White Space

Based on 0.1 version. Sadly, the writing in this game is a good example of why 'telling' instead of 'showing' doesn't work. Some of the sentences also don't make sense or the phrasing seems off. I played it for a bit and I don't really understand what kind of power 'white space' is. I suspect the writer also doesn't know. Maybe it's just is whatever it needs to be? Even though the game doesn't have any significant choices (or even much content), it does begin to spit out errors. The rendering technology used seems dated. That could be overcome with great direction, but sadly that is not the case. I like the potential of the story, but it is not yet realized.