My NTR Girlfriend

by LewDev

Uncensored Windows Android
Versionv0.35
EngineOthers
Released2026-05-16
Updated2026-05-16
LanguageEnglish, Spanish

My NTR Girlfriend is a game/app where you can interact with girls through messages and explore a story with NTR themes.​

V0.35 N/A v0.34 This update only contains a new chapter for Zoe, expanding on the existing branching paths.​ v0.33 This update adds a new chapter for her and continues the existing branching paths. I hope you enjoy it! v0.32 Hi everyone, this update adds a new chapter of Catherine So far, I think it's the biggest update, with approximately 105 images. As for code changes, there weren't any major ones, except that the Date app button now disappears when you unlock all the girls Regarding the new DM system, I decided to postpone it a bit because the update was taking too long, and also, as I mentioned in a previous post, I wasn't sure what to put in those chats at the moment The system itself isn't completely scrapped, but I'd like to refine the idea a bit before releasing it fully. I'll explain a little more about this on April 5th. With this update, the roadmap I published at the beginning of the year is complete, so it's time to work on a new one, which I'll share in a few days. In the meantime, I hope you enjoy this new update. Thank you so much for your support! v0.31.1 N/A v0.30.0 Valentine's Day Nodes Catherine: This node is located on the far right of the flowchart and continues the story with Luke. Zoe: This node is located approximately in the center of the flowchart. Hana: This node is the first one on the flowchart. (This is a small proposal for a change in Hana's context; it's explained at the beginning of the node.) * New nodes are marked with a "new" tag in the flowchart Extra Contributions None were added in the previous update, but this time you can find new contributions from the community in the Puppy Love app. Just open the app and click on the "Community" tab v0.29.0 N/A v0.28.0 New chapter for Zoe New community screen in PuppyLove There is now a new tab called “Community” with contributions from you New roadmap screen At the bottom of the home screen, there is a new icon where you can find a list of features considered for the future Bugs Fixed a bug where skipping to the girl's POV caused the next pop-up chat to contain irrelevant information Changed the flowchart so that with the version change, nodes marked as “New” that no longer have the tag now appear correctly (In this specific version, it might happen, but that's due to the saved game data; it will fix itself as you play) Fixed a bug in full screen where the gallery occupied the entire screen, making the UI unusable Fixed a bug in the gallery where the scroll bar wouldn't update to the initial position when changing pages; now, the scroll bar returns to the initial position when changing pages That's all for this version. I hope you like it. I'll be uploading some news on February 5th v0.26.0 New chapter for Zoe New community screen in PuppyLove There is now a new tab called “Community” with contributions from you New roadmap screen At the bottom of the home screen, there is a new icon where you can find a list of features considered for the future Bugs Fixed a bug where skipping to the girl's POV caused the next pop-up chat to contain irrelevant information Changed the flowchart so that with the version change, nodes marked as “New” that no longer have the tag now appear correctly (In this specific version, it might happen, but that's due to the saved game data; it will fix itself as you play) Fixed a bug in full screen where the gallery occupied the entire screen, making the UI unusable Fixed a bug in the gallery where the scroll bar wouldn't update to the initial position when changing pages; now, the scroll bar returns to the initial position when changing pages New Catherine chapter Bug Fixes Fixed a bug where deleting PuppyLove posts didn't delete posts from profiles related to the girl Fixed a bug where deleting the gallery didn't delete audio files or stories Fixed a bug where the game would freeze and stop when entering the PuppyLove app In the last few days, I've identified a couple more bugs that I'll fix in future versions, but I'm noting them here so you know I’m working on them BUG: When skipping a girl's POV, the next chat that opens will only have the option "Close chat" BUG: After updating, the nodes from the previous version appear blank as if they haven't been played v0.25.0 A short chapter for Alexia A Christmas scene for Alicia A Christmas scene for Catherine A Christmas scene for Hana A Christmas scene for Zoe v0.24.0 N/A v0.23.0 new Zoe chapter There are no major changes to the game's code or features since the last version. I'll be posting some news about what's coming this December in a few days v0.21.1 New Catherine chapter, I hope you like it! Due to a vote, a system was added that allows you to view some conversations from a girl's POV. This feature is available for Patreon members and will be unlocked publicly on November 15th. Optimizations A major change was the optimization of the gallery. Now, images are separated into pages, and to see more, you have to press the buttons at the bottom. A bug I never noticed was that when entering the same gallery multiple times, the game would crash because the RAM would fill up with unused resources. Now, these resources are properly cleared, and the RAM shouldn't get overloaded. With the two optimizations above, I hope the game will run on more types of phones and it takes a mental load off my mind PuppyLove Redesign Now, when