Naomi: Breaking the Queen Bee

The game is good and it have some qualities but it's really frustrating because there isn't much content for now ! I played about 1 hour reading everything and I have get 5 scenes wich are nice but that's it. That is why I only give 3 stars but maybe in next updates, with more content I would give 4 stars.

PERFECT 11/10. Extremly well written. Tbh, you should be into very sick fetish to like this game, but I am a weirdo --or perhaps a man of culture-- anyway, extremly solid game. Don't like the scat this tho, but it can be toggled off so that's a good thing

This is a particularly interesting and original game with a certain level of intelligence, mainly in terms of psychology, it’s not just mindless fap content like so many others. It’s an extreme male domination that gets straight to the point, a single woman as the sole sexual object, and the game goes all out with it. There’s no real story or dull moments, at least you know exactly why you’re playing an adult visual novel with this game. Graphically, for a first game, it’s really not bad. Naomi is very sexy, she’s got what it takes in all the right places, and the facial animations are very well done. As for minor flaws, the unnaturally colored, shiny eyes are really weird, and I would have really liked to be able to rename the main character.

Honestly, this... ehmmm... creation looks like some cruel angry merciless parody of maledom and rape games. Totally brutally merciless parody, real feast of utter humiliation of maledom game developers and fans. I know that the developer has repeatedly stated that this game is not a parody, and that events in this game should be taken seriously. But maybe he has some hidden thoughts? ...ohh, or maybe I'm just being too nice to people. 1) THE PROTAGONIST This in NOT a "female protagonist" game. This is kinetic novel and you can make no single decision for any female character. As well as this is not a story of some female character. This is the story about some cruel dungeon Master... oh, well, let's face him. (no spoilers 'cause dev published already all this info in the game promotions) Our cruel Dominant "the biggest dick in a whole world" dungeon Master is... a schoolteacher. In the school he works he is always humiliated by schoolgirls. They don't consider him a man! Poor Master... Meanwhile other teachers are friendly to him. So he is probably well-educated and kind person, but he's just not able to build relationships with his students. Well, to teach in a classroom, you need some firmness of character, which obviously he lacks. He lives alone in the big rich manor, probably leaved to him by his mom. Definitely no way he bought this manor for his wages. He has no wife, no children, even no cat or dog. He is definitely not a leader. Later we won't see a single situation in which he solves real problems. Well, actually this weak and lonely man deserve some compassion. Can't take any more humiliation, he decided to kidnap one of the schoolgirls, lock her in the basement of his house and "teach her obedience". Generally speaking, this hysterical act is the best demonstration of his complete failure as a man and a teacher. 2) THE PLOT Kidnapped girl is tracked by... nobody. No parents, no friends, no police... Nobody within 2 weeks. Hmm, OK, let's take it as a game convention. During these 2 weeks the kidnapper is absolutely free to do with her everything he wants. Wow, what a cruel monster!.. Hmmm, wait a sec... OK, he has 2 weeks to torture her - but what next? The murder? Or all those long long years in the local prison? Btw, the murder is not a decision, cause he will be the most suspected person. So anyway all those muscle bastards waits him in the prison shower. Is he really ready to pay his life for this 2 weeks of sadist's fun? He don't looks like this. Looks like our Dungeon Master didn't count all the consequences of his act. What a hysteric boy. Pathetic. 3) THE TORTURES Oh, well... First, he allowed her to pee. How cruel! From the dev's point of view, this is a very important event. Then he grabbed her breast. He grabbed her nipples and started tugging them. It's quite clear that neither the Dev nor his character had ever tugged on a woman's breasts. Women's breasts are indeed very sensitive, but such tugging would only cause pain and discomfort. Poor little teacher! He could never please a woman. Then he started punishing her for watching the femdom video. The poor boy was brutally humiliated by Pornhub and decided to take revenge... Then... oh, enough. What a pathetic gay... By the way. The author claims his game is "about psychology." Okay, here's a little psychology. To kidnap Naomi and transport her between rooms, Teach uses a "magic spray" that instantly puts Naomi to sleep. Hmm, wait a second... Chloroform isn't magic; it's long been known and easy to obtain. But to use chloroform, you first have to apply it to a handkerchief, then press the handkerchief to the victim's face. In all the scenes with the spray, Naomi is bound, but her mouth is free. She might bite! Our cruel alfa-male is afraid of her even when she's bound. Now remember, this isn't a live-action show. It's a game; all the characters and their actions are fictional. An interesting insight into the author's personality and how he views his hero, isn't it? 4) Psychology Seriously, this game is about Psychology. Dev wrote it on the first screen of his game. Psychology. Yeahh, psychology... Everything I wrote above is Psychology. Sure. Hey, stop laughing!!! 5) HoneySelect... It's even somehow symbolic that such a game was made on HoneySelect... was made on HoneySelect with such a shameful level of quality. Maledom what maledom's fans deserves... ( Sorry, but this is the only way the developer could think of, given the game's low visual quality.) 6) Hmmm... well, enough. Enough already. Peace!!! ---UPDATE--- from comments. Dev vehemently denies that this is possible, so it's not a spoiler. By the way, this is a great plot twist. If it turns out in the finale that our poor teacher simply dreamed this whole kidnapping and his living in the rich manor, then such a plot twist will conveniently cover up all these shameful plot holes. And if he draws the right conclusions from his absurd fantasies and becomes good obedient boy because it suits him better... oh, so this is where we get that very psychology the author warned us about in the game's introduction.

