My Lovely Demon

Damn, that was bad. Never had a game make me actively cringe the entire time I played it before. At least that was an experience. Even In the devs native Spanish this has to be like a 1st grade writing level. I wish good luck to the dev but maybe take some writing classes or practice with some short stories first.

Sorry to give this one a bad review; there's no way around this. The renders are mediocre at best, the same goes for animations. Further on the English is awful, tons of errors made. My educated guess is the author is a Spanish-speaking native, some translation errors seem like Google-translated Spanish to English. On top of that, there are several inner monologues, but they're not marked in any way. There is no cursive, parenthesis, or headline. The plot is barely existent, rushed in general, and the switching of situations, locations, and topics at hand is erratic, putting it mildly and friendly. Some cliches are used badly like secretly loving best friend, some demon-girl and MC is as dull as can be. I'm not exactly sure if this is salvageable with tons of work and improvement in any given aspect - or if it's worth being salvaged. There are far superior alternatives available here in any given aspect.

ohh boy. forced sex scene, a MC without a spine and the average brain activity of a late stage abortion. Neither the Villains nor the MCs motivation makes any conceivable sense. Everything happens in this game is do too a massive contrivance. The english is good as far as i can see, but the dialog is at least 40 % complete useless doesnt drives the plot or characterizes the cast. Also the models stumbled their way here from a 2010 game. Nothing to see here, also i wont get the time lost on this disaster back. Dont make the same mistake as I.