Altered Vision
by Caretaker Publishing
2DCG
AI CG
Blackmail
Censored
Corruption
Female Domination
Gay
Humiliation
Incest
Male Protagonist
Masturbation
Oral Sex
RPG
Sandbox
Text Based
Transformation
Virgin
Altered Vision is a game in the spirit of Perverted Education, Censored Sight, and Secretary. It revolves around a male protagonist being manipulated by a cadre of women in his life and lead down a corrupt path of submission.
Screenshots
v0.32.0
New scenes:
- A new random event in the morning, the "spicy" version only accessible with some type of panties on.
- Interview for a position at the Strawberry Cafe. Careful what you say, it may just effect your wages!
- The long awaited Anne cuck-route date.
- Make use of numbing cream while masturbating to improve your stamina. :^)
Changes:
- Image count: 248 → 271
- Word count: 279, 249 → 302, 596
- Default names for the player and Kelly are now set at initialization, this does nothing but correct undefined calls on those variables if you happen to click on the 'Stats' screen before setting names.
- Made the mirror a bit easier for me to expand.
- Added a few images to early introduction passages.
Fixes:
- Fixed Nurse Lisa's route not advancing under some circumstances.
- Fixed the Nurse method masturbation list being a bit confusing.
- Fixed Nurse Lisa's route progress being a bit confusing in some places.
- Fixed the very broken Girlfriend Keyholder gallery scene with the witch. Now you should be able to review the previously cut, older version of the Girlfriend Keyholder path to enjoy the scenes there.
- Fixed a few broken images, and updated others.
- Added a period to a sentence missing one
- Fixed an issue where some stamp selections in the Club Domino entrance led to blank passages.
- Fixed a few instances where your panties weren't properly recognized and described.
Known issues:
- Cannot advance route with Kelly/Rin under some circumstances.
- Names input with spaces aren't properly trimmed, and can fuss with formatting.
v0.31.1
- Visit the illustrious Strawberry Cafe with Ms. Patterson, a maid cafe with particular clientele. You can access this through her at-home email tasks, or if you are up to date with her plot she will invite you to visit with her.
- Nurse Lisa has a new way to help your fertility! Speak with her and work hard on making your swimmers the best they can be.
- Nurse Lisa has a new way to 'assist' with your stamina problems. And a test once you've sufficiently improved yourself.
- ABDL: Furthering the wetting accidents, and finally receiving some 'help' with them.
Changes:
- Image count: 237 → 248
- Word count: 279, 249 → 285, 044
- Added a few images to scenes retroactively.
Fixes:
- All instances of Internet corrected to a capital, when the term is being used as a proper noun.
- Fixed an issue where an image wasn't displaying during a morning scene.
- Fixed some broken if statements, broken if statements everywhere.
- Fixed some broken dialogue tags.
- Fixed Numbing Cream scenes not being available.
- Fixed being able to progress Nurse scenes while in chastity.
Known issues:
- Cannot advance route with Kelly/Rin under some circumstances.
- Names input with spaces aren't properly trimmed, and can fuss with formatting.
- The mirror will display multiple pairs of panties being worn at once.
- Negative Sperm is possible.
v0.30.1
New scenes:
- You can now masturbate using plapping or a vibrator while using Kelly's pictures as an aid.
- Asking for a release from Ms. Patterson now leads to an assortment of tasks you perform on her behalf to earn your release. Among them is: Cleaning her flats with your tongue, sucking a dildo, the mall exposure task, and a few others.
- Deepen your friendship with Kelly and Rin by playing model for their makeup lesson.
- Alter your body at the mall's plastic surgery center. Enhance your lips, and your butt, for a girlier you.
Changes:
- Image count: 233 → 237
- Word count: 269, 575 → 279, 249
- The process of giving Anne your key has been changed. The interim scenes where you mail your key to her for a few weeks before switching to an electronic cage has been snipped. The old scenes can be reviewed if you have Anne as your keyholder at Carrie-Ann's Cards & Candles in the mall.
- Added some images to random events retroactively.
Fixes:
- Fixed an issue where players could amass a hoard of panties.
