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The visuals are pretty good, but unfortunately I found the writing to be a pretty big weakness. A lot of the conversations were hard to follow and sometimes felt like they didn't really have much of a point. The game also jumps between different characters quite a bit, often without really explaining who they are, why they're important, or what they're even talking about. There were quite a few scenes where characters were talking about people, events, or situations that I had little to no context for, so I was often left wondering what was actually going on or why any of it was important. I also found the MC's relationships with some of the love interests pretty odd. There suppose to be some kind of history between them. However, it's left so vague that I wasn't really sure what had happened. It feels like there's supposed to be some emotional weight behind these relationships, but the game doesn't explain or develop them well enough for that to really come across. Overall, while the visuals are decent, I had a hard time staying engaged with the story because the writing left me confused or bored more often than interested. I think the game would benefit from clearer character introductions, more coherent conversations, better context for what's happening, and more development of the relationships between the characters.

Great first impression. Everything's look good so far. Well written characters, great chemistry, nice song selections, and beautiful renders and visuals. It's an excellent start. I'd definitely be keeping an eye on this one.

VERSION: Ch.1 v0.1 REVIEW STATUS: PENDING, INITIAL , FINAL REVIEW DATE: 14/08/2026 NOTE: The following categories and scoring criteria are my own, which may require more context provided in the Comment section below. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. I may update my review later as indicated by the change Version. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐ Character Development(Persona).... : ⭐⭐ Story, Plot, Premise...............: ⭐⭐⭐ Dialogue.......................... : ⭐⭐ Writing, Spelling & Grammar....... : ⭐⭐ User Interface & Experience (UI/UX): ⭐⭐ Game-play/Style & Mechanics....... : ⭐⭐⭐ Play-time & Pacing.................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Audio (Music & Sounds).............: ⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content (quality & frequency): ⭐ Kinks & Fetishes (Variety)........ : ⭐ Bugs, Reference, Script Issues etc,: ⭐⭐⭐ Average: 36 of 70 possible points giving a 51.4% rating i.e. 2.5 stars. COMMENTS PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Character models are good looking, good textures and decent renders, models are well proportioned. World visuals are generally good and designed well even if used before assets. Nice subtle visual changes like facial changes, eyes closing are good details. Some audio, fairly decent, but not a whole lot of it to create the needed immersion, but what's there is good. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. Grammar is one of the first things I picked up on, there are many issues that need to be revised. Dialogue is poorly constructed, scenes are poorly narrated and much of it almost reads like some AI slop. Scenes need better prep, context to understand what is going on, where and when a scene is taking place. Driving of the plot including the character dialogue is just a incoherent mess. The player has little to no context Per above point, dialogue is nonsensical, the character are not expressing themselves correctly, fumble their words and meaning to create a confusing mess. Several scenes have a hazy effect to them, blurry, almost like something you'd expect from a dream scene, especially your scenes with several light sources. Broken naming reference, the MC name being changed doesn't follow through in many scenes...other convos like Lilian and Kayla at the pool, names being swapped around. Hell even the timelines are fucked up! TOO MANY CHARACTERS! Too many are introduced too quickly, and many look the same or similar, you add the jumping around from one scene to the next and you have a glorious fuckup to read. Plot is a failed mess of "try-hard" intrigue and tries to create some mystery that does little but frustrate the reader. OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS: NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) Spoiler: Comments & Context Flipping/jumping around from scene to scene, character to character, past and present, without context and without concluding previous scenes in ways that make it easier to follow are making this a hell of a frustrating read...This does not just apply to time-frames, but also within the same context, the dev would bounce between characters, the MC would be sitting talking to Luna then all of sudden the next scene he is standing and talking to Nadine. This inconsistent mess feels like the developer created scene frameworks but then just released the project without the filler/contextual scenes needed to give it a natural flow and cohesion...WHAT A SAD STATE OF AFFAIRS this AVN turned out to be as a result of it. The dialogue is by far the worst part of this AVN, clearly English is not the developers strong suit or native language as the dialogue is strung together very poorly and its hard to gleam meaning from the scenes which leave the conversations feeling really awkward. This is especially true, when the reader has no context for ANY of what is being said or not said creating a poor dialogue which is technically pointless words without said contexts... The MCs face, one that has been used in other AVNs...has dark shadows and blemishes, almost like trauma, and really doesn't fit the protagonist, a sickly character or antagonist could use that kind of face...its especially odd on a child where they are usually up beat and full of life. The naming of the MC not reflecting in the dialogue, added with characters names being mixed up during conversations, then you have all the other dialogue and plot inconsistencies, makes for a very shitty reading experience and one that could easily have been corrected if the dev just proof read their work! The developer failed miserably throwing all the characters at the player, especially without ANY context and also within this first chapter/intro. Many did not need to be introduced and the player wont remember half of them even half way through the AVNs production. This, added with all the other issues of dialogue and poor plot development, just screws this AVN so much harder and makes it less enjoyable, which is equally annoying and tragic as this AVN has/had potential. The developer throws scenes together but nothing progresses, the MC doesn't commit, put himself out there and people that knew him skirt around him all the time despite their feelings. This only leads to creating on frustrating and infuriating plot, that is so transparent and obvious, and only serves to annoy the reader who is 10 steps ahead, waiting for the dev to catch up. You can liken this AVN to Summers Gone, there are many similarities, its just not such a polished products as SG. The MC is a copy and paste in a way as is the "try-hard" mysterious, stoic character trope that has been used ad infinitum oh and the characters with different eye colour...FML...the originality. Still decent enough and if its development time is 2-3x faster than SG it will be a win probably. SUMMARY (TLDR) : A good looking game that has an exceptionally poor dialogue, narrative structure and its story is told erratically. Reading it is confusing and due to several issues with the dialogue, time-frames, characters, character naming, missing references, scene transitions, it makes for an awkward reading experiences that doesn't flow naturally leaving the player unsatisfied. Several other issues, like inconsistent visuals, haziness in several scenes when the previous had none. Overall a decent AVN but sadly a lot of quality control issues, the dev did not revise and clean up the scenes, dialogue being the worst and various other issues, which should not have been left in this final first product. Short, no lewd content or any animations, nothing here but inconsistent and incoherent dialogue with obscured plot that buries the lead every 5min in its desperate attempt to create intrigue and only succeeding in creating reader frustration.

