Staying at Home

Alice looks like a doll, unlike other characters. Her irises are too large. Her skin is looks like a triple full body makeup job. The story might be interesting, too early to tell. Character dialogues seem fine.

VERSION: v0.1 SUMMARY: Not horrible, but nothing remarkable or really interesting either. RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. I am rather happy with the UI, it has all the functions that you can want and has an optional menu for walkthrough and other option. Good work. Being able to set relationships and features like NTR on/off at start is nice feature. Models look fairly decent Animations are present, but they not really good, the body movements leave a bit to be desired, not bad I guess for a novice? Audio is present, but im glad there are at least some even some lewd, even if they not that good. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Models are nice, but 2 look like they came from known AVNs, almost exactly the same faces. Models and world texture/renders are not the best, they often low quality, grainy... Lighting can use some work, many renders are stark and bright. Grammar, spelling and dialogue structure can use revision here and there. Audio is few and far between also not consistent in the AVN, randomly starts playing music, things like that. Bugs like audio loops even after events pass like MC getting BJ. Very short and little content to show for it. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) While relationships can be set, it makes somewhat sense that the MC and Alice are siblings, but the dialogue will need some revision to make it flow and fit better, especially with Alice getting jealous. More attention to detail would be great, like implementing sound all round and not just randomly at the elevator... Weird design like the character Nick has eyeliner/shadow yet there is barely a lick of makeup on Alice...why ? Sounds need revamp, they not great, actually the lewd scene sounds are not good at all and need replacing, apart from the loop issue even after the scene is over. Way too short to give a decent review, here simply is too little content. Hopefully updates will have much more... TLDR: Not bad, but average at best, there is nothing here that stands out as unique or very interesting. There are some questionable choices the dev makes in this AVN. It looks fine and has some decent models and ideas, but its quality is just not that great. Will keep an eye on it, see what else comes from it.