you open the PuppyLove app, you'll see two tabs. The first is a general feed where you can see past unlocked posts. The second tab is the profiles screen where you can select a specific one. v0.20.0 In the public version , the new chat system has been unlocked, so you can now see some additional chats with other people in your history A button to mute messages has been added to the settings menu A new message type (Money Transfer) has been added, which can be seen on some route A new label has been added to deleted messages When recovering deleted messages, a small label will now appear indicating that it has been recovered This was done so you don't have to remember which messages were deleted while scrolling Unlock gallery feature A new tab has been added to the gallery, allowing you to unlock the entire gallery with one click. This makes it easier to unlock a missing image without having to repeat everything This option is available to everyone, so use it at your own risk v0.13.0 A new Catherine chapter was added A new chapter has been added that expands existing branches Added a small indicator to know where you are currently in the flowchart You can set a background image When viewing a photo in the gallery, there is a new button at the bottom which sets the image as the background on the home screen In case you want to reset the image, you can find a button at the bottom of the settings Puppy Love bug fixed Fixed a bug where the Puppy Love app wouldn't display images in the correct order when they weren't uploaded by girls Posts should now appear in the correct order regardless of who posted them During testing I saw that Alice, since she already has many images, may take a while to enter her gallery. I am working on an optimization in this regard, but for the moment it may take a few seconds to enter V0.12.0 N/A v0.11.0 A new Hana chapter has been added With the completion of this chapter, all girls now have one! I would like to thank everyone who gave me feedback in the previous post. I will take everything into account and announce some changes to the way I work next Monday The initial loading of the game has been optimized The initial loading of the game now takes less time, and the error that the game crashes is expected to be gone As a result, opening a girl's album may take a few seconds due to the immediate loading of all the images. I am working on this loading time to make it as short as possible Change to the Puppy Love app Now in Puppy Love, posts are divided by girl. In each section, you will find posts related to that girl v0.10.0 Home menu redesign Buttons are now located at the bottom for convenience New feature in the Puppy Love app You can now expand a post's image and it will be visible in the app itself. Resolution issue in Puppy Love The Puppy Love app now adapts to the monitor size on PCs. Change to Patreon girls If you install the public version but have already unlocked a Patreon girl, you will not lose access to the images you have unlocked. PL posts now appear from newest to oldest per character We are currently working on adding filters for convenience. More details later. New settings A button has now been added to the settings menu to keep all posts in the Puppy Love app. By default, this is disabled since the goal is to only have posts from the route you are currently playing. With this new setting, you can keep all posts regardless of whether you change the route. v0.9.0 New system A new system has been created for posting images While in the chat, a notification will appear informing you that there is a new post in the app You can press the button below the post to see some comments Images in the post will be unlocked in the gallery This system is exclusive to Patreon and will go public on May 15th New Zoe chapter Existing paths have been expanded Stories A button has been added to return to the chat from stories Flowchart The flowchart is now displayed horizontally to better fit the screen Bug fixes Full-screen stories will now adjust to the screen size The settings menu now adjusts to the screen size on PC v0.7.0 Catherine rework Catherine was reworked to better organize the story (previous events are still there, just in a different order) A new route was added and existing paths were expanded Photo gallery reworked Content you haven't unlocked yet is now displayed as "Locked" to show a preview A section was added to the gallery to display audio clips A section was added to the gallery to display snaps Optimizations History rework, now only the last 80 messages are displayed when entering the chat (this is to reduce loading time), there is a new config to show all the history Bugs Black screen error when updating (The error is due to an engine problem; tests have been performed and it has been fixed, but a new installation is required for this update) Fixed an error when entering a girl's profile v0.6.0 The story system is publicly unlocked. Now, by clicking on the bubble at the top, you can view the content. A new save system has been implemented. Some users have had problems installing the new version, I recommend doing a fresh install (sorry for the inconvenience) A bug has been fixed where some emojis weren't displaying correctly. You can now add a nickname to the girl you like; this section is located in her profile. Background customization has been added. Colors can be changed and the animation can be stopped. A minor redesign of the credits has been made. v0.5.0 New system A story system has been added where characters can post images. When viewing a story you can tap the screen