The Witch

There is a surprising amount of content, but its split between a couple near unrelated branches from early in the story, rather than resulting from compound choices. They may as well be entirely separate games. The renders are good, but the Renpy programming is bad (timed scenes that run too quick to see, when it should advance on click, a bunch of things that interrupt the skip function, words wrapping off the screen multiple times, and for no good reason at all, rollback is disabled completely so you miss a line of dialog and its just gone ect) and the "English" is even worse, with colloquialisms that are reversed and other blunders that actually make it hard to figure out what a character is meaning some of the time. Its not just translation issues though, the actual writing is kinda questionable, without spolers somebody is getting RAILED by a literal god, and their thoughts are how its so much bigger than their sons penis? If there had been previous incest, sure, but there hadn't, so WTF are you thinking. This sort of thing happens a bunch, where its related to themes or main character when it has nothing to do with them. One of the paths has a decent motivator for its start of the protagonists change.. the other straight up doesn't bother, and after a long exposition dump puts "oh and your gonna take these totally safe meds that magically make you a girls tee hee" on the end of a otherwise normal life situation with no moitivation. Normally I'd ignore that "porn plot" is fine if thats what your game is.. but not only do we have half an hour of exposition before this point without anything lewder than what brave girls are wearing in public, but there is exactly zero sex scenes with the protagonist at all on that route, and only jacking off in the bathroom once on the other. That said, it looks decent, the story hits its neiche, the characters are hot, so a pass with a native language speaking editor to nail the dialog, and a little help on the code and it could easily go from 3 to 4 or 5 stars.

The father of the MC loaned 800k from the Mafia without having any securities or anything of value, wow they must be retarded... no no no, they are controling the goverment, police etc, they are very smart... and now the son (MC) has to pay 870k back in 10 months, why ? Well, otherwise the plot won´t happen. The MC has no clothes to leave the house so he has to wear his mothers who disappered over three years ago, why they are still there and why doesn´t he have something to wear ? Because otherwise the feminisation wouldn´t start... Only two examples of the terrible writing Then there are the "choices", way too often there is only one and you are getting stats. The path is layed out without your input Rollback is disabled, which is fantastic with the technical problems of renders only popping up for a second. If you want to know what they are about you have to save every two minutes and reload when it happens and it happens a lot It took nearly three years for the first update... so don´t expect this one will be ever completed The story is stupid, there are only short mediocre animations, but the renders are ok and some of the women are beautiful Version 0.2 - 2/5 stars

This is promising So far the story is great so are character designs, only a little rough around the edges. Could use more frequent updates though. There hasn't been many tg (3d) games in recent time would recommend checking this out.

The renders are "okay," not too bad, not so great. The dev has a good eye for camera angles and pacing. However... Why do devs insist on using female models for male characters? It's not like we're not going to figure out what they're trying to do with a bit of hand-waving. And to top it all off, it's not even a unique model. It's the stock Genesis 9 model from Daz without any modifications. Daz gives you the option to make almost unlimited changes to a model's appearance. So, make morphs that actually look male. Instead of the hand-waving. The dev needs to learn about depth of field and lighting techniques to avoid everything looking flat and lifeless. One of the things I hate the most about some visual novels is when you're forced to click a hundred times on a single button to progress a story. And then, you're given "points" for the decisions that you didn't even get to make. It's just f*ching busy-work that is the opposite of interaction, and laziness on the dev's part, trying to give the appearance of "choice." And the "story?" The dialogue is juvenile and unbelievable. The premise that is supposed to draw you into the story has the exact opposite effect. Make up your mind--is the MC an androgynous boy who has no problem putting on panties and a dress after a three-sentence conversation? Or is he a man's man who just happens to look like a girl with noticeable breasts? The sole "sex" scene is a single three-frame jerkoff animation, repeated over and over again. And don't get me started on turning off the ability to rollback. For some crucial, individual decisions I could sort of understand it. But for the entire "game?" I was surprised to discover that I'd played this title before, although it's listed as "new" here. (I had a save file from a previous session.) And it ended the same way--a crashing bug that doesn't allow you to continue. Jeez.