- Fixed some broken dialogue tags.
- Fixed a few passages trapping the player.
- Fixed a few grammatical errors.
v0.29.0
New scenes:
- Getting the handjob favor from Kelly now unlocks the option to get a prostate massage from her for $200.
- Asking Ms. Patterson to be your keyholder now leads to an unlocking event featuring risky exhibitionism and crossdressing.
- Visit the sexy 'Club Domino' with Sabrina and see where JB used to work, and where you can get a new job...
- Meet Anne/your girlfriend in person for the first time and go on your first, real, IRL date!
- Several new 'random event' scenes have been added to the morning pool, including: a policewoman and suspect experiencing a cultural exchange, a pair of prankster skirt-flippers and pantsers, texts from Oliver, and coffee with Mom.
- 'Just some chatting, video games and chilling!' with Anne/your girlfriend has been changed to a SMALL pool of 'random event' scenes that will be expanded on. Currently there are only two scenes, but this will be expanded later to offer a more spontaneous, less linear, mode of interacting with her.
Changes:
- Image count: 205 → 233
- Word count: 252,466 → 269,575
- Converted some PNGs to JPGs to save on filesave without loss of quality.
- Tribute required to earn Kelly's trust for the exchange student storyline reduced from 3000 to 2000.
- Ms. Patterson now recognizes if the played masturbates to IR during your first week of observation, this is a small reimplementation of a previously removed line.
- Updated Rin's introductory image and dialogue portrait.
- Implemented a way to check the player's underwear type and source in a convenient way, opening the chance for more diverse reactions.
- Many previous scenes have been given updated imagery, or had imagery added to them.
Fixes:
- Fixed a few images being poorly formated on mobile.
- Fixed Anne's car arc not properly starting.
- Fixed an issue where ordering Chinese food caused the player to make soup.
- Fixed an issue with worn underwear not being properly recognized.
- Fixed an issue with formatting in a few passages.
- Fixed a variety of grammatical or spelling errors. Especially within the Kelly/Rin side path!
- These problems pointed out to me by the many members of the discord. Thank you!
Known issues:
- Due to poor programming from our lead dev, some players experienced a bug where they were able to go into the negative when donating to Anne's car fund. Don't worry, this won't ruin your save. When you go to contribute to her next, just try to give her more. This will throw up a message that you can't do that, and the proper continue passage where Anne recognizes you've helped her pay the final portion.
v0.28.0
New scenes:
- Handle Mom interrupting your livestream and leverage her appearance for more views or shoo her off.
- Meet an alumni of Ms. Patterson's training.
- Test your mental fortitude against the power of Ms. Highwood's post workday feet.
- Take a pay cut on behalf of Sabrina, or discover a new place to work for more cash.
- Help your girlfriend pay off her new car! Careful, if you've let her get friendly with other people, you might have competition.
- Hang out with Mom on the couch, and have her comment on your penis size.
- Compare Moms with Oliver, and maybe touch his pinkie with your pinkie.
Changes:
- 22 New images, including updates to old portraits and scenes, additions to old scenes, and new scenes.
- Word count: 252,466
Fixes:
- A variety of grammar problems pointed out to me by the many members of the discord. Thank you!
Known issues:
- I don't know yet, you tell me.
v0.27.0
New scenes:
- Visit Sabrina, having to share her attention with JB.
- Get your first instructions from Ms. Patterson on how to properly pleasure a woman.
- Get your first bodily alteration courtesy of Ms. Patterson.
- Try out the vibrator on yourself with your Mom's socks and panties.
- Try out the vibrator and plapping on yourself while enjoying IR. (Requires Sabrina route progress).
- Talk to Ms. Patterson about how it feels to be cuckolded (requires NTR route).
- Mom now has a little something to say every time you alter your hair color or length. Reaction changes based on if the "daughter route" has been selected with her.
Changes:
- Images replaced for more cohesive character representation. This is a work in progress.
- There are new chances to spend time with characters normally relegated to the weekend only. On Thursdays, you can see Sabrina if you take a work shift. On Tuesday, and Wednesday, you can spend quality time with your girlfriend.
