The Innocent

I have a soft spot for avns with sub/dom/naive/pure routes and a smoking-hot FMC. And: The avn made me laugh, it's funny. But a great plus is the FMC curves. Good renders and some cool animations (0.2). I really enjoyed the simple, horny plot with a lot of choices. My best wishes to the dev, keep this fun project going! Really promising.

V 0.2 This girl's "innocence" lasts all of two seconds. Dressing comfortable at home, fine. But when even her mother is wearing a mostly see through bra and panties right out of the gate, this creates some doubt of an almost implied chaste upbringing. Next scene she's calling the outfit she's wearing as mostly professional and not crying for attention, yet it has full cleavage and a skirt so short she couldn't touch her toes without flashing everyone around. The plot feels just as contrived. She has to bring her bag in the bag of the cab with her. Set it on the seat or floor next to her? No. She's gonna spread eagle her legs with said skirt from earlier because...plot. Later when the taxi driver whips his pants down and starts stroking it the submission choice are watch or give him a hand. That's not submission. That's straight up being a whore. Girl hasn't even arrived at her new house yet ffs. Then when you do arrive the plot is almost too silly to take serious. The overuse of double entendre, a father always walking around in his boxers, our girl unable to lock a single door, and blatant porn logic. What innocence? For half a minute I thought I was playing a deep but sexy corruption story. I don't think we're supposed to name other games in reviews but there's one that has to do with a village and transformation that is quite good. Oh well. This is more of a bimbo simulator. The visuals are decent. Although the animation of herself looking in the taxi mirror, which I assume was AI built, was again not the actions of an innocent girl. Music is...meh. If I wasn't irritated for feeling misled, I'd probably give it 3 stars for being very mid. Good visuals being offset by rushed, and sometimes absurd, plot events.

VERSION: 0.2 - RE-REVIEW VERSION: 0.3 SUMMARY: Typical corruption AVN, with nothing unique, an "innocent" girl leaves home, gets pulled into the "real" world of sex and corruption. END RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. The MC look stands out, she is attractive has that the perfect girl look about her. The single animation that is here is not bad, but not enough to give a good assessment. The music and audio in general are not bad. Writing is fairly decent and reads well enough, but can use some revision. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Basic UI settings missing like opacity and font settings. These are basics yet missing. STILL MISSING Per above point, there is no good or clear indication what is "narrative" and what is the MC thought Very short and ends abruptly OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) Some basic issues like the dialogue box having no opacity setting is a major issue for me. This is still missing, how hard can it be to introduce basic font and dialogue box settings? The writing can do with some revision and grammar is sorely in need of it. Very basic story so far that is as old as the hills, we can all guess whats coming next...still it could be entertaining and depends on how far the dev pushes it. I personally would love something that pushes most boundaries for a change. AVN is still very short and mostly just teasing and inconsistent behaviour from the MC. This AVN kinda looks like The East Block, but this is not done as well, that AVN feels more sexy where this just doesn't instill that same feeling, even though the MC looks kinda like that LI and the style is similar. TLDR: Not a bad start to something we have seen countless times before, the MC looks attractive and is not a complete bimbo. That said, there is SO little here that a decent review is almost impossible. I would wait a few updates to get into this. I will re-review at a later point. This is still short and not worth the effort, at the rate its going, I would say visit and try it at version 1.0, here is simply not enough content, its also not really "sexy" and the AVN doesn't draw me into it at all.

I really enjoyed the game — the start is solid. What’s important is that once it gets a little more engaging, it doesn’t fall into the same boring traps so many games do (like overdoing the sex stuff), and instead keeps the mystery, passion, and excitement alive, holding your attention the whole way through.

v.1. Really i count this as a demo. The story isn't anything new, and your typical corruption game. The renders looked pretty good. If you do corruption from the start then you will have some animations. If you choose not too then it's slim pickings right now. It's really to early to rate the game properly but i'm willing to give the benefit of a doubt. There are a few errors with the grammer and spelling. It's nice that the game shows you what each choice does so you know which route you are going.

Version 0.1 reviewed Typical corruption story about a naive young woman who leaves home to apply for a job at a large firm far from home. Her brief five-minute interview lands her the job when her future employer fantasizes about having sex with her. Pros: 1 - Good-looking character models. 2- Very nice renders and set design. 3- Nice sex animations. 4- Point-based character system that will determine what path the MC takes. Cons: 1- Poor dialogue with numerous grammatical errors, such as character names in lower case. 2- Character names linked to the wrong dialogue in the airport scene. Highlighting the fact that the game was not proofread very well. Boner rating -Erect. A slick-looking game hampered by mediocre writing. If the dev is serious about taking this to the next level, I suggest he/ she get help with the writing, especially the grammar. If the dialogue was up to par, I would have given this four stars.