Redemption

Terribly disjointed. Not only is the writing itself dreadful, the plot and the scenes themselves are also completely disjointed. The MC works as a furniture salesman in the year 2040 and in the first three sentences he narrates that he hates his boss. Said boss appears a second later and invites him to a nightclub, and apparently he accepts (?). There, Harmony (the blue haired woman from the OP image) appears, buys him drinks (which he apparently drinks before the bartender even hands them over...) and tells him to follow her to the bathrooms. The literal next frame the MC is already inside of her, without any buildup. The "sex" lasts three frames and then you are back to the bar, where the MC apparently has grabbed some device with a big red button from her and, in a move that proves that we are truly evolved from apes (and some throwbacks are to be expected), he pushes the red button, bringing him into the future. In the future, he is alone in an alley for a total of 1 frame before he is found by Xi Xi (the glasses-wearing girl), who basically rapes him right then and there in the alley without even less build up than Harmony. Let's just say that things did not improve from there. Simply not fit for purpose. This needs a complete rewrite from the ground up.