Reckoning of Obsession

VERSION: v0.1 SUMMARY: Not too bad, but has some major issues RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐ ⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Visuals are generally good, the world is nicely detailed Models are "attractive" but. see cons and comments Added to models, some proportions are way off see Comments Audio is nice with immersive ambient and interactive sounds and fine music. But needs more subtlety, more attention to detail, especially when you going for this kind of detail. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Character models like MC and Eliie have very washed out, high contrast pale skin colour which needs serious toning down. While they look "good", but the light, colour, contrast is totally off. Model proportions are sometimes really poorly done e.g. Ellie looks like she is wearing a diaper, WTF is with the saddlebags? With her ass being so out of proportion, its not good looking at all. Models are kinda ridiculous, the way they look is too "pretty" unrealistic and clearly fake, no effort went into trying to make the AVN at least semi realistic, which IMO drives immersion. The dialogue is unattractive and reads like shallow “modern crowd speak,” where characters struggle to string together even a simple English sentence. Nice audio, ambient and general interactive sounds, but they don't always fit the scene like the footsteps, crushing leaves sound even while the MC is in the pool. The audio track needs cleaning up. The plot is non-existent, the MC also comes across as the boyfriend of all the woman, yet he is a "kid" and he is all handsy and getting all the woman fawning and doting on him, its beyond obvious and stupidly setup... Sex scenes are poor, the MC is a 2 pump chump and all because the dev couldn't string together more than 3 frames to create a semblance of an animation OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS: NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) The dialogue is unimpressive to me, instead of sounding natural or immersive, it comes across as fragmented, slang‑heavy, and careless. The effect is jarring: rather than building atmosphere or character depth, the conversations feel juvenile and unpolished, undermining the tone the VN is trying to achieve e.g. Amanda talking like a "bro" with words like dude, chill...wtf, an mature, sophisticated woman speaking like that is so unattractive. WTF is this writer doing? Models like Amanda look like barbie dolls, their whole look screams high class prostitute, its just fake, bimbo and goes beyond trying to be attractive. Added to the fact that Amanda, shat out 2 kits the MCs age, she looks maybe 5, tops 10years older than the MC and has not a stretch mark or anything showing of ages apart from how she dresses and her big tits, could be her daughters twin, just too fake. General brightness and over saturation is an concern in this AVN, lighting really needs work... TLDR: Meh, its OK, but has a lot of work ahead to actually, feels like a rush job and has some good aspects, but poorly put together, maybe, someday one could call this AVN "good" but its not now. Read the review and see why.