to interact, you can pause (tap the center), fast forward (tap the right side), view the previous story (tap the left side) New Catherine chapter New characters Zoe, a main streamer looking to be more social. Alexia, a girl looking for a partner for her adventures. General stuff A new type of message has been added (call from the main character) A small credits screen has been added (Thanks to all the Patreons) v0.4.0 Dating app. With the addition of new characters, the dating application was added, with which you can unlock these new characters Rework of temporary messages Now the temporary messages do not disappear from the history, they are only marked as “This message has been deleted”. In case you want to see the message again you must press the reload button. This feature applies to temporary messages and images Improved audio message The audio message can now be paused. At the moment there is only one audio in the game but I decided to make this change in order not to have more work later. Animation on profile picture A small animation was added to the profile picture to make it stand out when entering the chat. Hopefully this will make it clear that the girl's profile can be entered Changes in the flowchart The flowchart nodes with the caption “...” now have the chapter and scene identifier. This is done to make it easier to recognize where you are located. This change is only aesthetic Bug fixes Fixed a bug in the gallery where the indicator of unlocked and total images did not match. Fixed a bug in which every time you entered the chat, a message was forwarded without having pressed the reply button v0.3.0 Flowchart Now if you go to the girl's profile you will find a flowchart with the available routes in the story Each node in the story will turn green when you have visited it Just by pressing the note, you will jump to that point Redesign of temporary messages Now in the settings menu you can change if temporary messages are not deleted and remain in the history or are deleted. IMPORTANT: In the next update there will be another small redesign where the identifier "Deleted message" will be added so that the function works the same as a real chat application (Sorry for the inconveniences) Redesign of the gallery As new characters will be added soon (February 14) a change is made in the gallery application, now when entering the gallery an album of the characters of the game is shown, so we have a better organization An identifier was added to this screen to know exactly how many images are in the game and how many have been unlocked for each girl Audio messages The audio message was added At the moment there is only one audio message in the game This message can be played, however due to time issues the way to pause it was not added, that function will be added in another update (Sorry for the inconveniences) Multiple characters in the same chat. A new type of message was added, this message specifies which person sent a message, thus opening the possibility of having multiple characters in the same chat The function complies with the basics but can be improved in the future (for example, the indicator changes color depending on the character speaking) Change in the configuration Now in the settings menu on the main screen the options apply to all characters in the game In case you want to delete the chat or gallery of a specific character you must go to the girl's profile v0.2.0 This time for the v0.2.0 update the following was added New Catherine chapter, More content is added to Catherine's story, expanding the existing routes UI Rework A change was made to the game's UI, now the application is started from the chat list. The gallery (and in the future more apps) is accessed from the top bar Now messages as well as some UI elements have sound Temporary messages were added A new function was added, messages can be temporary and you can only see them for a few brief moments. (Check the settings menu) I created it a few days ago but there is already a discord dedicated to the game IMPORTANT: I know that to see the multiple routes it can be tedious to be resetting the history and starting over again (It happens to me too), I am already working on adding a way to jump between different routes and points in history, the function will be released in version v0.3.0 v0.1.0 With this new update I reset the catherine story (Right now I have the outline of all chapters) The catherine story finish Feb-14 I added the response system, so now there'll be alternate paths I added the translations, now the game is in Spanish and English Demo initial zone release
yobasan 2026-03-04
Thanks for the app! Very attractive girls, lots of different routes, and they're still really hot! Continued stories are coming regularly! It's really cool that there are audio inserts, they're really cool, that's probably the main thing that turns me on!
Arthur6002 2026-02-21
The story can be better. Feels like a generic NTR story with a speciality- flowchart. With the flowchart you can choose to go through every choice see what every playthrough does. This is one of the good things about this game.
Dsperado 2026-01-04
The graphics are average, nothing over the top exciting. But i do enjoy the fact that it does have sound with some scenes, not all but some. It helps with the immersion. Also there's a good amount of content. I will say that the best so far is the 1st story imho. While clicking around i found how to get started with the other girls, there's really no description of the interface. I look forward to see where the stories go. Keep up the good work.
