Naughty Bro: Reckoning!

You ever read reviews for a game, but then see the screenshots and think "huh, it can't be THAT bad, some of the LIs look cute"? Yea. That's what I did with this game. It was that bad. - Guy loses his childhood g/f due to his asshole dad sending him to the military - Comes back, dad is trying to fuck his fiance/girlfriend's daughters - old g/f is fucking another dude. - MC is not remotely likable. LIs are kind of attractive Dialogue is poor Sex scenes are...average. Skip on this one, it'll never be worth it imo.

Spoiler ahead, don't worry, you aren't missing anything. I don't know what country this is supposed to take place in, but the military doesn't work like that. MC gets sent to the military against his will by his father. He completes his training and now they can't let him join all the way because he has to finish high school. Lol what? His best friend/ex girlfriend is now a hooker and he finds her with another man. And then it ends on a cliffhanger. Bruh. Did you even try?

VERSION: v0.1.1 SUMMARY: Meh, same old broken record taking a spin RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐ ⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ ⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Models are OK, fine looking, but do look dated like something of 5+ years ago. Animations are serviceable but not all that great, short Audio, sure there is and even some lewds but FML... see comments CONS: - See my opinions section for details. UX/UI, lack of font and opacity setting, though the way its default is fine, this is merely point out lack of feature set. Mediocre world renders, very bland and empty. Rooms not furnished, unlived in, empty and room designs being nonsensical. Writing is poor, at least translated to English is Dialogue is shallow and nonsensical, porn logic abound in the scenes. See comments. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) A translator or someone that is fluent in English is required to redo the dialogue script as there are way too many poor translated lines that make the AVN feel even more amateurish. The way the "romance" is setup, the MC stares at the prostitute his dad was banging, telling his "friend" who is a girl, all about his lewd thoughts like she is just one of his "bros" he even goes and rubs one out before coming back to the "friend" then a scene follows where he confesses his "feelings" by arguing he has a hard-on (this is romance apparently) because of her (the friend) GEE WIZ IT MUST BE LOVE RIGHT? FML Sure the MC tells her how pretty she is etc, but ffs the MC is more horny than sincere and its so damn obvious. This is just distasteful and diminishes a good thing. Then the logic of the MC "breaking" into his dads house, for all intents his own family home, to play computer games, and they think they wont get caught? Even the reason for getting caught is flimsy, who cares, and did they really think NO ONE will notice the lights on, the bathroom being used, the voices in the room...what kind of stupid logic is this? When it comes to sounds sure there are moan sounds but they on loop and eventually sounds like a hand pump inflating something then you know its actually bad and should probably have not even included the sounds. The MC is actually pretty unlikable and selfish, the entire script of thoughts going through his head while he just took his best friends virginity is either about the prostitute he saw or why he hasn't done this sooner so he could have got pussy. There is nothing sincere or wholesome about him, where his friend seems like a sweet girl. Post nut clarity he says the opposite again and confesses his feelings, but honestly he comes across as disingenuous. Even after his trip to the army, he is even more perverted. Per above point, I also feel the MC is all over the place and it again shows how writing is all over the place and very inconsistent. I am not sure if we can blame that on poor translating or a language barrier at this point... TLDR: Fine for all intents and purposes, but mediocre, here is nothing good in any sense of the word, its average at best. This AVN feels like something 10 years too late. Its been done countless times before and done better on most fronts. Its not horrible, its just not profound or good in any way that stands out. The worst is its plot and illogical scenes/dialogue.

v1.1 Not a bad story. Of course they stopped at a point to be like a cliff hanger. At this point that's the only part of story i want to know about. The dev will have to deepen the connections to the step sisters, and stepmom in the next coming updates. The animations are good, and the renders are nice. But would have liked more story, feels like a demo/teaser. Also it's recommended to keep building the hate toward the father, i'm not sure if your ex gf is gonna be enough, you will have to keep pushing that ball to build more momentum. Of course everyone knows the main concept and how things will go down, unless there are some surprises thrown in there. Keep up the good work dev. I hope he doesn't abandon this one.

Not bad for a first version. Plot: Although the part about the ex-soldier is somewhat common, it remains interesting with the answer to both why he left and why he returned. Graphics: acceptable, the girls look sexy and the characters don't look stuffy. Animations: perhaps it is the weak point, although they are fluid, the truth is that for each scene there is only one animation which changes angle about 4 times, that looks strange and takes away the impact of the scene. Gameplay: visual novel, so there is not much more than clicking on the desired option, at least for now. It's not a bad game, they have a lot of potential if you know how to exploit the story and improve the sex scenes, either with more animations or at least without changing something so much.