Scattered Divine

Honestly quite peak and I see the potential. The character models look super sexy and the humor is awesome. The references definitely show the direction the story is going to and the conflicts within the story already show a creative view of how things are going to resolve. Definitely excited to see where this story goes and the progress of the game overtime.

An uninspiring and uninteresting game that thinks it's funny when it isn't. Despite the illusion of "choices" don't kid yourself - this is a kinetic novel. Not choosing whatever the game wants you to will result in player death a shitty game over screen. There is no point to including this other than humor that isn't funny to anyone but the developer themselves (probably). The visuals are not anything great. I was taken in by the image on the main page, but don't be fooled, it looks nothing like that. I wouldn't consider the visuals anything "artistic" or "original" but boring and bland instead. If you're looking for a game with choices, great visuals, and an interesting story... look elsewhere this game is not it. I do not recommend this boring-ass, unfunny kinetic novel disguised as a game with choices.

"the greatest warriors in existence"? Yeah right, if you were planning to play a game where you play as this legendary warrior with inmense strenght and power, then youve been had. You play as a retard so powerless that he needs to have his women "tease" dry hump and basically prostitute themselves while he watches because he is that pwoerless to achieve anything himself. The vibes of this "harem, power fantasy" game is that of another kind of game, where you play as the dimwit sho watches as other NPCs have ther way with the women, the story, scenarios and dialogs as I said are retarded, just forced to have the women be used by NPCs, why? I dont know, we need those scenes for some reason, So you end up hating the retard MC, the whore women and everything about the game, I give it 2 stars only for the pretty graphics but everything else is garbage

This shit has so much potential with these renders but it is getting fucked in the ass by the story, and retarded writing and characters. Some examples: This girl who goes around just killing people with no questions asked suddenly feels like she needs to do a sexy dance for some old retard?????? Couldnt she just threaten him? Or beat him up till he complies? The whole situation makes her look like a retarded whore and the MC like a pathetic cuck who cant do shit by himself and just has to see his women "tease" another man and be his whore. Later she also sits on some other dipshit's lap, why? I dont know, because a few minutes later she just kills him outright, so why not kill him in the first place instead of sitting on his dick?? What logic is this game trying to have? Its so stupid. Are the women and the MC supposed to be mentally challenged? Do we have to assume that? Because the story doesnt seem to think that, but all the actions they take are nonsensical. If those boderline cuck scenes are supposed to make the LI shine, then no, they do the opposite, the only make the player think of them as retards and easy sluts. And the mc needs a cuck chair so he can betetr watch from the corner. Aside from the absolutely retarded scenarios I described above, and the stupid characters, there are many other problems with the writing, with jokes that dont land, and with times where it attempts to be more "serious", no bro, you cant have these retarded scenarios with a serious story, it makes the whole game feel like a mess. I will give it a 3 stars becauseI just like the visuals that much and I believe the issues it has can be easily fixed, but realistically it should be a 2 or 1, will check the next update to see if it gets better or if on the contrary, just keeps goign in this direction.

Game version: 0.1 Although this game is still in early development, one can already see the path it's taking.. and unfortunately it's not a good one. The story/ plot is okay, but the writing, pacing and humor are horribly bad. It tries to be both funny and serious at the same time, eventually failing at both. The overuse of stupid/ redundant choices is annoying, too- it also kills immersion and flow completely. The UI and overall visual quality is good, with lots of short video scenes which enhance the presentation (although I don't like these camera flights as they are too fast and "laggy" most of the time). The sound design is good, too. The "soundtrack" fits the scenario and the ambient set gives the game an additional level of immersion. All in all, it's the core of this VN that disappointed me too much to like this VN: The writing/ "humor" and the overuse of choices killed it for me.

Forced humor is awful right out of the gate, its not even remotely funny. -You genuinely get funneled into specific choices as well and when you choose the "wrong" one its attempting to be funny but in reality its just showing you what path you cant take and slamming you into the forced path. So you dont get to make choices really, theres just flavor text. - You play as a character who is going to be humiliated and dragged through the dirt the entire time. If that is an interest of yours, go for it. But its probably not. -Animations are meh. They are alright but room for improvement is there and desired. - "Game" feels a bit rushed out of development. Could use TLC on experience and overall delivery. -Tsundere tag doesnt feel right. Its Yandere cause you do actually die and lose progress if you dont choose what the "game" wants you to. - Everyone kinda got the same proportions. Variation amongst the women would be very nice.

This AVN has possible potential! Yeah i put this in tier "Possible Potential", An AVN with 3DCG Unreal engine, for first release it looks promising already, i expect more in future updates, and hopefully the dev continues this project with dedication. Story is fine for me, action and adventure with humor shaped by the main female characters! Pros: -Humor is fine funny. -Female character design looks great, they are hot, it hooks me. -Fine choregraph action scenes, i didn't expect action scenes to be animated. Cons: -UI needs update. Normal UI with render design like this does not match. Overall the game has nice promising release, i expect more content like more teasing, more daring teasing, group content, and stranger content.

