The Stowaway

Version Reviewed: v1.0(!!) Overiew: Welcome aboard H.M.S. Whips and Chains. Story: Some time in the future humans have completely wrecked the Earth and in a last ditch effort to save humanity they build an ark to take only the best and brightest to a new planet. You are a low level welder who will never qualify for a ticket but that doesn't stop you from sneaking onboard and taking one of the Cyro pods for yourself. Unfortunately, the Cyro pod dumps you out early and you're immediately captured by the crew of big titty hotties. The captain seems strangely copacetic with your discovery as there is some vague problem and maybe you'll be important in fixing it. Gameplay: It's a VN, there are a couple of choices that may affect stats and can get you a screen, but it's too short for any of that to matter yet. In fact the entire game can be summarized as: 1. You wake up and are taken to the captain. 2. You watch while the captain gives a public nude spanking to one of the crew. 3. The captain tells you basically nothing concrete and sends you off to the nurse. 4. The horny nurse hits on you constantly. 5. You get send to the head engineer who explains the corporal punishment based discipline on the ship. She does not bother putting pants on until later into the conversation. 6. You get a choice, two of which might affect some hidden varirable, but only visiting the nurse gets you any more content. End of game. The game is a bit sloppy in this version. For example, the game includes the .blend files in the game data, which means this game that should be 200MB is 4.3GB. Content wise it seems like it might be a pretty fappable game in the future, but this is version 0.001, not 1.0. I will revisit this review if it gets better in the next few versions, but in its current state I cannot recommend the huge download for 10 minutes of content.

I see a lot of potential with your story! Cool setting, interesting slew of characters (the ones we've seen so far anyway) and writing that makes it clear that each of these characters are distinct from one another. Hard to say from just the demo but if your target audience consists primarily of people that are into femdom in VNs, that may be a smaller demographic than other games. That being said, fans of the genre will absolutely eat up your game! If I was to give any piece of critical feedback it would be that in some scenes the character that we're interacting with doesn't seem to lock eyes with us? If that's what you're going for then that's great! Characters avoiding gaze is powerful when done with intention. All the same, very visually appealing VN and keen to see more! Will be watching this thread for updates. Keep up the good work

Super short should be labeled Demo not Day 1 feels like femdom will be forced, not optional feels like very little here to actually intrigue anyone also worry dev made the same avn before abandoning it and now reworking it I can't give more than 1 star only see this climbing to two stars at best, I wouldn't waste my time