Limits of Deviation

Great start and I like the story so far. Was having issues getting save and load to work though and it would be nice if I could start over after reaching the end in order to go back and try to unlock the other options and images. Look forward to seeing where this goes.

version ch1- Since it's just beginning, i'll try to be lighter on the review, but will update review upon each update. First i hope it will not be abandoned since it will have 4 paths. Saying that, i'm happy that it has a love path which most games now a days are ntr/nts only. The renders are good, a little on the cute side. Just saw one error a space between first and 2nd letter of a word early on. But rest i believe is spelling/grammar/problem free. You can adjust text speed in settings, wish it was a tad faster. The top arrow should say quit/exit or something, the arrow looks out of place on the home screen. Just my opinion. It also would be nice if we could use space bar to advance messages instead of having to click every single time to just read the the conversation. Also would be nice if you could right click and go to save menu. Saves are basic, you can't name them, and it doesn't save a picture to the slot neither. Had a weird thing happen after you click on the picture you can scroll the whole conversation up and down. Other games the other person texts will show at the top so you can jump to them quickly, with this avn you have to keep going back to one to the phone screen to go into the next one. Would be a nice option if they could do it here as well. It has a good text to render ratio. There are no animations. No sounds other then message received. No music. The narration feels like a person typed it vs ai. The flow and pace seem right. Overall not a lot in a .1 release, but a great start. Just a few minutes of game play. Characters are being developed instead of just throwing the player in the deep end. Not a lot of choices but they do make a difference this early on. Spoiler: don't peak, the one good choice Pick the slutty dress No program errors which is great. There's a unique stat bar at the top,i like it. Look forward to the next update and re reevauluate my rating then. It does have a lot of promise.