run! Run, Spot, Run!". This is a classic Pre-K text. I don't normally suggest using AI for writing but... this needs an editor or AI for writing.

Graphics wise, it works, but wow are the dicks badly bolted on, and the rimming scene we see clipped THROUGH the model is pretty high on the list for images actually worth replacing instead of simply improving as you go forwards (but please don't stop dev to try remaster it before you finish the story, that trap leads to unfinished games and unhappy fans). Text wise its standard race-play stuff, again serviceable, but its clear English is NOT a primary language. There is still untranslated text (... Are you fucking serious!? El stupido gigante de antees...), shortly after Nathans begging is said as one of the thugs instead, and the gendering is all over the place, which makes a few scenes confused "please don't hurt him" instead of "please don't hurt her" ect. There is also just missing letters or spellcheck choosing wrong words "eels like on my ten incher" instead of feels ect. Could certainly do with an editor pass, maybe Gameplay wise... this is linear and kinetic, so purely about pacing. First gripe on that front is we don't really get the prologue, your expected to have read the game description immediately before you start playing.. like one shot on a ferry to the island to set up the who, why and the limitation of access would do better than repeating these a couple of times during the first scene. Even keeping it kinetic, having an option to show or hide (not necessarily avoid, just skip) the sissy scenes would likely expand the audience a lot (its one of my fav parts, but a straight turn off to an equal number). All in all 3stars. Its passable, has no time waste, and follows a consistent story rather than hopping all over the place. But it also needs a lot of work still.

i expected a game, and got a kinetic novel instead. if is had the right tags it wouldnt even have shown up in my search. on top of that,. the graphics are average, but the writing is just subpar. i dont understand why Kinetic Novels count as games, if there is literally no GAMEPLAY.. but hey thats just my two cents.

Note I like Non-consent games... Hate sissification. There are the disclaimers. My main issue is that the game goes to fast. Ohhhh that sounds good, well it isn't. Pacing is the issue. The game has almost no story really just an excuse to show violation. So normally in these games you slowly progress up sexual acts, but not here. You jump into gang bang. This is an issue because everything starts feeling the same after a while. Normally you amp up sexual acts, start with a blow job, then move into vaginal, then anal, then group. This progression makes the scenes feel like its building. This game has no building. It feels bring almost instantly. repeating the same thing over and over. My next issue is that while the game does have animations, the camera angles are bad. Not only are the scenes not really sexy IMO, they have no sound. So in the end it just doesn't do anything for me. Better than static pictures but such bad camera work that I think they hurt the product since those ARE the product mostly. My last issue is with the male character that gets sissified. The character looks 12, while is dating a 20 year old I think. There is sever cognitive dissonance where you have a sissified Shota. Just make the character a little brother so it makes sense. It's not that fucking hard. ULG. Obviously I dont like sissification but ill not hold that by itself against it. So that game has issues. Weak story, poor animations, sex scenes feel the same. I'm not even using the sissification of a shota against it, because it's not my kink. The game is failing just on the non-consent portions. I think the bones of this game are bad. I don't see how they can fix it. Sorry,

First of all, there are too few NC-games out there, and I'm a sucker for both that and raceplay so this game is right up my alley. Story is good, as expected since it's heavily inspired by the GOAT Fernandos comic with the same name. The renders, especially in the beginning, are a bit rough but they get better as the game goes along and the creator clearly learns more and more how to set lighting etc. Overall, I'll def keep following this project to see where the story goes and enjoy the spicy scenes on the way there. Keep up the good work!

I almost never review stuff, but5 I can't let this by. While everything about this is substandard, the artwork in particular is especially terrible. Like a VN done in MS Paint. The animations are crude and reminiscent of a late 90s game..

I had a lot of fun! A few warnings first tho, I'm not sure if raceplay is the right word but racist depictions/stereotypes are a main fetish/theme. In addition it's all rape and corruption. I'm a big fan of the BDSM and the main girls are put in some very hot predicaments featuring electro torture and piercing bondage. I have not read the comics this is based on so I don't know how much story is missing, but it doesn't feel like there needs to be much story here. It's a blatant fantasy with little realism, just enough story to make hot scenes happen. I'm a really big fan of sadistic games where characters are punished for losing, so I hope more of that is added in the future. If you like the tags or things I mentioned and aren't too averse to the race aspects give it a shot! One bit of feedback in case the dev sees, a few of the lines are too long for the text box, I'm not sure if that is usually made by making text smaller or by splitting lines but that does need to be addressed especially if a more story focused arc is to come.

