Boon

The dialogue constantly feels like a third person reading their lines than it is them saying what's on their minds, which I doubt would involve referencing yourself as femboy and "my boypussy". I, personally, also quite dislike the Frozen girl look, especially on the male who looks beyond small to the point of concern. I love me some futadom but these are some gripes that stop me from going beyond this episode.

Love how the characters look — they’re sexy and fun. I’m really enjoying the love and domination aspect. The female domination and femboy elements are really perfect. Great lines. I’m really enjoying it and hoping there will be more updates soon. Perfect

Version: [v.0.3] TLDR: Small, but perverted, in a good way Pros: Renders are good Good amount of renders, not one pic for 10k words of text Writing is decent Relationships customization via nicknames Straight to business, no long introductions, no useless dialogues, no slice of life sandbox gameplay where you just waste your time between scenes. Cons: Tiny. The game is very concentrated with unique renders, but is really small overall Rudimental animations, made of two crossfading frames. Man, for a kinetic novel it's a real bummer. Should it be video scenes - it'd be a real gem. No sound. Subjective (personal) cons: Femboy. Not my type. I couldn't play it unless I made myself a text replacer to pretend that it was meant to be two futa characters. That fixed it 100% Kinetic novel (no choices at all). I just don't like them. This is a really small, but concentrated and perverted story about two really perverted characters. I'd say this story fulfills my urge for something as far from vanilla as possible. I think it mostly inspired by Agent Red Girl's "All my roommate's love" series, inheriting the style and theme. And this is not a bad thing. My rating: 7/10

Really Love the art and the Use of Condoms wish boy had option to wear one too. Both designs are really good. only con wish had sound and maybe music. Great 1st release keep it up looking already for more in future.

Looks very promising! Decent enough animations and solid renders. The premise of the story is simple enough, it's not at risk of winning the Nobel prize. But it's a quick and easy story I appreciate.