Silwith 2025-11-17
Okay, to start with the "good", the AI images are pretty nice, nothing too special, but pretty good, nothing to complain about. Also: The QoL features are VERY good! The flowchart with the option to jump wherever you want is an actual GREAT thing to have. The bad? The "writing"... the sentences make sense on their own, but not in the context of the coversations, it is like the character just talk past each other, it ranges from slightly weird to completly incoherent... you kind puzzle together what happens in the story, by the following pictures and things happening, because the conversations really dont convey it, kinda like a AI chatbot that isn't properly calibrated and forgets context too... And don't expect actual NTS... I did play 3 of the routes that are labeled as "NTS", 2 for the main girl and the one for the streamer girl... the main girl is 'The MC wants to try sharing, his GF kinda not and in the end it goes full NTR with the GF gettign creampied against the MCs will, who told her not to do anything, as a "fuck off" from her to him' as well as a "The MC wants to try sharing, his GF is open to it, but only wants one Guy, who makes her his bitch and the MC a pathetic cuck' (that one tbf is the typical "NTS with NTR vibes" that many games go in...) and the streamer girl is just "MC is a pathetic simp while the streamer girl gets it" ... like... don't look for anything remotely wholesome or healthy here IF you try it, which in my opinion you really dont have to Especially for NTS lovers it's bad, barely even 1Star I would say, but it is called "My NTR Girlfriend", so I don't rate it down for that, still, because of the weird coherency and context problems of the writing it still doesn't go about 2 Stars overall.
Roninsan 2025-09-23
[Review based on update v0.18.0](Sep/2025) PROS : *The flowchart system makes the gameplay insanely good. No save/load bs.... Just click the route/branch you want to change (or replay) in the flowchart, and there you go! *The art quality and character variety is slighly above average for this type of phone games. CONS : *Very few images. Sometimes there's only 1 picture for a sex event. *Maybe for the NTS parts, a short story is not too bad... But for the NTR part, everything happens too fast, with no build-up. Like I said above, there's too few images, and this helps makes the NTR progress look even more rushed (example: for some girls, the second sex event is already a creampie image...) Worth a play for sure. Huge props to the Dev for the flowchart system!
LordLorio 2025-08-18
Overall impression — A surprisingly ambitious, engaging project. The cast is diverse and each route has its own tempo, which keeps scenarios fresh. The most developed characters are a joy to explore, with solid‑length scenes and consistent visual care. Conversely, for characters with fewer images I’m holding off: below roughly 125 images (ideally 150+ to feel “complete” to me), I haven’t really played their routes. In several cases the content is split across 4–5 short branches that scatter in different directions without going deep yet, so I don’t see much point at this stage. Content and visuals — Clean renders, strong image quality, and a “hidden stories/events” mechanic that really works like Instagram stories: characters post glimpses of what they’re doing in the moment. Nice immersion touch: occasionally a secondary character interacts with the MC through those stories. Content‑wise, I’d love more scenes matching my tastes (specifically the BBC/interracial tag) — obviously subjective, but it makes some scenes feel hotter to me. Interface / UX — Early on I was confused by the flowchart because I didn’t realize you need to scroll to see all of it; a tiny “Scroll to view all branches” hint would help. For QoL, I’d love direct access to a character’s newly unlocked stories from their profile: there’s unused space at the top, so a slim header strip with clickable “Stories” thumbnails (flagged as “New” when relevant) would save the menu → chats → pick‑the‑story back‑and‑forth. Length — Adding up the bigger branches without skipping dialogue took me about 4 hours minimum. Faster if you skip repeated lines. Technical — I ran into one or two minor branching hiccups: a choice that seems to lead to a scene but actually triggers an ending, plus occasional overlapping branches that cause confusion. Nothing game‑breaking, but worth tightening. Key suggestions (QoL) — Add a “Scroll to view all branches” hint on the flowchart. Top‑of‑profile header with clickable “Stories” thumbnails (“New” when applicable) for direct access to unlocked content. Focus on wrapping one route/character before opening new ones to reduce the scattered feel. Bottom line — Despite a few UX/branching wrinkles, this remains one of the most promising projects in the niche: ambitious, visually consistent, and able to hold your attention over time. Recommended.