Naomi: Breaking the Queen Bee - Act 2 Part 1 I like to believe I'm the target audience. I turn every degenerate toggle on with excitement. This VN nails the fundamentals but fumbles the main attraction, so it cancels into a 3/5. Production Quality - Solid The presentation is well directed. Creative use of CG transitions, good camera work and angles. Feels like the creator thought through each scene visually as a whole. No awkward standing around talking. No one-off CGs that are beautiful but stiff and disconnected from what's happening on screen. The visual language is more mature than most VNs here. Pacing is tight too. Nothing dragged out too long. Information and backstory drip fed at a consistent pace. No complaints. The Male MC - Does His Job Seems to have an interesting past and goes straight to the point. No fluff, not a simp, no unnecessarily long writer self-insert monologue. He serves the role I expect from this genre perfectly. No cringe, does the job, doesn't take too much spotlight from the girls. The balance is right. The Problem - Naomi Here's where it falls apart. I expect a lot from her since she IS the title and main focus. She IS the VN. But she's not very interesting and doesn't have high synergy with this genre. Character Writing: She's a dumb horny bitch just like the appearance suggests, and right now there isn't more to it. Not end-of-the-world boring, but would I keep up with this multi-year VN project just for her? Nah. She gets horny at lightning speed, and after every training she just shrugs it off like a dumb bitch would. It's not satisfying to see and doesn't feel like we're making progress. For this kind of single-girl focus VN I want to fight a multi-phase Dark Souls boss with twists and turns. Instead I got a 1HP mob that dies from a touch, drops trash loot, and respawns instantly like nothing happened. Visual Design: Also not my taste at all. Even her friend looks more like protag material. Naomi's design seems too noisy? This might not be a straight con, just not my thing. Chemistry Issues: Her synergy with the male MC isn't particularly great either. With such an interesting male MC I often ask myself - is this the most interesting story from his life? Would the most memorable girl he encounters be Naomi? If not, why are we following this story instead? Bottom Line Strong fundamentals attached to a weak protagonist. This VN would be perfect for me if we switched out Naomi.

Very well written visual novel with top tier animations. This game focus on psychology, training, gradual corruption. One thing I particularly like about this game is Naomi's attitude. She does bite and acted like a bitch throughout the whole story. If you dont like filthy content such as SCAT, then you should probably turn the filter off.

Really glad this game includes fart and scat content. Looking forward to another scenes like that in the new updates, though i understand it's not everyone's cup of tea. Either way, you do you, my guy, keep up the amazing work!

TBH, at this point (Act 2, Pt1), my only fear is that the dev loses interest in the development and leaves this project before completion... because it is fucking great! There are *very few* games here (good or otherwise) with the same setup/plot and a "completed" tag. The official Overview on the top of this thread is a good description of what we have here. What it is not obvious is that the execution is really top notch, and well worth the download. Again: my only fear is to invest time and "hope" on this VN just to see it abandoned. Hopefully this will not be the case. Fingers crossed!

