Into the Industry

I'm following this game. It's very well made. A gorgeous girl and hot scenes. It's interesting if you're into relationship drama (just imagine the boyfriend's perspective), the porn industry, and seeing the girl get drawn deeper and deeper into it.

All the 5 stars reviews must be paid, this dialogue is terrible and downright non sensical. It's just straight AI slop, not even bothered to edit and make it coherent or something. Sure the renders look good for AI but that's it, if you turn off your brain and skim the dialogue it might be enjoyable

"LLM, you are a no-nonsense sexy noir writer, with a snappy edge. Now write a story where..." Sorry. But the AI writing on this is just pure slop. The images are bearable, with some weirdness and inconsistency occasionally. But the writing itself is extremely unnatural, hollow and sometimes veers off into gibberish, asides or thoughts or dialogue that SOUND like they should mean something, but are little more than a [Hit button for Style A] illusion when you slow down to actually read them. The way people speak is all very same-note too and unrealistic. Feels like opening up a computer and fapping to the view of the parts inside. I think standards for writing are simply so low on F95 games that something that has at least the illusion of "good writing" on the surface-level, compared to Jim-Bob, who develops his "big bobs" game in a metal shack and has never been on a date, is easy enough to impress with by comparison.

So far, this game has been a wonderful experience. The dialogue is perfectly crafted, the tension slowly builds, the background music... it really drew me in. The model is beautiful, she caught my attention, but the story and dialogue are really well written.

I'm having difficulties with this one... On the one hand, I like the dark and gritty vibe. It has a very noir aesthete with appropriate music, visuals and tone. It's got a very unique sort of NTR story going on; a talent agent falling for the talent even as he knows he's about to pimp her out. My first stint playing was enthusiastic. My second stint I slowed down and actually read the text carefully instead of letting my brain fill in the gaps. It's... unfortunately close to gibberish occasionally? I think my brain assumed the fragments and unfinished thoughts were stylistic at first, but on second glance? There's an annoying number of places where things just don't make sense. There's a lot of rhetorical questions that in hindsight really aren't rhetorical and just didn't get answered. There's pithy phrases that in actuality aren't very pithy and are actually kinda just stupid. I hope this is just sloppy writing/editing. I'm worried it's actually a well prompted AI with a little bit of reworking. As for other complaints, despite how much better this AI art looks than a lot of the rest, there's still all the usual suspects. Uncanny body proportions, extra digits, surreal clothes and backgrounds, the full nine fingers. In addition, if you manage to dig through the noir-fest that is the broody dialogue, you might notice that the characters are actually really thin. We know extremely little about any of them and it's hard to tell if that's because we haven't been told yet or because there's nothing to tell. Also, it would really help if thoughts and spoken words were easier to differentiate. Plain text and italics are really hard to contrast in the chosen font. Also, also, I'd love to know if the choices are really changing anything. Outside of one serious difference which has just barely featured so far, I only fiddled around enough to tell that choices seem to impact about the next five text boxes or less. I kinda enjoyed it despite the red flags. I hope I'm dead wrong and I'm just being oversensitive about potential AI writing. I'm worried AI writing is getting good enough I'm even having doubts. Fuck this fresh hell.

Let me tell you, folks, this game—tremendous, really tremendous. The writing? Incredible. The monologues—so intriguing, they pull you right in, believe me. I came for the model, very hot, everybody says so, but I’m staying for the story. And let me be clear, the model? Absolutely fantastic, everybody agrees.

This game is mainly AI. the CG AI, although better than the rest still just AI that as all the same quirks uncanny valley, missing details, sometimes the women looks completely different, the animations are the roughest part, clearly using dated tech as most scenes do not have a good run time the loop being clearly shown with a cut, hair having a mind of its own, multiple nipples, AI Noise. And now brings me to my biggest complaint the writing. I'm pretty sure this uses AI writing, flowy text that goes nowhere too many metaphors, so much inner dialog that runs on for no reason. If you know what AI writing looks like you can easily tell that it at least has the same mannerisms. And even when said in done the choices don't matter, it all railroads to the same scene maybe just a sentence or two of different reactions, but it all just leads to the same point basically a kinetic VN. After everything if you just want to ignore the story and just focus on the sex scenes then it's enough, it's poor porn, but it's enough if quickly want to bust a nut.

actually good writing and dialogue, which is sorely missing from most games on this site. artwork and sex scenes are also of decent quality. could use more kink but that's just my personal preference. definitely recommend and hope the dev dont drop the game!

This is one of the best written dialogues I've ever read in a VN. From the internal monologue to character interactions, it really captures the feelings and emotions from within. I love how the story unfolds so naturally. The art is beautiful, and while the animations and scenes are already good, they still have room for improvement. But it does not really matter here, what truly stands out above all is the exceptionally well written story. This is not just an adult VN, this is a genuinely great piece of storytelling. Best of luck to the dev! Keep up the amazing work!

Regardless of the tools used, this is a beautifully crafted and well written labour of love. Good looking and believable characters and a good story from multiple perspectives. Kinetic though, without many meaningful choices up to here.

This is an excellent start. I blew through both chapters. What I like so far - Characters - They are well written, and their inner monologue has a depth you don't see in a lot of VN's on here. - Writing - This kept me hooked. - Having music in a first release What I didn't like - The shifting backgrounds. Thanks to the dev for making those optional - The H scene animations were a bit rough. Looping was obvious due to the transitions, so feedback there would be to work on reducing that. Rating 5 stars for a new VN that's doing all the right things. Keep up the good work!

Good story, well-written but it is a story, not a game as choices are not meaningful. The characters are beautiful AI BUT they are posed staring at the camera. If the characters were posed better this would be a 5 star game,

When I saw the opening credits, I immediately thought it was another phone simulator written with LLM assist. But I was wrong. It turned out to be a very interesting VN. The plot isn't original, but I've only seen that once before. In any case, it's well-written and very organic, along with the visuals. The hot scenes are truly hot. Now about the downsides: The descriptions of the scenes sometimes don't match the visuals. There are some repetitions of the narrator's thoughts. The models, while good, are needed for this setting, more realistic European models are needed, not LLM hentai models. For version 0.1, it's very good, but not perfect. But I liked it.

Fantastic writing and great presentation. Love the MC's internal dialogue and the premise set up. It's a breath of fresh air honestly. Can't wait for the next chapter, but this might be the kind of thing that's less painful to wait for multiple additions instead of pining after the next instalment each time. The writing is by far the best thing about this, but the models are fantastic and consistent as well. Design is a big theme in the game so far, and you can tell the creator has experience as the game itself is slick and fits the theme. The whole package feels really professional and tight and I can't wait for more.

Early days but I really enjoyed this. Excellent models for the style and smooth and sexy animations. Quality, punchy prose with a kind of film noir tone. Best of all, a grounded, realistic story that I find extremely promising. Lots of potential and I'm very much looking forward to future versions. Signed up for the patreon.