Forbidden Island

This is a pretty simple visual novel, only some 4:40 to 5:00 hours of duration. The plot is pretty straightforward, with the protagonist David, the couple Georgia and John, and later Isabel all surviving a sinking of the cruise ship they were on and ending up on a deserted tropical island, where they have to survive until help arrives. Nothing special. The graphics are simple, and give me a PS1 look, but as they are in an animesque style it actually becomes charming and even hot when it comes to the sex scenes. Its a netori by the way, with the protagonist David also fucking John's wife Georgia. As I like netori and netorare, that made it better to me. The game has meaningless choices, by which I mean they don't really change the story or even the dialogue, the only thing they do is just get to skip sex scenes. Overall, I liked it. Its nothing special, but there's no pretension of doing so, and both girls, but especially Georgia, are incredibly hot, and I'm a sucker for "stranded on a deserted tropical island" scenarios/plot/setting, so I'm giving it an 4 out of 5 vote, taking points mostly because of the ending and because there is no pregnancy, despite them spending at minimum a few months on that deserted tropical island, having unprotected sex.

Needs pregnancy. All these months on a deserted island with no rubbers and internal cumshots as well. Lets be real, somebody gonna get knocked up. The endings suck balls. Did not like either one that I saw. The sex scenes need more work. They do not flow smoothly at all. They don't suck but they certainly could be better. Ummmm the non consensual tag on this is a load of crap. She was pleased with what she got because she sure kept on going along with it as well. 3 ways as well with the MC. Its worth playing so don't give it a pass unless you just want to do so. I did enjoy it.

The art style was a bit sub par but refreshing from the usual, and consistent. The story was tropey but well done, although the writing itself was bland and uninteresting. I skipped through most and went off visuals for a lot of it, which worked well. So, the posing was well done. I think its ok, just suffers from too much fluff text.

The game is ok. But there are definitely some points which could be better. -The ending doesn't make sense. Both decisions are the same ending. MC is missing. -The facial expressions sometimes are like laughing Psychopaths lol. -The graphics are easy but something new to see from the other games. -The scenes should be clickable. I myself don't like those unskippable automatic animations. 3/5 for the game. Good idea, but it can be better

I'm going to give a little more credit because this is a completed game, but I echo every single one of their criticisms. The Good: 1) It's completed! No bugs! 2) Seems like a native English speaker wrote the dialogue...no typos, no weird phrases, etc etc. 3) It' s not too long. Probably only a few hours of clicking. The Meh: 1) It uses music...but only one track played as background music the entire game... 2) It's really a kinetic novel and choices are only if you want to see a scene or skip it. I don't hate this as bad as some people do, but it makes it pretty obvious that there's no real "game" here. 3) The graphics are really old tech. I thought I'd give this a shot because I like it when people try different ideas instead of just copying everyone else and so wanted to see how it might turn out (I mean, hey, I still like shaded cell animation and that's ancient tech). Sometimes this worked out (I liked Georgia's face and her huge tits, of course), but other times it just felt basic. The Bad: 1) Dialogue is not too long, but it IS too frequent. Also, it never distinguishes when a character is thinking something or saying it aloud. A visual medium is not like a novel where you have to use words to explain everything--cut as many words out because you can SHOW the conditions. 2) Main character's skills aren't really believable. He worked in the engine room on a modern cruise ship and he knows how to build fish traps and ropes from vines and all these islander skills? And set traps for pigs (pigs aren't scary, by the way...but BOARS are). 4) Story just seems very repetitive between going to fish traps and taking baths in the lagoon etc etc...

I'm really sorry but this is just not good. I admire the effort that went into it, and hope the Dev doesn't give up. Future advice would be, please work on the dialogue/plot, have choices that matter more than 'see scene/not see scene', make infidelity have impact, build slowly etc with characters that react intelligently, and please, please, please fix your coding so it's not a double click to move between each and every bit of dialogue. Again, better than what I could do, don't give up

Dogshit artstyle, you're railroaded into either cucking the husband or break all immersion because the game has garbage coding and plays the wrong cutscene (you go into the bath with the wife and you are the only 2 people, and leave with 2 women immediately in the next shot) Just skip this one