Perfect Shot

Honestly a little better than i expected from generic 20 minute porn scenario, but it helps that author actually have a decent grasp on how to use language to highlight eroticism of the situation. It's a very short experience with 3 different girls, you do photos, you stick your stick inside, but it's decidedly sensual nature is a pretty welcome change compared to a lot of other works. However while i praise the linguistic presentation and everything looks pretty nice, the mini games are completely atrocious and unnecessary. Sliding the dildo 3% orgasm at a time is just straight up shit, considering how easy it is for the mouse to slip out, and photo ones don't add anything (ghost one specifically can suck it). Next time it can be just normal animations and it will not take away from "immersion" of being a photographer. Also while i appreciate how it is written, sadly it's still just a porn scenario at the end of the day. Writing a little more story around it would give it a better sense of what author tried to convey. But actually better than i expected, i hope to see a more fleshed out and complete story from the author someday.

Good concept but poor execution. Hope it's an early draft. Graphics are goods. Animation too. But the Lewd scenes are tasteless. No significant choices, no climax, no lewd gameplay. I'm sure a V2 could make it a good game.