Played Act 2 Part 1 – Kinetic novel about a teacher getting fed up with one of his problem students and giving her an attitude adjustment by imprisoning her in his sex dungeon and using a mix of sexual torture, magic drugs and psychology to turn her into a submissive slut. Well written, dialogue is good, characters hot and the story is simple but interesting enough. I especially like how Naomi actually resists before she succumbs and how she gets some of her fire back before the next session – it makes her giving in all the sweeter because of the struggle. I also like how it is more reluctance rather than hard noncon – Naomi hates it, but she does enjoy the pleasure and is not completely miserable from trauma. Has really hot and inventive bdsm content with a promise of more. So far we have humiliation, bondage, device bondage, light pet play, blowjob training, a really hot predicament scene and really well done slave training. Also has some (harmless) scat and urination content that can be turned off. Gonna watch it with great interest. It’s pretty promising and one of the better bdsm games we got lately.

Honestly didn't expect much but due to the ratings, I've tried it. And wow it slaps (in the good way) ! The story is intriguing and the slow buildup is well done. It will take surely a year to see the game completed but every update should be interesting to see !

Corruption stories like this are my favorite; I was completely engrossed in the game from the moment I started it until I finished act 2. I love Naomi's character design, and her personality is perfection for a story like this. The scenes are so enticing and unlike anything I've seen in other VNs. My only suggestion would be to add a textbox opacity slider, as I had a little trouble reading at some points. Your work is truly incredible, and I can't wait for the release of the next act!

Played till: ACT 2 Part 1 - The story and scenes are unique and quite different from other VNs - Ambience and the music are on point, really great work, gives it a very grim but elevated and thrilling atmosphere. - For the story alone you deserve 5 stars, i really enjoy playing games which focuses on exploiting human behavior and psychology - the extreme fetishes and scenes used are very interesting and hot. Personally i really enjoyed the quiz sections of the game, the protagonist hints about the manipulation techniques he uses on naomi, it works really well. some minor drawbacks, the lighting could use a little tweak, and the english text contain some errors. But its nothing significant , it doesnt break the immersion or experience. Really awesome work dev, Please don't abandon this project. its really rare to find games such as yours.

Really really good dialogue and the scenes are fantastic. One of the best games I've played on the site and having the option to turn off the more controversial content is greatly appreciated. Extremely excited to see where it goes from here.

Version Played: Act 2 P1 I really liked this game, and feel it deserves 5 stars even though I was a little lukewarm on it when I finished this version. The writing (world building, story and writing) are all very well done. The story progression moves along at a very good pace - not too fast or slow. Given all that, I was little surprised that I didn't have a more positive vibe from this game when I finished. I think it comes down to a couple very subjective things: * I don't find Naomi all that attractive. For me, her face is too stylized, and her chest doesn't look right - I guess too large and perky makes them seem very unnatural? She's certainly not bad looking, but I find her the least attractive of the girls in this game (my favorite is Candie). * This is a minor nit, but I almost skipped this game because of the scat tag. I really like that we can turn that content off at the beginning, but I could do without being reminded that that content is about to be skipped. Maybe change that notification text to something more general, like "Some Extreme Content" is turned off? Again, that's pretty minor and very subjective on my part.

Insanely good writing for corruption. If you're at all into corruption, humiliation, or mind-break then this will likely be something you thoroughly enjoy. There is some watersports and scat content which I can't comment on because I don't enjoy those subjects, and so I skipped them, but I think that's a feather in the games hat as they're entirely optional. Try it out, I think you'll like it quite a bit.

My true score would be 4.75 / 5, but I see the potential for it to be a true 5. I think the premise is there, and the way how some science are used to explain why certain psychological changes are happening is really interesting. If you did take a step back, you would still notice that everything is accelerated. But, we are playing a porn game, and as a porn game pacing, it's great. The game is still quite new and I can't wait for the next update

A genuinely compelling story of brat training. Naomi is great as a main character and focus, with valley-girl speech and constant defiance, and her trainer is thoughtful, educated, and cruel - all delightful ingredients to a tale that is still in progress. Though this isn't terribly long at time of post, what is there is extremely high-quality and deserves a look.

It's sadistic, psychotic, disturbing, satisfying, beautiful and downright sexy. All the the more disturbing tags like scat and urination are optional so any fan of maledom or training should try this game. MC is intelligent, driven, attractive and worthy of respect while Naomi is the perfect brat to "teach".

Incredible start. Doesn’t waste too much time setting up the story and gets right to the action. Dialogue is well done and enjoyable to read. Scenes are very creative. Animations are great. Just all around fantastic, can’t wait to see more.

People should make more games like this in the future, would pay money for a game like this, especially if it was voiced in english. Great story and great scenes. The only game I will probably ever rate on this website because this is how much I like this game and it deserves 5 stars. Wish more western adult games were like this one.