Into the Industry

Regardless of the tools used, this is a beautifully crafted and well written labour of love. Good looking and believable characters and a good story from multiple perspectives. Kinetic though, without many meaningful choices up to here.

Good story, well-written but it is a story, not a game as choices are not meaningful. The characters are beautiful AI BUT they are posed staring at the camera. If the characters were posed better this would be a 5 star game,

This is an excellent start. I blew through both chapters. What I like so far - Characters - They are well written, and their inner monologue has a depth you don't see in a lot of VN's on here. - Writing - This kept me hooked. - Having music in a first release What I didn't like - The shifting backgrounds. Thanks to the dev for making those optional - The H scene animations were a bit rough. Looping was obvious due to the transitions, so feedback there would be to work on reducing that. Rating 5 stars for a new VN that's doing all the right things. Keep up the good work!

When I saw the opening credits, I immediately thought it was another phone simulator written with LLM assist. But I was wrong. It turned out to be a very interesting VN. The plot isn't original, but I've only seen that once before. In any case, it's well-written and very organic, along with the visuals. The hot scenes are truly hot. Now about the downsides: The descriptions of the scenes sometimes don't match the visuals. There are some repetitions of the narrator's thoughts. The models, while good, are needed for this setting, more realistic European models are needed, not LLM hentai models. For version 0.1, it's very good, but not perfect. But I liked it.

Fantastic writing and great presentation. Love the MC's internal dialogue and the premise set up. It's a breath of fresh air honestly. Can't wait for the next chapter, but this might be the kind of thing that's less painful to wait for multiple additions instead of pining after the next instalment each time. The writing is by far the best thing about this, but the models are fantastic and consistent as well. Design is a big theme in the game so far, and you can tell the creator has experience as the game itself is slick and fits the theme. The whole package feels really professional and tight and I can't wait for more.

Early days but I really enjoyed this. Excellent models for the style and smooth and sexy animations. Quality, punchy prose with a kind of film noir tone. Best of all, a grounded, realistic story that I find extremely promising. Lots of potential and I'm very much looking forward to future versions. Signed up for the patreon.