Wife on a Work Trip
by DigitalArtNovel
Here is a special interactive novel that I've been working on for the past few months in my free time. I'm not sure if this format will become a big part of my future work yet, but you can think of this as a test! Synopsis: Rachel has to go to a new city for a work weekend and this is the moment her husband decides to push her to explore a little and discover new kinks. This is a hotwife story.
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v1.0 Demo Release
The action to lewd ratio is totally fucked. There is no reason to make me click every response the husband makes from a dialogue menu, especially when there is almost always ONE choice. We should only be clicking from a menu when we have options. Completely negates Renpy's SKIP feature as dialogue loads one line per choice. Why am I waiting for a little ellipse before every line the wife makes? Is this supposed to be realism? I have a fucking life. Don't waste my time putting "..." in front of every single line. Just put the goddamn line on the screen. Why is the screen so completely empty of anything to look at? That huge empty space on the left could have the most recent picture from wife so we have at least something to look at. Boring as fuck. Where is the Visual in this Visual Novel? Husband talks like a girl. Maybe it's this authors interpretation of a cuck, but this dude is femme as fuck. Emojis every sentence, "yass queen" emotional validation, no personality outside of worshiping her while being horny. If we were doing that, he should at least have less to say. IDGAF about how cute it is that she looses her phone charger all the time. Real version and Toon version could just be a toggle in the menu instead of separate downloads. Toon version is just a chinese face filter over the pictures from real version. Odd to have AI real version and then put that through a face filter instead of just making a new thing entirely. Any of these phone interface games that simulate waiting for partner text should be a fucking crime. Stop wasting your players time. If you want to live your fantasy love life, go write in your fucking dream journal. If you want to make a product for a customer, and then ask for money, you better respect them.
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