- Players can now learn about and access plapping with Ms. Patterson.
Fixes:
- Fixed an error when looking in the mirror where the state of your chest/bra garment is doubled.
- Fixed an error when looking in the mirror involving an out of place <nobr></nobr>.
- Fixed a missing image with a Kelly passage.
- Fixed an issue where it wasn't clear you had purchased the long-distance cage for the Anne keyholding route.
- Some wonky grammar issues fixed.
- Fixed an issue with improper variables for checking dildo ownership.
- Game versions will now use proper update annotation. 0.V.U, numbers in the U's place will be for marking hotfixes and changes inbetween versions.
Known issues:
- There is a method for grinding infinite money at the start very easily. It's being left as is for now.
- While looking at porn opening the image link and then checking your stats, then pressing return, you can loop the process to farm corruption. This is being left in for now, if people wish to grind up corruption.
- Wearing panties doesn't always take into account their proper source when describing them.
v0.26.10
New scenes:
- Visit the local wiccan girl at the mall to have your fortune read, giving you insight into your progress with storylines and how far you are from seeing all outcomes relying on stats.
- Visit the hair dresser to change the color of your hair. These changes can be observed in the mirror at home.
- Purchase a vibrator to try and relieve yourself during your time in chastity.
- Purchse a dildo to 'plap' with.
- Visit your mirror at home to change clothes and inspect your body.
Changes:
- Images replaced for more cohesive character representation. This is a work in progress.
Fixes:
- Minor fixes whispered to me by needy little helpers. Thank you everyone who helps seek out bugs!
Known issues:
- When examining your chest in the mirror, it appears twice.
- When examing your hair in the mirror, there is a misplaced '<nobr></nobr>'.
- The image for your chastity cage in the mirror is low res/low quality.
v0.25.10
New scenes:
- Enjoy a visit to Kelly's home alongside Rin. Nothing is better than an afternoon hangout with friends, right?
- Make sure your swimmers are swimming right with Nurse Lisa. This can be done once you're eligible to assist her sex ed presentation.
- Another run-in with Officer Baker at the metal detector, but only under inauspicious circumstances.
- Two new morning scenes with.
- A new scene with your girlfriend, Anne, with changes depending on if she's your keyholder or not.
- A new hangout with Oliver involving plundering a forbidden room in his home. To access this, participate in the measuring contest with Oliver. Next time you hang out, you will get the new scene.
Changes:
- Some images changed, creating a more cohesive character appearance.
Fixes:
- Some images optimized for smaller filesize without loss of quality. Modern game dev W?
- Some dialogue branches didn't advance the girlfriend route, leaving only one particular choice that would lead to her being a keyholder. This has been fixed.
Known issues:
- There is a method for grinding infinite money at the start very easily. It's being left as is for now.
- While looking at porn opening the image link and then checking your stats, then pressing return, you can loop the process to farm corruption. This is being left in for now, if people wish to grind up corruption.
- Wearing panties doesn't always take into account their proper source when describing them.
v0.24.10
New scenes:
- Visit the arcades with Oliver.
- A surprise release demand from your girlfriend, which leads to a looping and open-ended chastity cycle.
- Meet with Kelly and Rin again, to get a taste of what she'll be doing to you.
- Visit Sabrina for two new scenes. Including one where she gives you a crash course on how it feels to be in her position. And, another where you buy a subscription to a familiar website. With the option to make a free account for either Mom or Anne.
- An exceptionally long visit to the mall with Mom and Kelly, with a variety of endings and alternate paths. Major splits include chastity or free, getting into Kelly's debt or not, and if you or Mom pay the debt off.
Fixes:
- Some minor fixes to spelling and dialogue tags within the dinner date with Mom.
Known issues:
- There is a method for grinding infinite money at the start very easily. It's being left as is for now.
- While looking at porn opening the image link and then checking your stats, then pressing return, you can loop the process to farm corruption. This is being left in for now, if people wish to grind up corruption.
v0.23.10
New scenes:
- Meet with Ms. Highwood and get a closer look at what she's got, and offer your face up as a cum rag.
- Meet with Ms. Highwood and give her a look at what you've got in return.