VERSION: v.1.0 SUMMARY: Comical plot and theme but done fairly well. RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐ NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally , scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐ General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐ Story & Dialogue .................. : ⭐⭐ Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐ UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐ Playtime & Pacing ..................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Music & Sounds .....................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐ Average: 32 of 50 possible points giving a 64% rating i.e. 3 stars. PROS: - See my opinions section for details. Visually models look good, over the top a bit and scandalously dressed, renders are fairly good. Animation quality is also fairly good and movements flow well. Writing is structure and reads well enough so no real issue there. Audio is decent, music seems apt and environmental/ambient and interactive sounds are a good touch. CONS: - See my opinions section for details. UI/UX needs work, the UI needs a solid background, dialogue box opacity and font settings. The UI can also do with a better way to place and implement choices, right now the black bars of choices are so stark and it obscures the scene, I am sure much smaller boxes and dropping them down lowr will be fine? Contrast of holy relics, armor that is so shiny and the like, are just too bright and are really over the top. Choices seem silly and redundant, especially when the one choice is the same as the next one, in some cases the choice is entirely irrelevant, this is simply poorly planned. Models like the MC not having eyes is stupid and looks like the design was incomplete, this is sloppy. Dialogue can also do with revision, choices of words can leave much to be desired. e.g. "effortlessly engulfed all of the food" makes no sense, you could in use "inhaled all the food" to provide context, but flames engulf. While animations are fairly good some are incredibly fast and thus hardly appreciated. They can also use some polish. See Comments Some renders like models are dull, blurry and out of focus which does cause inconsistency in quality. See Comments OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS : NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't) Artifacts, armor and reflective items are no more special just because of their neon glow or mirror effect the developer can really tone that down, it actually gives me arc eyes ffs...its a middle ages setting, things were hardly shiny and pretty, they were clean but rough especially armor. MC character having black slots for eyes, when the helmet he wears clearly, historically would show his eyes are simply left dull black like the textures were never added...whats with that? This feels lazy and badly implemented, the MC doesn't need to be so obscure or mysterious? does he? Clearly a game that has some humour and does not take itself seriously. The MC being a halfwit is comical, but may frustrate some players, just keep an open mind and approach it in the light its presented. That said, the humour does feel sometimes too much and can get frustrating especially when choices get you killed and you really just want to progress the story. Choices are fairly pointless it feels, even for humour sake I can't stand having choices when the result is always the same. If its linear like the scene where the clones salve has 6 options to kill the original (MC) this could have been done with thought speech, or even something remarkable like the clone providing the MC a very complex and sophisticated response to the question that no one would have suspected he ever would, right before he lunges at the MC. At which point the MC would lob the clones head off and maybe make a retort of his own about how he hates the "clever" clones. Or something to that effect. Point is there are better ways than this to create humour, without disrupting the flow, relying on good dialogue and structure and scenes for dramatic effect etc. Animations are fairly good, a nice addition to AVN other than only in lewd scenes by having them throughout the play. There should be some more time spent on these though to make them more seamless and flow better. Often they can feel a little "flimsy" and almost cheesy. This is merely an observation and still a decent attempt, but still something that I observed. Some renders are blurry and out of focus even when some parts can be like a body, shoulders etc, at least the focus should then be on the face and that should be sharper, but its is not always the case here. Some renders feel very AI, and while I dont mind use of this tech, its not great when it feels and looks artificial and lacks the needed detail. Consistency is also at play here where some renders are good and others not, even with animations, this should be something to focus on to produce a good product overall. TLDR: An AVN that really does not take itself seriously, has some silly and cheesy humour but will appeal to people who enjoy those kinds of entertainment. The visuals are pretty good overall, animations are fairly decent too and are part of the entire AVN not only the lewd scenes, the plot is semi interesting but probably wont be very profound. The humour and choices can be a bit frustrating and be too "try hard" in its attempt to be funny, when it really only drives to annoy and deliver little if any humour in the process. Less is more is the lesson here. All in all its really not bad, has some issues it can work on and improve on though like overall quality and consistency.

There are prominent characters named Alpha and Beta. It's not obviously ironic, and it's for reasons that aren't entirely arbitrary, but the dialogue (and "comedy") is still about what you're expect to go paired with such character naming. If it doesn't sound like a fun time for every other line throughout the game being an insult or something degrading or domineering, you probably won't like this. The sex scene is ... not great. The character models themselves are great, but the animations look very clunky. The game awkwardly plays some pop song in the middle that doesn't match the tone of the scene at all, with no other sounds. And that's "scene", not "scenes". There seems to be only 1 at the moment (at least in the compressed version, if I didn't miss a path). This is barely a v0.1, not a v1.0.

Visuals are on point. The story is coherent albeit distinctly comedic. First release was a full minor Story Arc. Surprisingly good animations. Currently a very linear VN. Will takes an update before it'll be clear how development will go, but so far very promising.