Incest

Pros, Cons, Areas to Improve ​ Pros ( The Good Stuff ) Overall story / direction is interesting. The models are some of my favorites. The game is being supplied by the dev for free. Cons ( The Bad Stuff ) The Updates come about every 2-3 months and are never more then a dozen or so images and at MAX 20 new lines of text. Game has been updating for over 3 years (added to f95 Nov 25 2022) and STILL hasn't had the mom + son scene happen. The pacing in the game is too slow and drawn out which is made worse by the update schedule and size. Update that are given sometimes end in the middle of scenes which is something I've never seen before. If you are going to start a scene in an update you should at least finish it. Stopping mid-way is blue-balling. Areas to Improve (Things to Improve The Game) The dev should notify people via the first post, even if its under the notes or something that updates only happen roughly every 2-3 months and then try to stick to that. At least then you're upfront about your posting. if your going to post an update that has an Intimate scene start finish that scene in the same update even if you just bring it to the very end. NEVER split a scene between two updates. If dev is having issues with updating due to "perfectionism" or something like that then you should either A have someone to help you with part of the game your caught on OR do the next bullet point If the dev struggles with perfectionism a easy work around is have two game versions. Version A have be your "Final" version that has text dev likes / he has decided to use and keep along with high end renders + moving scenes. Version B have be your "test" version. In the test version you have the same story up to version A but this version continues after version A and the text here is story and plot points the dev is unsure about, and the renders are only still images and less refined. Use B as your idea board. post changes to it, present it to the community as your more often updated but rougher version. Version A may be on version 6.3 for example but version B extends further up to version 6.3.07 or how ever far you want. Have your subs vote on changes to the story. Adjust the story how they voted for or how you thought of the change, post that update and get feed back. Rinse and repeat roughly weekly till you find something you like and the subs would like etc. You don't even have to change the renders every time you could just focus on the dialogue. Once you've decided on what you want for sure add that to the A version and render higher end images and videos. and advance version B. That allows for your subscribers to be more involved, you to technically update more often, lets you bounce ideas off people, and lets you not have to commit until your ready. The Wordy Review ​ Let me start out by saying, first, I try to give developers the benefit of the doubt, especially when they're posting games to sites like this where they know people are going to be playing for free and only a fraction of us that play the game are going to so subscribe to get early upsets etc. So I understand that the developer may not have as big of a interest in posting updates regularly since they don't get that big of a return. That, along with the honestly well done 3D models and the overall story, is why I gave this two stars instead of just one. That being said the fact this game how been out for Over 3 years (dropping on November 25 2022), has the name "Incest" and still has yet to have the MC engage in incest with his mother (an act that has been being teased since mid 2023) is honestly insane to me. I understand wanting to make sure a project is "perfect" and taking time but the issue here is that normally if you plan to do updates fora game you either go the route of small updates that happen often or large updates that are more spread out. This developer constantly (with many of their games not just this one) will do updates months apart and the only content of the update will be Literally, half a scene. I mean that. The update will literally end in the middle of a scene. I've never seen that before. It's a real shame because the Overall, our dream plot of the game, the rendering in the game and scenes, even the writing, are all at the very least good, if not very good. Sadly, the minuscule update size combined with the quarterly, if you're lucky, update schedule comes together to form a game that feels unplayable. There's honestly no good excuse as to why, if you're only going to be posting updates monthly, you can't, at the very least, have each update have a full new scene. To give an example, the last update literally had 12 images. That's it, 12. It took a little over 2 months to get it. that averages out to ALMOST 1 image a week.

