Gwen 18

Boring demo. The game look promising, but the demo is extremely boring. They should extend the demo and add at least one sexual content, right now all we have is the image of Gwen in underwear. Gwen also look a lot different in the game than she look when we see her in underwear. she look like 12 in the game and 18 in the underwear. they should make her breast a bit larger to make her look older a bit. or do something else to make her look actually 18.

Reviewing the Demo This demo is very short, like 20 minutes, with no sex scenes as of yet. But as I like the franchise, I decided to take a look at it and review it. I noticed a slew of grammar mistakes. B 'Why does it let you use that book?' G 'Because it doesn't brainwash me' I caught several other mistakes centered around tenses, 'it' instead of 'he', or 'they' instead of 'you'. As well as other mistakes. B 'You only have classmates who take advantage of you because you are smart and their homework' Quite obviously, there is a 'do' missing here. One line was in Spanish, clearly slipping past the translator entirely. One part of the game made me laugh. 'The tomorrow I will be 18!' That entire exchange had me laughing. *Looks at model* *Looks as how the characters interact* "Suuuuure..18....the magical number." And the main character even goes, "You don't look 17..." "Oh, I performed a spell so I am an adult now." Had me snorting. *Ahhhhh* "I see...I know the one..'Pedophiles salvation' is the name of the spell right? Leaves a girl looking like she is 10..while she is an adult..Jeffry loved that one." The actual plot is that its supposed to work the next day and make her an adult overnight. What it does is it enlarges her model a bit, and makes it taller. Being honest, I expected to see something ridiculously overdone..I am not disappointed, clearly we aren't going that direction and that is okay. The demo ends pretty much directly afterwards. Meaning there is pretty much nothing to really review, I would like to see how Gwen's corruption will be handled, are we going to progress? Build up and hit milestones? I have no idea. This demo here, its the author is asking a question, "Do you like an idea of a Ben 10 game with this premise? Of so, support me." Which..fair enough. The art so far looks good, the backgrounds are nice, as are the characters but..some models shimmer, probably to make them seem more lifelike. It doesn't really hit the mark, making it seem kinda smudged. I appreciate the attempt, but with the characters turning and moving from line to line, I would personally remove the effect when the player is not advancing dialogue. Now onward to whether I will be looking forward to this game. One thing that stood out to me, is that the way this game is starting, it feels like the main character is a rapist..Gwen does her 'Island Special' spell, but while it makes her model older, it doesn't change how childish she seems..how she acts and speaks. Both Ben and Gwen are very childish. It really made me feel like they are both 10. In most games you do not have that feeling, the characters are supposedly young, but they do not behave as such, these do. And that can go two ways.. One..it just flips, Gwen goes from childishly speaking about making friends, not being weird and putting mayonnaise on Ben while he sleeps, to knowing everything about sex..instantly. Being confident and totally unashamed. Two, the main character, who she summoned to be her friend, slowly starts teaching her what 'being an adult' means. One is incredibly flat, if that were we are going I am not going to return to this. As there are better Ben 10 h comics I could reread instead. If we are going the second route and the fact that they speak the way they do is intentional, then, this game has some serious rapy vibes, which will be hard to handle. We will need to move slowly and even then I have my doubts. As for rating this very much a demo...I like the art, I like the franchise, I like the characters, if their childishness is intentional and we will be working with that..we can be onto something here. The author has one another game on the site..which is completed.. and with average rating. Making me hopeful. I give it 4/5 for the promise and will revise the review and rating after the next update. Which will give us a better idea of what type of game we have here.

It’s still in beta, but this game already shows a lot of potential compared to many games that are fully released. The writing, and overall direction feel promising, and you can tell the developer put real effort into it. If the dev keeps improving it and polishing the mechanics and content, it could easily become one of the better games in its category. I really hope it doesn’t get cancelled because projects with this much potential deserve the chance to grow and reach their full release