- Visit Oliver and practicing kissing, and measuring who's longer.
- Get surprised by Sabrina visiting unexpectedly, with a treat for you.
- Purchase a more convenient method of keyholding for Anne.
Changes:
- Some portions of the Nurse's scenes updated to include the player voted name, Lisa.
Fixes:
- Fixed an issue with buying lipstick and panties from the mall.
- Fixed an issue with GF keyholding leading to a no choice passage.
- Fixed an issue with being referred to as in chastity when free during a Sabrina scene.
- Fixed an issue with being referred to as free when in chastity during a masturbation scene.
- Added some dialogue tags to Nurse and Therapist scenes where it was missing.
Known issues:
- There is a method for grinding infinite money at the start very easily. It's being left as is for now.
- While looking at porn opening the image link and then checking your stats, then pressing return, you can loop the process to farm corruption. This is being left in for now, if people wish to grind up corruption.
v0.22.10
New scenes:
- New livestreaming stage with an offer from an anonymous source. Multiple pathways to solving the issue.
- Two new options for a chastity release with Mom, including a fancy date and ballbusting toiletsex.
- Help Kelly get some revenge on a rival. This is only the start of her payback.
- Visit the mall and purchase a few small things. (Panties and Lipstick - to be expanded later.)
- Visit the mall to see a locksmith after you've been put in chastity. (To be expanded later.)
Changes:
- Asking Mom for a release now properly restarts your weekly cycle. If you ask for a release, you'll need to wait a new 7 days before you can ask again.
- Fixer in the closet has been depreciated in favor of an actual fix.
Fixes:
- Old saves now have a system for being brought up to date with new variables.
- Many small grammar and spelling errors.
- Fixed an issue in Sabrina's 8th scene with descriptions mentioning a cage when not in chastity.
- Fixed bully's photos being inaccessible when using the Nurse's method. Both tiers have unique text now.
- Fixed being unable to access IR porn for Sabrina while using the Nurse's method. Both tiers have unique text now.
- Added some missing dialogue tags to Ms. Patterson scenes.
Known issues:
- There is a method for grinding infinite money at the start very easily. It's being left as is for now.
- While looking at porn opening the image link and then checking your stats, then pressing return, you can loop the process to farm corruption. This is being left in for now, if people wish to grind up corruption.
v0.21.9
New scenes:
- Two new Sabrina hangouts, with over 25 passages of content.
- Hang out with Sabrina and learn about plapping, and meet her FWB.
- Help the nurse during a sex ed class.
- Speak with Ms. Patterson about your opinion on censors, and recieve a reward or punishment.
Fixes:
- Many small issues with formating, spelling, etc. Thank you to all who help with that!
- Fix for GF chastity release issues. There is now an extra two items in the fixer closet to help with this and to preempt issues with the new Sabrina business.
- Corruption gain added to nearly every action that degrades your selfworth or indulges your desires.
Known issues:
- While looking at porn opening the image link and then checking your stats, then pressing return, you can loop the process to farm corruption. This is being left in for now, if people wish to grind up corruption.
v0.20.9
New scenes:
- Next Therapist scene, this allows you access to Ms. Highwood, the math teacher with more than a ruler to swing around.
- Mom scene including a shopping spree paid by you, and a try-on afterward.
- Mom scene involving a trip to the mall and a dress up, this requires having gone to the beach as a girl.
- Buying a pair of Kelly's used panties for your own.
- Question Ms. Patterson about a variety of topics, including selecting a keyholder.
- Select a potential keyholder from between your girlfriend and Mom. (Others to be added later - selecting a keyholder is currently permanent, do so with caution).
- Petition for a release with your keyholder.
- Perform tasks to earn a release with your keyholder.
- Get your keysnapped by your girlfriend for disobedience.
- Meet with Ms. Highwood and probe her about her secret features.
- Find out what Ms. Highwood can do to leverage you.
Fixes:
- Sabrina's route no longer links to a dead passage.
- Amended an issue that had new saves starting at the end of Sabrina's route.
- Many small issues with grammar, spelling and verbage.
- Potential fix for issues with Oliver route.