From the previews and the ratings (3 + 1/2 out of 5, what are you smoking) one might think this VN is a decent quality romp, but it really is far from that. The only thing this and any other game by this dev has going for it is the quality of the renders, thats it. The crux of he issue is the frequency and lengh of updates. Maybe you didn't catch it, but this thread was created on November 25th 2022, so almost 3 and a half years ago. Yet the game has in total about maybe 10 minutes of game time, if you're a slow reader. This is because there are several months between each update and each and every one is "blink and you miss it". Unironically the difference between version 0.5 and 0.6 are like 5 lines of dialoge and 3 renders. Saying this is going at a snails pace is an insult to snails everywhere. I suppose there is some story but ignoring the high degree porn logic (which isn't even neccessarily a bad thing in my opinion) there is just not enough there to actually evaluate it. It throws random ideas together; MC randomly finds a cursed doll posessed by Baba Yaga or something in his aunts houses attic, you know, as one does (it will never be explained why it's there), the mother lets her son grope him because she suspects she might have breast cancer??? and then she and the aunt start an OnlyFans, the doll spirit posesses the daughter character because...? Maybe this all would come together to something eventually but it's painfully obvious that we will be fast approaching the heat death of the universe before this game is anywhere close to getting finished. And by the way, even if the render quality is there, the dev reuses the same models for every single one of his games, so even the best aspect of the game is half-baked. This review probably has more words in it than this VN ever will. Don't support this insane laziness.

This VN feels like a very mixed experience so far. On one hand, the game has an unusual premise and tries to mix horror elements with an adult story, which at least makes it stand out a bit from the typical formula. The characters have some personality and the story moves quickly without long introductions or unnecessary filler. However, the execution still feels rough. The content is quite short at the moment and there are very few actual scenes, so the current build ends before the story really has time to develop. Some presentation choices also break immersion, and the overall pacing can feel uneven. Visually it’s decent, but not particularly impressive compared to other games in the genre. The models and renders do the job, though they lack the polish or uniqueness that would make them memorable. Overall, the project has some interesting ideas but still feels early and underdeveloped. If future updates expand the content and refine the presentation, it could become much more engaging.

This game is honestly a waste of time. While the concept seems promising, you are not even allowed to watch sex scenes unless you pay. Progress feels artificial, and the heavy paywall completely breaks immersion and makes the game feel more like a cash grab than actual entertainment.

Scenes are locked behind a paywall. Updates are not frequent enough for me to want to support this on Subscribestar or whatever it is. I can just check something else out of I want to see some milf action.

PAYWALL?!?!?! Where to start? The dev starting fights with members on the site. The story is badly written (even AI could write better). All of the renders are outdated. And the NSFW scenes are all blocked for anyone willing to pay $50 a month!

Dev changed story to All scenes are cut right at the sex scene. You must pay to see anything in this poor story to begin with. And you must pay for a really bad story. Poorly written and poor graphics. Nice update change to help me delete it right away off of my system. Good thinking, saves me time.

Greedy dev, monthly recurring paywall, no pay/no sex, and he did after wasting people's time by introducing that just now. Once you get to any part in the game where there would be sex, he plasters a big text over the screen telling you you need to pay him. Chump move. Dev expects to live off this one game and for people to end up paying more than they would pay for a triple a game on steam. Could have been quite good

V: Ch.2 v0.6.1 This game had potential before the dev got greedy. There's no sex scenes in the game. It had potential and what a few game devs don't understand is that as long as you're making content that people enjoy the money will come. Paywalling all the sexual content is just alienating your viewer base and that's the fastest way to kill your own game. such a travesty I just hope the dev realizes his mistake before it's too late.

The game had potential but it was all taken out at the knees by the developer adding in censoring and locking content behind paywalls. Scenes that had once worked fine are now gone. I can understand if the developer is scared that their content is getting removed from steam and patreon, but both platforms have some fairly straight forward policies on no incest content; other developers just get around this by either relabeling characters or allowing the player to decide names. Its still possible for the game to come back and be worth a click again, but as it stands at the moment save yourself a download and give this one a pass.

Whenever you get to a point where you expect there to be a sex scene you are welcomed by a render basically saying sorry you didn't pay for this, no sex scene for you. Also it says censored; No. This is a lie, as the version uploaded here is named "vegetarian" when you download it and it includes no sex.