Definite potential here. Gorgeous renders and intriguing story so far. Music is pretty decent. Game jumps right into it with the first chapter and how the world (city) operates and we are getting hints to the overall picture. The writing does need some proof reading and shape up but I do have hope it will improve/fixed in the coming days. Overall, excited for the coming chapters and see where this goes. Worth keeping an eye out for!

Visually appealing , good storyline and it intriguing enough and i really was reading every singe line so not boring at all . We dont have much info on the backstory between mc and characters since its the initial release . Really looking forward to how story progresses

Great potential. Can't wait to see where this goes. My first time rating but the story and characters are all interesting. Love the music as well. Gonna be keeping an eye on this one. Only issue is that in certain scenes despite naming the mc they still refer to him as Ollie. Don't know if that's intentional but still enjoyed regardless.

Renders are decent, don't love the gray/dusty overlay feeling to them however. Characters seem interesting, but is MC the only dude here? The plot is where this one loses me. Another college AVN with MC having weird family and the avn is tied to organized crime & corruption. Yawn I've heard this one before a million times. I felt I was playing similar AVN's already Hard to follow who is friends/related to who MC keeps being referred to as "ollie" despite me setting MC's name to something else. Super frustrating and annoying in my opinion here that the AVN cannot even get this right I can't give more than 3 stars at this moment in time, I feel like this has the potential to be 4 stars but we're not there yet. Will revisit after the 2nd chapter

Excellent first outing. Graphics are clean and all the models are beautiful. I can see the hard work in creating custom characters. Despite a few typos and broken grammar, this was an entirely enjoyable first chapter. Looking forward to great things from this series.

Perfect depth, characters, story ambiance. But in my opinion only problem is colour, all renders so bright like some dust in my screen. If the lighting settings in DAZ3D/Blender return to normal, this game could become extremely popular within 2-3 years, like other masterpieces; it shows great promise.