Ok. After playing version 0.2, here are my thoughts. Plot? Well, there is one, but it's early, so I'll have to see where this goes. Up to this version, all you see are the girls and sissy getting trained, humiliated, and railed. A few mentions of hating the father we never see, and that's about it for anything other than almost constant sex (not a bad thing). Graphics? Honey Select. I'm no artist, but some renders could have used a bit more work. Lighting, shading, etc. Animations are there, look good, but they need work also. I would recommend breaking the longer ones up with a static screen or two in between the action, just to eliminate not knowing if the animation is stuck, or will continue on. The animations, at least for me, ended on a black screen and needed multiple mouse clicks to end. It says to hit ESC to end, but when I did, it just took me to the save game screen. Returning from that, I was just back into the animation. Subject: Pretty heavy on the non consent and humiliation. BDSM is represented well, as is sissification (not my cup of tea, so I just skip over those scenes). I'm a fan of DoFantasy, and have read some of Fernando's works, so it's right up my alley. Overall: A good start. It's not a 5 by any stretch, but I don't think it's lower than a 3. There is a decent amount of content, most of which is fappable (if you like the subject). I'm giving it a 4 due to the subject staying pretty close to the source material's spirit, and I happen to like it. Not enough BDSM and true non consent represented in porn games. Advice: If the author is interested in an actual story, pull back and give us some background on what the hell is going on. Sure, DoFantasy comics, for the most part, are short on story and heavy on action. This is probably because of the limited space in a comic in which to tell a deep story, or any story, for that matter. This art medium, adult games, benefits from an interesting story. I hope we see one in future releases. I've written for Literotica under the same name, and go back as far as ASSTR newsgroups (Yes, I'm dating myself). These themes are close to what I write about, so I know it can be done. If the author just wants a fap party and stick to the comics (which it does almost exact), so be it... Great start, and will be paying attention.

version 0.2 i couldn't understand how the dev invented such a great premise, how could he know it's so erotic, while not knowing how badly he executed that idea of his to destroy any eroticism/hotness of every scene with his dialogues and flow. if there was a top10 list of how to write a good story/scene, he violated all those 10 principles. it's really unbearable to read the scenes. it's completely not in line with the eroticism that come from the scenes. then i read comments and realized, he basically just plagiarized 90% of a well known comic. i checked out the comic, i don't like comics, but that comic was infinitey more erotic/hot than this "game". the dev has no idea what made those scenes hot, he basically ruined every scene the original author created. so i recommend you to check out the original comic it's 1000times better than this stolen joke. so why is this so bad? well pictures from preview are nice, but models are bad/ugly, animation is laughably bad sometimes, and there are no shadows, so the renders are very bad. this is the worst honey select implementation i have ever seen. literally. then he changed some of the story ofc for the worse and he increased the monologue and dialogue with at least a factor of 10. but that increased dialogue didn't make it better, it just made it more boring and silly. sound is just as bad, there is no music/sound for a while in beginning then SUDDENLY a big bang when they break the window LOL. jumpscare warning. plus text is so bad, it overflows and you cant even see what's written and you have to check history. how did the dev not notice that his text is overflown from the text box is beyond laziness. the fact that dev even asks money for this is a shame on humanity itself. the only reason this got better than 1 ratings is because the great premise it has from the original author and maybe some people were a fan of the original, but do yourself a favour and check the original, even if it's 2d you will thank me because it's miles better.

Well... I've only made it to the end, which is roughly halfway through volume 2. That, in turn, corresponds to 30% of all four volumes. There's some good, but also some bad, things to report for a comic book copy. For example, plot gaps. Since the aunt wasn't shot (or her stand-in in the game), why does Brooke have to dig a grave? Skip the lake and move the scene to the garage. The men are curious about the house and then find appropriate toys in the garage (ropes, belts, bands for gags, restraints, etc.). This also raises the general question of why the burglars bring all their BDSM toys to a break-in. Animations: These aren't bad in terms of the movements and the sometimes dynamically changing camera positions. There's also the option to cancel them if desired. A lot of the shaking effects in the movements are bad. This is especially noticeable with the legs and the lap dance movements on the floor. Likewise, the synchronization of the paddles, moving breasts, and the speech bubbles with the clapping sounds is incorrect. Equally poorly implemented: some animations end normally after a single run and the game continues, while others remain frozen on a black screen. The transitions between scenes take too long. If you could click through everything, why do you have to wait up to three seconds just to read the time-skip window? So, overall, the performance still offers plenty of room for improvement. Yes, the original has enough story gaps that can only be roughly explained with a small speech bubble stating that it's an accepted role-playing game (as can be read at the end of almost all of his comics). But you missed this very opportunity to cite Fernando as inspiration while still putting your own stamp on the story. And swapping Aunt for Sissy simply isn't enough to achieve that.