Crossed Lines

version update7rework- The story has a good pace, and tried to reflect college life, responsibilities, etc. The writing is good at building depth to the characters relations, but sometimes not the depth of the character themselves. It's good that it's not super heavy on the narrative, and everything is kept light. The ai art is good but inconsistent at times. If you are looking for a lewdfest, move on,it's not here. There are no animations at this time. And for the kinks it's all vanilla. It's setting up for ntr/nts i but no real content i seen on that with my first play through. But the setup is there for tyron and emily. But not sure i would call that ntr since she's just a friend. Now if you let him steal jasmine then yes, but there's no content i saw on that on my one play through and looking at assets. The Premium onlyfaves i'm not sure if it's foreshadowing where the game is going, or just a bonus render area. But there are some tensions building for sure. Since the story is light each scene seems a tad short, for example camping could have been a tad longer. Shower scene could have been a tad longer. Interesting about onlyfaves premium. I'm hoping one of the paths is harem, with the rest being ntr, and nts. I always play harem/love path first, then do ntr/nts 2nd which would add replayability to the game. I'm hoping it's not going to turn in the usual cuck story, so i have dom up very high. Also there's no limits on the stats, so i wonder if you go above a certain number if it's worthless.....or good for when you get negative things to bring it down you got bank. All and all it was a pleasant game to play, so i'm looking forward to the next few updates to see if it goes in a good direction, or if it disappoints.

The art is good. The cuck fest both paths are racing towards is a joke. Of course the other guy is black because "every white guy's fantasy is to see his gf railed out by a black dude" or some other dumb shit. I'm not saying its worthless, but read the either too short 5 star reviews or the long ones that explain why this game is not perfect, but they still give 5 stars. I mean.....really?

I played the Update 6 (Rework) and I really liked it. I liked the slow burn. And even though the graphics are AI and there is quite a lot of the same backgrounds, however I didn't find it disturbing. If you like NTR it's pretty awesome, really.

Crossed Lines [Update 6 rework] Rating: 2* I find his VN pretty poor across the map. Although the games artstyle is acceptable it is quite inconsistent and looks like most of the generic AI slop on this site with it's bland paintbrush artstyle. I do appreciate that it offers two paths and doesn't force you in to the one shitty porn trope path. That being said, the story, writing, characters and sex scenes are really boring and make this VN unrewarding and lose interest in it pretty quickly.

a collection of cliches. abysmal writing. you're the cuck, and the black guy tyson is supposed to steal emily (your bff ) from you , while you also have a girlfriend (jasmine). zero spicy scenes so far.

Review for Update 6 Overall, I think it's a pretty good start. The Characters look good, the story and interactions are also quite fun. Two things that could need some improvement (why 4 stars instead of 5): -Some scenes felt really short (e.g. camping should have been a bit longer with more content) and some days felt very repetitive and did not bring the story forward in a meaningful way -More artwork variety (like the camping scene) and extended scenes

Rather lame, and just kind of aweful. AI slop for art, and a meandering, near as I can tell, story of a guy with a girlfriend having a black man (because the thug and sexual predator has to be black) being an asshole and 'stealing' Emily away who is a...just a friend. Of course, near as I can tell you have to 'dominate' or not, all I know is that your character's 'dominance' gets drained seeming arbitrarily? I dunno, I gave up with the shitty relay mini-game. I'd give this one a big miss, and ignore the 5 star ratings that are just trying to inflate a shitty game to mediocre.

1. Art The game art is good, nothing outstanding, but pretty enough to add to the game. The girls are gorgeous and you can easily tell characters apart by their physical appearance and clothing style. 2. Story The game lacks a main thread of story to connect events and push characters into action, this may be seen as a fault from the author, but it's too soon to judge, after all, this could be a character driven story, focused in characters development and interactions. 3. MC The protagonist is not a loser and have his share of impact into other people's lives, and the game choices made by him, or better, you, seem to have future branches planned, so it's not just a visual novel, but a game being planed to have (at least) three main routes. 4. Short scenes That was actually a small issue I found out playing, some scenes are way too short and could be more explored by the author, but that's something personal, some players may see longer scenes as fillers that slow down the story unnecessary. 5. Slow burn This game has a slower pace, not rushing itself towards sex scenes (besides a wank and a shower show) there's not yet any sex scene in game. Don't let that disappoint you, it's an early release of a slow burn game, aiming to explore NTR and NTS themes, as well as an alpha route that alludes to harem, the author chooses to take his time introducing characters and building their relations through your choices. For those eager to just , I would recommend revisit this game in the future. For now there's little to see besides the structure I described above. 6. Considerations The game has potential and I choose to help funding it, I am curious to see what the future of this project gonna be, I see potential in the chosen kinks and enough window to add new kinks in the future. The game is 5/5 because I am taking in consideration that it's in the early stages, so if you're reading this, consider what I wrote on section 5 before playing it. I will try to update my rating after the oncoming releases.

So far v0.15 isn't at all exciting. There really isn't any spicy scenes (except the shower), and there aren't really any great build ups. The NTR stuff is also very tame, and only involves Emily. I would compliment the art, but even for AI art is very basic, and mostly just still images of the characters on generic looking backgrounds. I wish, like other AI games on here, that there was at least tons of images strewn throughout. The dialog is also really bad. I am beginning to think that the art isn't the only thing AI produced.

Just finished playing 0.2 patreon version and wow! Things really went up a notch. I did not expect to like Jasmine so much, both the NTR and NTS routes are great. This game took a while between updates but absolutely did not disappoint! personally, the writing especially is really good in comparison to other "slop ai" games. Very excited to see where this leads definitely worth supporting if this keeps up. Especially if we get more of Jasmine being dominant and manipulative . Hopefully we'll see the next update come sooner than 2-3 months this time AI CG's are good, maybe a little rough but that's something I assume will get better with time. Also needs a gallery function

There isn't a huge amount of content yet, but if the game receives regular updates (fingers crossed!) it's going to be pretty special. The AI art is definitely above average and I'm curious about the characters and their relationships. There are also a good amount of choices that actually appear meaningful, with different decisions affecting the MC's confidence levels. (This should make it pretty easy to avoid or embrace NTR content, depending on your preferences.) All in all, a very promising start.

good start. hoping the dev continues to add content and keeps it updated. really fun and headed in a good direction hoping for quick updates and more content. the art is really hot and story has a fun start

Game has strong potential, the only thing is that it's quite short so far... But that's understandable for a first version! I think the art is done with AI, but it's not horrible. All in all... 4/5