- Potential fix for persistent issues with Nurse method variables needing the fixer passage, even with new saves.
v0.18.8
New scenes:
- Several Nurse scene.
- Several Therapist scenes.
- New masturbation options with PE alts.
- Therapist allows access to your remaining chastity key(s) - giving you the choice to lock yourself.
- New Mom event, with multiple outcomes.
- Have Mom observe your masturbation.
- Several Sabrina events.
- New character to visit during lunch, requires being up to date with therapist story.
- New video games/livestream events.
- Gyaru cbt wallet drain session.
- Alternate chastity path for the gyaru handjob scene, including alt. text for stamina and if you bring an extra $200.
- Masturbate to gf's pictures if you get them, including alt text for Nurse method masturbation.
- Second Mom footrub scene with new options for being in chastity and low stamina.
- THE GOOD END, minor amusing alt-ending for willpower options at the start. Though this ending was added as a meme, it does have some fleshed out (if short) ideas, and running through them provides a starting money bonus.
Changes:
- Beach scene placed behind requirements (this is to offer a greater sense of progression by gating it, and the girly clothing option, behind progress elsewhere.)
- Corrected Therapist's mention of blackmail when taking the willpower options in the intro.
- Added a nurse method toggle, this is accessible in the 'stats' screen.
- Added nurse method use of all gyaru pictures.
- Optional, crueler GF reaction added to last update's gf event.
- Stamina alt text added to Mom handjob morning event.
Fixes:
- Jerking off to feet and armpits using the nurse method **should** now count for Ms. Patterson's demands, likewise, if you have pictures of Kelly's feet and armpits, these will also count.
- Fixed an issue where the bully's wedgie scene was not changing based on undergarment.
- Fixed an issue with the bully's wedgie scene not being accessible.
Known issues:
- Completing the Nurse route and reducing your stamina entirely makes it impossible to use her method to masturbate.
v0.15.6
New scenes:
New random event with the gyaru involving a wedgie, alternate text depending on underwear.
New Mom scene involving being dressed up by her, with alt. text for stamina and starting underwear.
New **long** Mom scene involving a trip to the beach, different routes, and different scenes based on tributes to the gyaru, stamina, chastity.
New gf scene involving (and requiring) chastity. This scene can change if you have a positive disposition toward the goth, Sabrina.
Changes:
It now takes only $200 of tribute to access the gyaru's secret menu. I felt the previous barrier of entry was too high.
Fixes:
Fixed a blunderous mention of a bra by therapist.
Arriving to the therapist without panties on the required day now has an effect, albeit minor. This is just to allow me to expand it later.
Fixed several issues with missing dialogue boxes.
Fixed an issue where masturbating to NTR while caged mentions an orgasm.
v0.14.5
New scenes:
Goth girl when working on weekends.
New girlfriend scene.
Three new 'spend time with her' gyaru scenes. Including a low stamina event.
Changes:
After school now has 2 "time slots". Some activities can only be done in the afternoon or evening.
Dialogue boxes for every character to help distinguish text and add some visual flair.
Replaced inferior double hyphen with superior em dash for abruptly silenced thoughts, dialogue and other such things.
The first time the therapist pushes chastity on you, you can now properly decline - with variation depending on corruption and other states.
Favicon added.
Some repeatable therapist activities can now be accessed for cash.
Grammar and bugs:
Variety of typos and errors fixed. Thank you all who report them.
v0.13.5
New scenes:
New morning event with a special portion if you're in chastity. (Properly implemented.)
Two extensive new gyaru activities to pay her for, one involving a ""handjob"" and the other involving a surprise.
New girlfriend scene for both routes.
New Therapist stage, with a very special treat if you obey her, and a special penalty if you don't. (And alternate text for low stamina players.)
New Mom weekend scene. (And alternate text for low stamina players.)
Several new images.
Changes:
Weekend wages lifted from 50 to 100. Inflation is real. For more info, google r34 inflation.
Gyaru 'hang out and pay' amounts reduced to 40 or if you have less than 40, your whole wallet. This will allow players to build up and save money instead of having it wiped out entirely when using this option.