dooodd 2025-07-19
Just a few qualms, to me the sex events just felt rather generic and didn't really feel like there was any payoff, that might be due to how quick it jumps straight to sex, or from how little pictures are rewarded from the acts that aren't really showing much. We get lots of generic pictures showing off outfits but what, 1-3 of the sex? I also think the audio files that you get sent should probably be videos instead (a series of a few pictures that tie to the audio), otherwise they just feel pointless Fast text should have an option to also make your own texts fast without having to spam click, up until a choice appears
LexSkull 2025-06-17
Compared to other "Phone Chat" games, this one is pretty good. I like the multiple branches that you can go through, if NTR is not your cup of tea. Plus the little tweaks, such as the "fake Instagram" with expiration time, audio files sent via text and the "delete" messages makes it more interactive. I can only speak for the NTR part - I personally would have milked the time until she gets to have sex with other partners, and possibly try to make the story to sound like she hates what she is doing. Yet whatever she is going through, she is doing it for him. Make him feel like his stomach if in turmoil and still not sure what he wants. But that is just me (^_^) Still, I am looking forward to seeing what new updates this game brings (^_^)
Jazz2308 2025-06-17
Well game isn't bad in particular like it has it's charm and there aren't just one continuous story which leads different ways so that's all fine and dandy. Just can't understand why in every single story the MC dude is a big dummy like I would give much higher rating to the game if in every rout of the story there was an option to call out our girlfriend on her cheating when we see her doing it. like we kinda call her out when she isn't doing it. but when we have concrete social media proof of our girlfriend cheating on us, we do jack sit nothing even if we are waiting for ever in front of her house for her to open and let us in or come out to us. And when we see post about her cheating by some James. We do absolutely Jack shit nothing about it. So if on every story where love interest cheats behind our back we have at least a mini sub route which leads to the story end with happily ever after in which ever form it may be or an alternative more dominant approach I would appreciate and improve my rating. But so far game is better than others but still lacking for a good one in plot department. The rating goes down because game went from ok to worse. One because in all the stories we behave like total pushover for no reason at all. And we let all women bullshit us around like a dumb ball. There so many choices but non of them matter in the end and I know Ntr is in the name but even Ntr phone has win scenarios for mc. here we only lose no mater what we do it's kind of dumb. and game seems like kinetic novel with different picture despite the branching. But even if let us end things with dignity, block the bitch and put her lover on a hospital bed so she understands there is consequence for disrespect.
Talishan 2025-05-23
Chapter 1 Art - 1/5 Story - 1/5 Writing - 2/5 Gameplay - VN Characters - 2/5 Porn - 2/5 Getting sick of extremely generic AI artwork that lacks consistency and looks super meh? Then this game is not for you. Add to that terrible writing, unrealistic characters that are meh at best, and typical NTR scenarios that just happen to happen with no real development towards them and you get a real yawnfest of a game that isn't worth your time. Maybe if you are really really into NTR you might find the scenes erotic, but honestly the setup and writing is so bad that I would be surprised.
ViciousXyer 2025-05-18
I really love this game, it's honestly one of the best in this genre. The art is super well done, you can tell there's a lot of care put into it. The characters have they’re own personality really well developed, and each story feels unique and immersive, never repetetive at all. Can’t wait to see more updates, it’s definetly one of my fav NTR games. A true piece of art. Keep up the amazing work dev!
humanity666 2025-04-18
0.8 My NTR Girlfriend There's couple games with ai phone conversation style developing rn. This has multiple plots and is new, so altho events didn't developed much yet it's promising. Story routes tend to be bit chaotic and lead to multiple dead ends, instead of linear progression. tl;dr bit chaotic, promising, but still too early in development to recommend
Rex Blue 2025-04-01
Whelp, here we are with yet another NTS phone game. My NTR Girlfriend feels pretty bland as far as they go. Not a whole lot of personality to any of the characters, not a lot of interesting events, progression is sudden with a fairly pushy MC and an LI who is resistant, but not enough to say no. I kept waiting for anything to happen to really pique my interest and... nothing. The game is fine and nothing else. I can't recommend it and I guess I can't really not recommend it. Is it weird I almost feel more scornful of this mediocrity than some of the truly pathetic examples of this genre I've played? At least I could laugh at the B movie vibes with those. It feels like this game is just clicking checkboxes rather than any kind of passion project. What's the point?
reshanta 2025-03-09
This is my fav among other ntr chat phone games. it do feel more natural on the flow. The art is pretty good and each character have diverse personality and occupasion. As in the current progress, it surprise me they implement a voice chat from the character. Really looking forward to the updates of this game.
