Lost in Luminar

Great concept, reminds me mostly of that scene in Heavy Rain, except what everyone actually wanted to happen. What would really make this game shine is instead of a choice its a timer and gradually phases out the option as you run out of time to escape, resist or fight back and need to bide your time. If it were that sort of thing this game would be golden but as is I love whats here.

Decent enough start as a game. Minor choices, skill cheks, dialogoue and scene description, etc. However, it is 100% AI written. Zero authoring. Straight and blatant copy paste. Seen these exact same paragraph templates pumped out by GPT4o a million times over. And the — in every other sentence is just a dead giveaway. Wouldn't really mind it if it was at least authored a bit and good in general, but it's just awful cheesy cliché slop. “Hey, you look like you can handle a tray. VIP room at the back—don’t spill, and don’t let anyone in sunglasses distract you. Split my tips with you if you make it.” Visuals are mix of IRL and AI which, eeh. One or the other would be better because it's just an inconsistent mess otherwise.