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This game is ... Good but flawed, there's a lot of text but the better writting than the average NTR VN easily compensate for it as well as the good art. The game isn't finished yet and i suppose there could be some changes, additionaly those kind of NTR can be called finished with both POV, so far we only get the POV of the husband. The scenario hold itself and there aren't story ruining plot holes (well except the ending) and the characters are plausible. There are some smart scenaristic decision and twist especially because it plays with your expectation of a NTR VN. There's also a lot of foreshadowing and subtle details here and there that make the story work. [This section contains spoilers and may ruin the story] So the problem i have with this VN is I want to say this game is different than the average mediocre NTR VN but at the same time the mc is a bad lover to its wife, he has no stamina in and outside of bed, micropenis, terrible and selfish sexual partner while the antagonist is athletic, rich, hung like a horse (i don't mind cock sizes just the trope of size difference in NTR becoming overused) and can satisfy the mc's woman. In the V0.4.0, the ending of the mc's POV doesn't work, the antagonist sleeps with the mc's wife and streams it live to the mc to cuckold him and the mc jerks off to it ! The whole game the mc is frustrated and infuriated about knowing his wife is cheating on him and even beat the shit out of his best friend for it because he can't control his anger, this is out of character, while the mc is unathletic he's not a cuck and that's a big plus for a NTR VN. Additionaly, during that sex scene, the wife turns into the average negative IQ doujin slut, that throws morals out of the window over sex. The reason the wife sleeps with the antagonist is because the mc used to bully him at school. That's not a bad idea on its own, it shows that the wife married someone despicable and doesn't know too well, a mistake but realistically she would just dump the mc at worst not sleep with a stranger that tells her he was bullying him, and only around the end does the mc mention the bullying in front of his wife, important because then it would just be the antagonist's word. THOUGH, i will give this game the benefit of the doubt as we do not see how the antagonist seduce the mc's wife which won't be hard as the couple of the mc is in decline. My real complaint with this game is the ending that has some good in it but mostly ruins the buildup of the whole VN all the work put in writing and the mc having a micropenis and being unhealthy compared to the antagonist. Fixing the ending but also the mc could be good, for instance he could be well built and have a big cock or even average, it wouldn't change the story as much and I think it would deviate from the overused NTR trope and elevate this game, sex isn't just about cock size, the antagonist can make the mc's wife feel valuable and wanted while the mc is selfish and takes his wife for granted. Following the meta of a NTR game you character is normal built while the antagonist is athletic and you immediately know who's who, making the antagonist wear loose clothing would help hide it in my opinion. I rate this game 4 star because in my opinion it's closer to a 4 than a 3, it has good writing and potential, still, i am worried about the writing for the wife POV following the ending of the mc's POV.

to be honest the game was so good quality that made me cry (for real irl) despite not being complet yet, the history is well made but... it doesnt have the wife pov yet and the ending of the current version was so disapointing, without spoilers, if the game had ended before the hentai absurd plot it would have been 5 stars

honestly, this game is awesome so far. It is based on the most important foundation, "suspicion". It really excited me while playing. The story is more important than anything. Your clothing choices are very nice, as in the previous game. I advise you to stick to real life and not immediately eliminate the mystery I really like that the wife wears slutty clothes and changes over time, especially tights and mini skirts, but this was a bit exaggerated in the last game. Especially in office clothes . It was obvious that she was cheating in some scenes. I think this could be made a bit more realistic. Let's not make our main character look too stupid. Instead, let the girl be devilishly smart. This will excite the players more. Although I like Netorare games, I love that there is an escape plan in these games and another way to save the main character or take revenge. This gives the opportunity to experience both ways. I am eagerly waiting for your update.