Totally Planned Landing

It has really good potential! Even though it's just the prologue, already so many character lines are outlined! The characters seem pretty diverse as well - they vary from shy, to cocky, to downright insane. I appreciate games with a stat system that's not just chaste/lewdity. Already in the prologue the character's power/cool/smarts can influence the outcomes of certain events. The player can also choose their background (affects certain character interactions) and their "personality" (that adds additional dialogue options). It's a really solid base for a game, I'm curious to see how the relationships will play out, as well as the credit system. Keep it up! <3

It looks quite good, the writing is nice and the customization is good too, could use more colors or choices but overall its great, my only problem is, why is the demo so short!! I need more!! Im excited to see the development of this game and although parts of it is AI, i somewhat dont mind it at all, i like how its stylized, plus i give AI a pass on pixel stuff since pixel style is quite similar no matter which artist or medium it is from.

Few updates and this game rocks ! I like the customization option and all the choice you can make around specific NPC 's. On top of that an HTML game with sound effects & music. I hope it will get more updates.

Loved it. Yes just an intro for now, hence some low ratings, but the character creation options are nice and actually referenced in the story. Good writing, interesting characters. Hope this continues being expanded, really promising start from someone who seems to be producing quality work.

Honestly, most of the reviews here are weird like, they are so extremist, the game is not plain bad (specially for a 0.1 or a demo in other words) but not perfect either with certainly grammar things due to IA but well oh well, lets see the good things... The good: Nicely customizable female MC, its not a extreme customization but good enough to feel a nice character branch with replayability at future trying other beginnings and body types, the story feels nice too, sci-fi its always a good theme for monster sex (I hope), so thats a plus for me, and other characters are unique and nice to see. The bad: Grammar with IA and some text decisions, with Ia is mostly some parts of the text as other reviews have said that you can tell it was made with IA possibly without human supervision but its not really the end of the world for that, the thing that mostly annoys me is that there is text thats describes the scenes are connect with others that could advance in automatic instead of manually clicking for each paragraph that is not part of a conversation (I mean dialogue) So yeah, the game is not bad, its really just an introduction at the moment, Its a shame that it doesnt have any sex yet since its the most important part of a sex game, I really hope to see some good things on the next version and see if this game stays up or it goes down bad on the sex part and maybe even story decisions.

Content currently is surprisingly enjoyable, even though it is definitely very unfinished. Reactivity to your character's appearance and whatnot is nice. I understand a lot of the content is AI-generated, but it's of a decent enough quality that it still makes the game quite pleasant. I am very eager to see more.

There is no game as of now so not sure why upload it at all in this state, ai cg + a bunch of text, nothing interesting happes so it fails as a demo as well, character creation is very basic as well..

Gets points for a charming art style and a decent amount of customizability to start with. Loses a lot more points for AI generating most of the text. I don't get why developers just don't seem to understand this; if your game is mostly text-based, the main thing that players have to engage with is the text. And if that text often includes tired, nothing phrases like "sour tang of broken dreams", "no joke in her eyes this time", "Stars streak past in long, lazy arcs", " Torres lets out a short breath that's almost a laugh", etc etc and everything is always humming and flickering then it gets really exhausting to read really fast. And you just start skipping through all the text and what do you know the game is over in 3 minutes and has failed to leave any impression besides: I wish that was worth reading. I promise you devs, however bad you think your own writing would be, it's better than this. Stop sabotaging your games like this. It doesn't really even save time, clearly you're reading over all this generated slop at least once and taking the time to tweak and regenerate it or it would be worse. Just use that time to write it yourselves.

Not a bad start in the slightest. Good pacing and the art does a good job of setting the tone for the setting. My main issues currently are the per-sentence clicking. I don't see why it couldn't be a paragraph displayed per click instead. And the blatant AI text throughout the whole thing, which also puts the art's origin into question, but I'm willing to give it the benefit of doubt. At the very least author the generated text so that it doesn't scream AI. "Whatever he's looking for, he seems to find it, or to stop caring." "A mass that smells like engine grease and deep-fried something." "The air inside is thick with stale coffee and the sour tang of broken dreams."

(Version 0.1.) Great start! Can't wait for more! The text is clearly well trimmed with excellent pacing. Instead of massive walls of text saying little that isn't filler droning on and on, the pacing and number of actions/choices vs. time feels just right. The choices & customization options really do have an effect on how ppl react! And the little pixel graphics work fantastically in bringing that immersion! As of v 0.1 it's still very short, but manages to set an excellent atmosphere and some interesting characters to look forward to getting more of in the future. For the story itself, it's far too early to tell.

Look good, we can accelerate the text, multiples choices, character customisation is good but simple ( i would like to change the skin color at least ). The dialogue are engaging and easy to immerse yourself. No lore dumping, just some phrase and you go discover it by playing a little. only a prologue for now but i expect a lot. Not much in sex scene for now, like i said just the prologue for now.

Really good art style and setting! I've been waiting for a good game like this. I'm definitely interested to see what's to come in future development. It would be nice to have a feature to rewind or scroll back to previous passages

Good start. I appreciate that the game seems to allow us to decide our own path to a degree, and the types of relationships out character is able to have through the game. Looking forward to seeing where this goes in later releases. Goodspeed, Dev.