Reflejos

There's not much yet to give a proper assessment of the visual novel, but what I've read so far I like and it's left me wanting more. It promises mystery, romance, and plenty of fun. The quality is good, and there are only two things that could be improved. One is the introduction of Margarita's daughters and their exes, which gets a bit exaggerated, although it's forgivable because we get to know them as the story unfolds. The other thing is, I haven't been able to figure out how to have sex with Lorena. I've gotten to the point where she gives me a blowjob, but I can't find any combination to take things further with her. They need to add some hints. My congratulations to the artist, and I hope to see more content soon. Cheers!

Ridiculous names given to the characters. Everyone has similar names to go with the similar faces and bodies. The story is as ridiculous as the previously mentioned things. So one very young man and 10 pieces of ass in one house if he also cucks his father. Too bad you get so little in this feather light demo to actually impress you. Could be good but have not seen enough to warrant a true rating yet. Gave it a mediocre 3 to go along with the mediocre presentation I received. Hope the Dev. steps up to the plate and finally hits one over the wall instead of keeping the infield players busy all day.

VERSION: v0.01 SUMMARY: Ok start I guess, with too many LIs RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Models look fairly decent, good proportions etc. Some audio, lewd, interactive with some music, though music does not need to play the same loop over and over, it should be more dynamic. Writing is structured and reads well enough, considering its translated. Story is fairly uninteresting, but its told at least well enough to have a semi natural flow (so far) CONS: - See my opinions section for details. References to character names defaults to original ones not player set names. The UX can use a change of the "narrative" text colour to something else its too light to easily differentiate between that and the normal, or use Italics for thought and () for narrative as thats more standardised. Or simply use Thoughts: and Narrator: Per point on UI, able to set the font type to something smaller and less obtrusive would be nice... Translate to English is not perfect and grammar can use some work. Per point above about audio, sure there are, nice, but its not that good either. Especially the sex scene sounds like someone pumping a tire with hand pump while there is a running tap nearby and someone swatting flies...yes really... Animations look fine in terms of render quality, but movement is unnatural, awkward, stiff and look like what we got 10 years ago. Inconsistent renders, one imagine shows the MCs shirt open, next closed. There are other scenes that have similar quirks... Too many LIs, it becomes totally unrealistic and stupid after seeing 8 or the idk...10 girls. Story throws a most random event at you mid way that makes FUCKALL sense, making you wonder WTF the dev was on or something relating to that... OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) I imagine English being the international standard language should have the best and most reviewed dialogue of the options available. Here is some work needed with it though like the grammar. The audio while there needs work, the loop makes it unnatural. This is especially true due to the animations also being very bland and unnatural, the entire scene is not sexy...sadly. The general music is fine, its not too intrusive, but it would have been nice if there was more variety for a scene. So each scene type has a type of music that identifies the type of scene, like a romantic, fun, sexy, angry etc. Biggest fail is the deliberate setup of a fuckfest of woman, there are including the mother maybe 7 or more woman? How many kids did this mother shit out with how many husbands? Or did she take them in to start her own orphanage? Where are the husbands, the mother some black widow? WTF This tanks anything credible and remotely realistic, which I have always said make for the best AVNs as they built on some degree of possibility. That drives immersion, not this bullshit. The story is jarring, I am not sure whats really going on, but suffice to say, it seems the mother must be some sort of demon/succubus or something to have so many kids, then you add the magic crap to the mix, you clearly dealing with some paranormal/fantasy in "modern" day environment...didnt expect that off the bat...but whatever, its still to early to tell. TLDR: Generally fine, average in most every sense of the word. The animations and audio especially during lewd scenes are just comical they are so bad. I don't mean the attempt, doing it well requires skill, but we are not comparing to the worst here, we comparing to the best and working backward. This has some ways to go...Characters look decent and renders are not bad there, the rest is fairly bland and basic and suggests things were thrown together fast and not given the attention the 4 star and more AVNs have. The biggest gripe is the 10 woman living in the house, like the mother birthed 8 kids...im sorry while its all possible and the Guineas Book Of Records holds a higher count of kids one woman birthed, this shit is too much and on deliberate to drive Adult factor for the AVN... Alternatively she adopted them but either way its a completely stupid and obvious attempt to create some harem and idyllic situation for the absolute juvenile pervert of an MC.