Since the dev asked for feedback I'll be more specific: - I understand that getting good sound effects is not easy, but I believe the same effect could be achieve without the screems sound effect that everyone has heard before, it gets to the point is more funny than fitting, the rest is fine, but I feel theres more interesting ways to use other sound effects. -The pacing and writing need work, both in the erotic and the scary aspects, it's funny how for genres that many people may think different actually share many key points, for example, the build up is lacking so it feels kind of rushed when we reach the scary or steamy momments. The scary parts are fine since they're supposed to be snapy but for the sex theres little tension, no sense of a clear climax and no aftermath so to speak. Theres good parts like the last conversation between the mother and the aunt but the inner monologue of the MC can be worked on. -This has the VN tag, and with such good looking moddels for the women here it's a shame most of the shots are medium full shots. The close ups to the genitals are fitting for the feeling it's trying to convey but this could be even better with more close ups, for example, the parts where you read about the feelings and background of the aunt and the mother since it's just a still shot with no change in the face expression it lacks any emotional impact, theres no need for a full fleshed flashback but more renders with different faces could spice things up. The same can be applied to the MC, pretty bold to use inmerse at the menu but theres just a few texts about him, and with no signs of how is he as a character, since this is a kinetic novel it would be appropriate to show this, beacuse without this elements this may as well be a rpg type of game with sprites for all the characters and a submenu with their information and stats. - This one is more of a nitpick but for me it breaks the inmmersion when I see the doll from RE, any other scary or old doll would have done the trick. Been my first interaction with this dev I like the style but theres room for improvement.

I want to say that I SEE the vision. I see the potential here, but I feel like this game suffers from a severe lack of direction. First off, I wanna say the visuals are great. Great models for the women, high fidelity, the sexual scenes look good. I also appreciated the fact this is one of the few AVNs with genuinely good body hair. Unfortunately, it seems like there's been a decision to start removing all body hair as the story continues, which I'm pretty disappointed about. Honestly, if there was a choice to say if they should have body hair or not, I feel like that'd at least be better, although I understand that'd include more work having to include different slides for bush/shaved. --- The story itself has a strong foundation in terms of a haunted doll that grants wishes, however the potential scope seems to leave me a bit confused? One of the wishes (of three) in the game is, and I quote, "I wish every woman wants to have sex with me". Now that covers any sort of porn logic in the future, but we've only actually seen 3 women shown in the two chapters: the mom, the aunt, and the sister. We haven't even heard any other women related to the MC, or anyone else. No friends or acquaintances or anything else that would show us where the AVN is eventually going to go. That last sentiment kinda encompasses the whole AVN really: there's no sense of where it's actually going. In the majority of AVNs (and games/novels in general) you understand the goal of the protagonist. The issue is that since the first chapter, the MC has literally had every wish fulfilled. Baba Yaga is the only one driving the story, which means the MC is literally entirely reactive. He makes no real choices on his own, he has no personal motivations or goals. This also shows by the fact that this is essentially an entirely kinetic novel. There were a couple 'choices' at the start of the AVN, but they were basically entirely meaningless and seemingly served no purpose. It seems like 17MOONKEYS knew that was the case, because the entire second chapter doesn't have a single choice. Kinetic novels are fine, but you need a genuinely engaging story to keep the player wanting more, and I simply don't think this is the case atm. I believe it could be good with some rewriting, but I feel like it would simply be easier to give the players some sense of choice to make the players more forgiving. As previously mentioned, the protagonist really has no motivations to speak of. At least in Chapter 1 he goes "I want to fuck my aunt", but in the second he seems to just competely lose this motivation for the sake of drawing it out. I don't know if it's meant to be that it's as a result of his wish being fulfilled, but he literally states in Chapter 1 BEFORE the wish that he's been into his aunt for years. I mean you're telling me he just never looked up the legality beforehand, despite him having the hots for her? Suddenly, after ALREADY having had sex, NOW he's too upset to actually do anything? He's already done it, there's no going back afterwards. This isn't like accidentally not paying your taxes and you get an extension. Also some dialogue is just...completely unnecessary? Like what did the discussion about voting add? It just comes out of nowhere, and can also be skipped. --- Ultimately, I'm giving it a 7/10 because i see the genuine potential it has to actually be something good. These changes aren't actually THAT big, all it requires is some adjusting.