Implemented simple wardrobe system. Now you change your underwear from a menu in your room, rather than selecting it before bed. You can double-check what underwear you're wearing from the 'character' page.
Low stamina alt. text added to morning bus event.
Implemented numbered hotkeys for options.
Grammar and bugs:
Variety of typos and errors fixed. Thank you all who report them.
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KRAKENFILES
For a game about censorship, there is very little focus on the censorship fetish, instead there is more focus on interracial, cuckoldery, sissification, et cetera. Each character has absolutely no relation to the other, and so the story is constantly being bifurcated into different routes, which would be fine if it wasn't for that fact that each route abruptly ends or gets into a loop with the same content being rehashed. The game also has very very little "CG" or hentai, whatever it should be called in a html game. And all that there is is AI... I was very disappointed and annoyed by this game.
Definitely one of the better games out there for it's tags. The story flows well and for me at least doesn't leave out anything to be desired, that's to say that every thought I had about a certain scenario was explored and didn't leave anything to be desired. Aswell as having a fair ammount of content even so early into it's development. The discord is also really nice as there are a lot op active members to talk about the routes of the game aswell as having really nice extra channels Theres even a bug-report page which makes the game have basically no bugs that I found, and great thing is that any bugs are fixed by the creator and you're get a response from them super quickly! I would really recommend this game if the tags are to your liking and even if they aren't you still should, as the options are quite varied! I can't wait for it to be updated and hope it gets the support it deserves!
Altered Vision is a text game where a group of women use a censor implant to fuck the sexuality of the main character. They would for example only allowing him to masturbate while looking at women feet to force him to develop a foots kink. To begin with, yes the writing is very good . Not all characters are interesting, but all of them feel unique. Sadly the game have very little pictures and that can make the game a bit hard to follow. Personal note, it's bit sad that most of the scene focus on feets, there other part of women that could be use and it's not because de MC can't see some part that he can't touch or feel them . This would definitively make more variety.
It's a very good game, quite fun and well written. It plays in a very niche fetish which is censorship and does all right, so it fills a void doing something I haven't seen in other games The art is fine too, AI, but not bad, if anything there's a lot of creativity involved (and there are some gifs too which is always nice, everything looks clean), and besides that, the strength is still in the plot As right now, I consider that there's plenty of content. You can interact with a long distance gf, the therapist, a nurse, a teacher, a classmate, your bully's gf who is in every capacity a bully herself, this goth chick you met at work and mom. From all of them the mom and the goth chick might be my best, at least for me Anyway, there's a little bit for everyone, however you should remember this is first and foremost a femdom game so reading the tags should give you an idea of what you're getting into. There's ntr and is optional, and if you don't wanna do anything femdom like, you can actually finish the game by telling on the therapist and nuking her career, that's a nice detail So I'm giving it five stars
[v0.21.9] Honestly, this is some of the best writing you can find in these types of games. Even though I'm not really into some of the main kinks (findom and censoring specifically), once you get past the intro, there are lots of hot scenes left and right, and while the pacing might seem a tad fast in places, it's not too fast and I for one prefer it this way. There is a bit of a grind, and while working for money is intended to play into the findom aspect of the game, I feel like there is too much grind for the corruption stat, so far it doesn't even feel like it need to be a stat, I'd say a more simplified event based gating would work just as well (if not better). Aside from that the game is actually very click efficient. The Dev is also very open and responsive to suggestions and feedback in their Discord and it's clear they enjoy working on the project. The only real complaint I have is that development is a bit slow and that there is not enough of it! the fact that the Dev spends time on creating lots of variants for events somewhat exasperates this feeling, don't get me wrong, I appreciate the attention to detail, but I also think the scales could be pushed a bit more towards quantity over quality. Overall this is a solid game and I highly recommend playing it.
this is like the hottest sissification, ntr and femdom game i have played on this site. it's just so perfect. loved the fact that there's so many characters, the gf, the bully's gf, the therapist, the nurse, the mom. i could play this forever seriously please keep going 5/5
Finally fresh change, lot of femdom content and kinks. Considering current content i like it very much so far. I hope for more renders of what is happening, also having some choices considering how strongly you are censored (more/less pixelation, choose what parts are to be uncensored) would be nice. I guess there is no need to mention need for more content considering daily activities and even some more NPCs, as the game is continuously being updated.
