Razuul

I think the visuals and the overall idea along with the branching paths are all quite good and I think there really is some potential, But what's really killing my enthusiasm for the game is the blatant and obvious AI slop that the writing of this game is. Literally every sentence reads like the finest of AI slop, it's pretty bad. I'd honestly prefer if the dev would just do the writing themselves.

I actually suprisingly enjoyed this demo of the game. This review is covering the very early Version: 0.2. First, my bias I am a huge vore fan. I love seeing all different kinds of creatures and animals be devoured and digested. Is what originally drew me to this game Razuul as an almost Eldrich horror. Was fun seeing the artwork of the MC with her great body be dressed up in sexy dresses and then possibly eaten by the player or another character. The artwork was sexy. That green dress does amazing at hiding her privates yet showing all her curves. Though if I had a suggestion, maybe do a bit more constrained vore. Really give the impression you or your avatars ate a big meal and not just a small snack. The story was what dragged it down for me. Now, you play as a near immortal being where you can have any kind of fun you want with the female character Faja. This is good as it gives the player a choice on what events transpire. The problem is I did not care about Faja’s struggle to defeat the ‘eldritch horror.’ The story tells me at the start Faja does this because of pride as she wants to vanquish the ‘great evil.’ Yet I am just scratching my head wondering what ‘great evil?’ Did you open a hole in the earth and swallow a village? Did you taunt the leaders on the surface with how great you are? Do you lure people down with false treasure for your amusement? Do the leaders on the surface know about an ancient treasure you guard that can grant eternal life? I have no clue if there are any stakes in this story. The vagueness of the MC’s past can remain a mystery but there needs to be something why people consider you evil and sent their champion down. Saying ‘the prophecy’ just sounds lazy. Maybe political forces tricked her into going down because they hated her bossy personality.

The game is still in its very early stages, but it's looking out to be pretty good! It's a Visual Novel with various routes and kinks, and somewhat of a focus on Vore. The main gal is a proud Muscle Girl, best girl type, especially for Mind Break and femsub, all tags that are pretty lacking in the game atm sadly, so I hope it gets more development in that direction as well in the future...