The scenes are far too bright. Almost halving the brightness could help a lot for a horror perspective, especially with how much one light brightens up a room. Also avoiding scenes with sunny displays where possible. Also I get the magic stuff but the women in this cave into the acts of incest far too fast. Magic or not some mental resistance and daily progression is very much needed. Horror isn't something instant or fast paced, psychological horror is a good slow burn. The characters look good though, and I assume when actual scenes happen there will be good animation at the very least. On another note I would like the women bush to be optional, it's not always there but I'd rather not see it. Same with futa, these things should always be an option toggle.

Maybe you'll get the full game in 20 years. Decent models. Somewhat interesting story that suddenly backtracks. And occasionally changes per update. As in past story gets adjusted. I can't remember if i got the first release in 2022.. i just know that for all the years I've followed this game. Only one sex scene to show for it is.... I should finally say enough is enough.

17MOONKEYS, you absolutely cooked with this one! Story line seems believable and consistent. I really hope that you keep the hairy content at least as an option- I'm a young guy and I absolutely love the rawness of it. - The game seems to have a good and natural flow with some spookiness. - I especially love the female arousal renders, it adds to the sensuality with your focus on the olfactory senses-I love it. - So great so far, I only hope that you make the breasts look more natural and if possible add some optional urination content Fingers crossed for the next update!

Well I played the pervious version of the game,and I rate it better than the most of the games in website.But I think there are some parts that could be better. 1. The MC just doesn't feel enough on himself the consequences of his actions,it was like "Oh! Elder powerful with who gives me nightmares make me bang my family!" And the price is saying the wich I find new body for you soon for the days and going banging everything else. 2. I would like if there will be some development before relationship,how are changing their social norms,how they was feeling before/after internal monologues of characters, and choices depending and developing the story with them. I think if you add more of how they are changing in story and they look on different social norms and relationships then the characters would get additional development. 3. EVEN though for 1-st point with all the price MC should be enjoying and take as much he can, because only in that case he could pass through it with thought that everything worth it(and keep mentality in some sort of state). 4. Lack of choices and impact.I want enjoy the story,but I would like have some choices that change the story and develop it .I like having some influence and taking prices for actions. 5.I want more fetishes that would appear in story next, something like exhibitionism or something else that would show crashing of social norms,and maybe something heavier. The pluses: 1. Good atmosphere and story.I'm not disappointed-Moonkeys if you're reading this then know I like it. Also the horrors part is based on psychology and that is best choice for 2d renpy story based game 2. As always-Good models, interesting scenes. 3. Great overall idea.

So far so good. Hopefully the artist gets the funding needed to keep it going. Excellent camera work, btw. Obviously someone who enjoys good cinematography. Models are top tier. Story is fun and succinct. No annoying sandboxing. Clear paths.

This is somehow an amazingly interesting story. A story that starts with a nephew and his aunt in a familial house turns into a slight horror story about a haunted doll to hot incest to tension between the nephew and his mother. I honestly find the premise of the aunt getting slightly lied to for the nephew to bed her and it turns into the mother wanting the same thing on her own but with the tension since the son is so hesitant as is she. Then the aunt is full bore for it and is trying to get her sister (his mom) to let go herself. While i cant say this is the best vn to do incest, its as i said quite interesting. While i've seen the aunt in other stories, ive never seen the mother but even still they both look incredibly hot and i love the detail of wetness that the mother gets time and time again. The story surrounding the sister also is getting interesting as to how that will pan out. The largest aspect i could do without is the husband/father being there, never been a fan of having the husband being there or possibly finding out or stumbling into it. That type of tension does nothing for me. All in all though, waiting for the updates for this continue to drive me mad because the tension is nice but getting a bit of tension just to get blue balled by the "MORE TO COME" is depressig everytime it happens. Long story short, there still isnt much there beyond when it was called our secret but the story is interesting, tension is pretty decent, and getting to enjoy some shapely, plump milfs is a pretty good time.

Good start, gr8 writing for the genre that feel both dangerous and taboo, even with its limited content. The game is not simply meet and fuck, there is a lot that going on and that is its strength. Characters design are one of the better ones for milf category, Only drawback imo is that the length of the game is too short to meaningfully judge the product as a whole. 4.2