Absolutely Love the game so far. There is a noticeable lack of images, but the modern femdom writing is enough to really set the stage. I really enjoy the (albeit short) nurse storyline. The censored twist is very hot and really cements the MC as a loser. loses a star due to bad sandbox flow, generally a bit of a slog to click thru pages to reach the next event. also minor nitpick the NTR route feels a little rushed and out of nowhere, there is a lot of potential with the long distance relationship/discord girlfriend stuff but as of yet it is kinda cookie cutter.
I like this little twine game. Nice indulgence into a few niche fetishes and really good scene writing. If you enjoy loser protagonist humiliation and censorship as a kink I wholeheartedly recommend Altered Vision. It isn't a big game, nor is it innovative, but it's a nice little ride as far as twine projects go. Pleasantly each character has their own main theme and fetishes, and are distinct from one another even in their behavior and choice of words. The core plot thread comes from the therapist who you are forced to meet with every week. Everything else appears to be optional and you can avoid much of the content which isn't to your tastes. There are usually warnings, both subtle and direct, when a scene could take a turn down to more controversial kinks like coerced-bi or netorare. Those warnings are accompanied by an alternative choice. Femdom is the cornerstone and is present across the whole game. Don't assume this is some dime-a-dozen half-baked glorified clip viewer like most twine games end up being. Quality smut is the real draw here, with images chosen to serve the scene rather than scenes existing purely as a vehicle to dump random porn. The images themselves are a mix of (I think?) regular old hentai art and AI generated images, which is excusable given the small scope of the project. Pictures are lightly or moderately edited in order to fit the setting and scene. Gameplay is typical of twine games. Click a choice, move to the next page. You can pick from X option during Y time slot. There's no complicated management system, the UI is simple, and what few variables there are can be undersood easily. Nothing impressive, but nothing overwhelming either. The monthly updates are consistent if not meaty. One or two new scenes, various bug fixes, and occasional rewrites to account for new or expanded features like the chastity cage. Slow and steady, the amount of new content is to be expected of smaller projects like this. The developer is active in the discord and listens to feedback.
One of my biggest problems with new HTML games I try is the lack of effort put into writing. Countless games with interesting premises and kinks that I enjoy turn out to be shit the moment I notice that there's just a few lines of dialogue each page and then you click into another scene transition. At first I thought that with this game there was the opposite problem of way too much effort put into the writing, and not in a good way. Right of the bat it seems to me like a high school essay that's trying to reach a certain word count and my eyes are just glazing over the page full of white text on a blue background. Thankfully it got better after the introduction, although I still think the writing style could be a bit more straightforward at some points. I don't think the Dev should change their writing style if this is something they enjoy, but I would recommend maybe trying to make the look of the game a bit more varied. Maybe different colour texts for dialogue, dialogue boxes or just using italics for dialogue to break the monotony. I enjoyed the actual content in the game more than I would have thought, since I'm not the biggest fan of Hentai art or the trope of starting a game with an MC that is a creepy perv obsessed with sex right of the bat. I just wish the pace was slowed down and there was more player agency in the way that the MC presents themselves. All in all the game was a pleasant surprise and I might return to check out future updates.
This is good, it can use more visuals I'd say, plus just some better formating. It's often hard to tell what people are saying, and to read the text. White on Cyan background is a sin. Nothing is really indented, nothing had Character Name: " Text " or Bold or Italics . It also felt more like a proof of concept, one that might have some merit to it at least this time. Could also use a bit of a rework since it seems a bit random what tasks your given, however that's more me just not liking the first real task given.
It's a good start. But it definitely needs more visuals. The "back story" is way to easy to skip on that first page when. You see "continue" right at the bottom. IMO it should be "continue" takes you into the backstory and "skip backstory" is the second option. The exposition dump that is the current back story could definitly be made into chapter one/chapter zero. Broken up into more pages and with a few more visuals.
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