It Started with His Phone

v1.0.4 A kinetic version of this game would be worth four stars, but the gameplay is horrid and extremely repetitive. There are no clues for forwarding the action, and you're not told when you hit a dead end. Just a miserable experience that could've been delightful.

[Review for version 1.0.3] To open, this is a below average project at this time, however as it appears to be a learning project for the dev, so I'd expect to see improvement over time. Note to the dev. Consider refactoring your early efforts once you've learned a bit more. While it is likely to break saves in the future, it will reduce the likelihood of this game collapsing under it's own weight and becoming abandoned. Gameplay: 2/5 The gameplay loop is trivial, but it isn't clear how you're expected to progress. This will result in players just skipping the content repeatedly in order to attempt each option randomly until they get a different result. The UI is barebones, and feel even more basic than renpy offers out of the box, though I'd expect this to change over time. Hopefully the UI will remain clean as they learn this aspect of working on their game. Visuals: 2/5 The images are of varying quality due to being generated on an older pony model, though the use of a character lora has resulted in a mostly consistent face. Some of the images have sloppy artifacts that are easily handled by generating batches and culling the bad ones, and could be prevented by using basic embeddings. Note: Please look into lazypos, lazyneg, and lazyhands. Lazynsfw can be useful too. Using these shouldn't require changing your workflow. During the time it took to write this review, I was able to generate 45 images that would replace the six finger shower image, of these none had bad hands, but many had artifacts that would've caused me to cull them immediately (multiple shower heads, strange iphone placement, etc.). This is on a mid-grade PC from 2021. I don't have the specific character lora though, so the face is a bit different. Writing: 3/5 Pretty average, but it feels worse than it is because of the nature of the gameplay loop, as you end up repeating scenes very frequently.

Its just collection of some pictures and animations. If there is a "gameplay" I didnt found it. All I could do is choosing some choices and watcha quick animation. the rinse and repeat until you see something new.

Beautiful character, but the way the novel is set-up, just not my type of novel. Yes, I guess there would be the need to spend more time and money in a different technology behind. But I'm used to that kind of technology in the meantime, therefore the really beautiful character of the female MC was not enough to get me over the first 30 min watching.

No plot or story. There is a potential and I see where this is going, but so far nothing. 2/10 No characters. MC, Roger, Lucy are people unknown., no background, no personalities 1/10 Rubbish dialogues : "Lets put the panties down"...Who on Earth is talking to herself like that. 0/10 There is NO game play here. You just take one choice so far and that's it. Its worse than VN, In VN at least you get a story. 0/10 Characters do not have emotions. Lucy was double penetrated and she looks the same as when she pees in the toilet or browse phone. 2/10 Lots of bugs. There is a major bug when you "Order her", which prevents from progressing . Typos, dialogs mismatch ...etc. 2/10 The game (thing) is pretty much click fest so we can see the beautiful images, for which I could go to Civitai. Now the good part. Stunning graphics 10/10 !!!! I don't think there is game with so good graphics here. The author does not lack imagination and perversion 10/10 For AI to become a game requires really countless of hours of generating 100 images , just to keep one and maintain consistency. So...constancy here is 99"% The MC got brown eyes and Lucy's shower is a bit off character. Constancy/fidelity - 10/10 I'm giving it 5 stars because of the hard work of the author, his artistic vision and even concept for something that could be a game. Its too early to talk big , but yeah..It doesn't give something bad , just just gives less, which is normal for such early stage. .Just the pictures alone are still 100 times more fapable than the 99% of he rubbish here. Best of hopes !