deviousstorm 2025-03-01
The game currently lacks a lot of quality of life, and features that are pretty emblematic of the genre. With very little subsistence and not as well written dialogue between characters. Also lacking set up and pay offs for most of the interactions between events. There really isn't any 'character' to these people, you don't see interactions between people, or between the FMC or any of the other bulls, you are just in a chair, reacting. There is very little development in this way it is more akin to flipping a picture book than experiencing a story. Good story writing I feel always has more than reaction, you have to do things. With other games of the genre especially in NTR its about what the bull does its what they are doing to the girl that is the important part for most people. Its the anticipation and the pay off of what they are doing. While it is 'realistic' for us not to know, it lacks the proper pay off for that anticipation and I believe it does not provide that proper satisification. Another game of its genre it NTR Phone, which it clearly takes inspiration from, we have, dialogue, characters talking about things, but you as the player are driving the story, your decisions completely change what they do, and what your pay off while also giving you supple reaction and other character moments. This game does not do that well, it lacks a lot of the finesse and dialogue writing that is pretty critical to setting up someone and meanders around before sex happens. I do not think it is worth your time yet, until its fully released. At the moment substantial amount of content is locked behind a paywall. While also not being as fleshed out, there are also problems with just how the game functions. There is only the texting and the patreon only content (as of march 1st). While many other games of this genre try to do unique things it still lacks enough things to do that it lacks variety or uniqueness that is sorely needed in this game's genre. As it is, it is an average game.
ottomanfemboy 2025-02-16
As of version 0.4.0; Gaming infrastructure is perfect. Best one out there for phone simulators. Tracking with flowcharts and be able to jump to which part you want is superb. Kudos to the dev. Graphics is well done, but very vanilla. There isn't an unique artistic choice that would distinguish this game. Writing is good. Story is the the weakest chain. There is only a netorare and a netorase path in the for now but in the netorare part is lackluster. MC doesn't react as he should to the fact of that his girlfriend cheated on him with clear evindence. Netorare path also evolves to somewhat a netorase just as it beings. There could have been some hints of his girlfriend is cheating on him instead of the guy send the photo of him fucking his girlfriend, and nothing happens after. Netorase part develops too quick. There should be some more time. It has a good foundation. I hope the dev spends some time to develop and polishes the story and add new paths.
InfamousBT14 2025-02-05
Better than your average NTR phone game. The UI of the game feels more polishrd than others. There's somewhat a reasonable amount content to go through and replay through. One thing I appreciate is the replayability of this game in order to get different content. It's not linear compared to others. The AI CG However there's grammatical errors in this game and slow build to the NTR or corruption is pretty much non existent, which is pretty disappointing. Despite this it's alot more enjoyable and fun than your typical NTR phone game because of the replayability/different paths you can take.
embed 2025-02-05
The best NTR phone game so far! First of all, the gameplay is very comfortable. It has all the desirable features - fast messaging, a gallery, picture zoom, and even jump to any flowchart point. Lightweight engine. Android version runs smoothly. The art is amazing, I love that petite girl with juicy bottom. The story is hot yet simplified. I'd prefer a slower approach, rather than getting straight to the point. I'm eagerly waiting for the continuation and for the introduction of other girls. To the dev, if you're reading this, consider changing the topic picture. It didn't look promising at all but I gave it a try and don't regret it. Others might skip it based on the image alone.
Super_TOM 2025-02-03
I love art style here, and this is very important to me. Story seems to be good so far, though I don't exactly understand my gf's motivation.. Anyway if you like ntr phone simulation (as I do), you definitely should try this one Keep it up dev, you are doing good job!
thswherizat 2025-02-03
Art was good, writing is more legible and believable than some. I was underwhelmed, the approach of deleting photos actually left me wondering what I missed more than once when I wasn't paying rapt attention. I would prefer chats with some third party or something to set up the NTR stuff a bit better, rather than the GF just being a cheater for A: no reason and B: seemingly with no connection to what's going on in the story? EDITED AS OF 0.4.0, Dev has made the deleting pictures thing much better, but I still feel like there's a lot of dead space where you have to just imagine what's going on. To move my rating higher I would like to see some way, either through like Fakestagram Posts or something, to visually keep up with what she's up to. As it is I have no idea why she's cheating but also I don't think generally you find out about anything either. Also the MC suddenly knowing that she's cheating feels out of nowhere.

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