NTR STRUGGLE

Played through both of the current chapters. It's another phone-game. Events that happen between texting are usually summarized in one sentence. Good phone games do this better, and this also requires adapting the story and the ways the story is told in order to make it immersive. Some games don't directly describe what happens off-screen at all, and then proceeds to reference such events in conversation, leaving the reader (at least me) confused at wtf is going on (and not in a well-told mystery NTR kind of way). What I'm trying to say is, the phone-game format in this game isn't great, but it could also be worse. I should also mention that the UI is not a phone at all, there's just a back-and-forth between two people at a time with the occasional image, and that's it. It has been mentioned that this game steals a lot from another game, which appears to be correct. I won't go too deep into the flaws of that other game here, but so far this game hasn't adopted the (in my opinion) worst plot lines from that game with mutual cheating and zero suspicion, no suspense. To summarize: The story's pacing, style and plot line is at best average, it lacks most if not all the features that can turn "yet another phone game" into the rare, actually good phone game, but at least the story is reasonably coherent, and the grammar is decent, if lacking a bit in punctuation (which I won't hold against it, as it can be argued that the texting is more 'organic' this way). The characters' emotions aren't conveyed too well, which I think is the most important thing in any NTR VN. Improving that could take this to a 3 or even 4-star for me, even if other flaws remain.

Awful UI, terrible writing... very bad plot pacing also very uninspiring and total waste of time. Art - 1/5 Plot - 1/5 UI - 0/5 Avoid at all costs and save your time, game has no vision or love shown in the making. Wish there was negative rating...