Innocent Fantasies

This game needs a lot of polish in it's current form (S1 Ep1). I know it's early, so I have high hopes to see such improvements. The main thing that needs to be improved is the arbitrary slowness of the transitions. They don't make any sense, don't serve any purpose that I can see, and are quite frustrating. The second thing that needs work is the grammar and spelling in English. It's mostly good, but could use a bit of work. The third thing... it's incredibly depressing, lol. I'm not saying that needs to be cut, but so far, there's nothing upbeat at all, and it's just painful. With such a depressing opening, we really need some nice things to happen in the future, lol.

Innocent Fantasies genuinely surprised me. I went in with no expectations, and the art immediately hooked me. It’s an intimate, emotional story with strong psychological depth. Some people call it “too sad,” but I didn’t feel it was heavy while playing. For a first release, it feels complete and very promising. ⭐ Breakdown Art: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5) Beautiful visuals, natural facial expressions, strong lighting. Only a very minor technical issue in one scene. Story & Depth: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5) The protagonist has real emotional background and psychological weight. Not cliché. Main Character: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5) Vulnerable, coherent, and different from typical F95 characters. Makes you want to protect and understand her. Choices: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5) Choices change full scenes, with both immediate and long-term consequences. Definitely replayable. ⏳ Pacing: ⭐⭐⭐⭐☆ (4/5) Slightly slow transitions at times, but not experience-breaking. Spanish Translation: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5) Very natural and emotionally consistent. ⭐ Final Verdict: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5) More than just an adult VN, it feels like an emotional journey focused on vulnerability and growth. If the rest of the season maintains this quality, this could become something truly special. Thanks to the developer for such a strong start. Looking forward to what comes next.

love this game so much. The art style is fantastic, it is translated into my native language too, which is another great point, and the only penetrative scene has anal sex. I love the choices and I hope we can have an anal-only playthrough as the game has more content

Pretty strange game. I’m giving 4 stars based solely on the quality of the visuals. Bc they really do look great. If you value writing - in any sense - this is probably not the game for you. I assume the dev is not a native English speaker. So I try not to knock too much for that. But the writing is bizarre beyond what could be attributed to just translation issues.

Review Version: Season 1 - Episode 1 A really strong start of a game which is told almost entirely by internal monologue. This gives it an interesting perspective of someone who is not too well altogether. Unfortunately, the grammar and spelling is sometimes a bit off, which can be distracting. But the choices are meaningful, resulting in anything between minor changes in dialogue to whole different scenes. It will be interesting to see if the choices will matter in the long run and lead to different paths or if they are only for showing different aspects of the story. The graphics are great, there are some animations which look really good - the one that leads to her tearing up is especially well made. If I could, I would rate this 4.5 stars, but since 4 is too much of a deduction for the sometimes bad English, I will rate it 5 due to its huge potential.

Great start. Very different, and quite refreshing feel compared to other fem protag games. Not your usual run of the mill corruption oriented female protagonist games. This one draws you in and keeps you invested in her story, by making you care for her.

VERSION: S1 Ep.1 SUMMARY: Interesting perspective, but poor dialogue, writing, UI, that leaves me fairly unsatisfied, and uninterested in diving into this nut job MCs mind... RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Model looks pretty good, decent quality renders (even if she is out of proportion). Animations are also high quality, decent Different perspective and way of playing, good change, spices things up in a way. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. UI/UX can do with an improvement, lack of opacity, text settings is bad. Settings and the main menu toggling buttons does not indicated them on or off, basics but missing... Lack of any audio, that despite the menu showing sound options, either-way,its pretty disappointing to have no sounds. Dialogue is simply bad e.g. the MC goes on about someone staring at her, but she is in a casting studio, people are going to watch her she is in casting studio, people outside the studio all over the world are probably gonna watch her she sees the guy in the casting studio watching her, yet she says she feels like she is being watched...WTF is with this dialogue? Pacing, story driving and scenes are weird, illogical and nonsensical, there are many examples where you read this and would think WTF. English is poor and needs additional review from someone that has English writing skills. Poor choices, e.g. 2 options named "Fatansie 1" and "Fantasie 2" (should be Fantasy) TIP reads: "One of the two choices contains nude fantasies!" I mean wtf is with this stupid choice? For some reason the dev figured rollback to change your choices was a bad thing, so they force you to play through with current choices or reload...this is such a major no no, make this a setting that the player can toggle but never force the player! Gallery unlock? Doesnt seem to work or Album is not Gallery? OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) The narrating of the (lets call her MC) is actually poorly done, she waffles on about stupid things like her being watched, but there is a person in the room watching her, go figure? She speak about "adult pornography", do you get any other? Are you not suppose to be an adult to be starring in porn? Or am I just mistaken? Many other examples of poor dialogue, strange "internalising" from the MC and weird assumptions, conclusions and logic that really makes no sense and I can't say its done cleverly with purpose as much as done poorly because it feels too erratic like this MC has a few screws loose. Choices don't seem to have any stat values or count toward the MCs overall mental health etc. They simply have an alternate scene and eventuality it seems. At least thats my impression, but one can't know as the dev doesn't provide context. TLDR: A weirdly written AVN, the perspective is unique, but the dialogue is bad, the spelling and grammar are poor/terrible. The story plays off largely as some psychological drama of a young woman and her thoughts that are scattered and somewhat disturbing, suggesting she is clearly unhinged, but it makes for a jarring and messy reading experience. Visually its pretty decent though, the perspective is strange and also jarring, sometimes frustratingly so. Not sure how I feel about this one, it will take a few updates to get into it, but it does a few things differently that piques my interest (at least a little). That said, there are fundamental issues with this AVN that I simply can't overlook.